I'm really glad this game exists, and it has a lot going for it. There are multiple paths with multiple, diverse love interests (all revolving around weight gain in one way or another); the renders are lovely and plentiful; and there is some hot writing for some of the love interests! The progression is well done, and it feels exciting every time there is a new weight level and associated scene and dialogue. All this is great.
On the "could be better" side, the writing is pretty inconsistent. There are a lot of typos, miscapitalizations, and awkward wordings in some of the content (especially some of the earlier content, and in the responses to feeding Daisy in the classroom).In addition, there is a lot of repetition in the core loop - you go to the school, feel Daisy a milkshake or tacos or whatever, and hold ctrl through dialogue that you've already read in multiple scenes. The Daisy feeding scenes in the school could really stand to be rewritten to be more lively and less, well, pointlessly monotonous (feed her a tater tots, "very good" - then repeat ad nauseum). It would really help if the game were to guide the player to new content and do things like avoid giving options "like 'watch a web cam'" if there isn't any new content in it, or avoid going on a date if it will be exactly the same dialogue each time, etc.
All in all I like this game a lot, and I hope that the gaps in quality between components will be ironed out.
