RPGM - Completed - Fault - Broken Promises [Final] [Bicorn’s Forest]

Very Simple Game made on a good blueprint, but not very good execution without adding anything else special, unique taste or flavor or anything at all, just a blueprint.
Gameplay is very easy and don't take time, but practically it does not collide with plot much or at all and thus unnecessary.
Plot conclusion ends too easy and fast and kind of stupid getting in a debt on such a simple matter and antagonist getting a girl to do what he wants and then corruption also happening too easy and fast like there was no much hate to begin with and fmc falling and being too easy like being on aphrodisiac or something even if they started went through all bases starting from 1st and then others + teasing till sex.
Scenes are good, not a lot and some are repeated with little difference.
Sound effects during scene is bit too quiet
Moans are too much and don't match what is actually happening. Moans are so much and hard like there is an Orgy or something, but no.
I would give this game 3.5/5, but with little bonus because game like this are not too much and worse.

I really enjoyed this game. As always, I don’t give a single shit about the actual gameplay, but the NTR and sex scenes were genuinely well done. The writing is solid, the presentation is clean, and the art looks great throughout. For a short game, it delivers exactly what it promises without padding things out with pointless filler. At least in terms of the h-scenes. The gameplay IS very grindy and can easily be a turn off. The result is worth it in my opinion but it is for sure the games weakest aspect.

The character designs are one of the highlights for me. The heroine and the sister both look fantastic, and their expressions and body language really add to the impact of the scenes. The bully’s design I can tolerate, even though I’ve never been the biggest fan of the blond, handsome goon archetype. He serves his role well enough, and his look fits the dynamic the story is going for.

One thing I appreciated is that the NTR content doesn’t take forever to kick in. There’s no tedious slow-burn phase where the girl resists for hours on end before anything happens. The game understands what I am here for and gets to the point quickly. While the protagonist himself stays in the dark for most of the story and only realizes what happened near the end, the player gets to see the scenes unfold clearly. They’re paced well, there’s a good amount of variety, and nothing feels dragged out. I was genuinely happy with the amount of content we got instead of wasting time on the heroine being overly reluctant for half the game.

What I like the most, though, is the ending structure. Contrary to what some people seem to claim, there really isn’t a true “good” ending where the NTR is avoided or undone. Even if you rush to pay off the debt as early as possible, the heroine still makes a vague comment hinting that she would go back to the bully on her own if he doesn’t come for her. The protagonist remains blissfully unaware, but the player can clearly understand the subtext if they’re paying attention. The harem ending (for the Bully) is also wonderful and I enjoyed the insults and humiliation the MC needs to endure very much and wish we got more of it in the game.

Pretty mid. Sister has very little scenes, the "make money by going in the dungeon" mechanic just feels like a way to pad for time, instead of meaningfully adding to the game, The game is sandbox but doesn't really make use of it at all while they could have had you stumble upon events while you explore the map. Also, the map is just unnecessarily big, all the extra space is not used at all, just had me exploring around expecting something to happen, which never did, literally the only places stuff happens is in the dormitory and outside of it .

Overall, feels like a waste of potential. Gets a 5/10 for me

The good:
Art is pretty good as is H-scene writing in general. The game is functional.

The bad:
Pretty grindy. If you're just in it for the H-scenes really not worth playing and just getting a full gallery. Not much to the story and even a laughably unrealistic "she has no choice but to do what he says" story, even _in_ universe.

While there are three or four interactions you can encounter not covered in the gallery as the corruption progresses, they are entirely SFW, conversations between cuck MC, noble lady, and sometimes the guy stealing the girl. Ultimately provide little and not worth the effort to get to.

So, 3 stars for being a pretty bog standard H-game, 2-stars for just doing nothing with it that makes the game worth playing and not just getting the full gallery from somewhere and watching that.

Let's be honestly, I generally don't care about the gameplay when it comes to ntr games as long as it's not awful.
The gameplay in this game is... passable. But really, the gameplay is just a crux to get to the NTR. Frankly the fact that you have to use all your attacks to end the day does make the game artificially longer and even if you want the happy ending the mobs are very tedious to dodge.

The NTR is pretty good but it could have been better. Especially with Yuni. Seriously two scenes, one threesome scene and one scene with her berating the protagonist aren't enough for her. I would have liked for her to get at least one more scene since she gets corrupted so quickly.

I do love games with a corruption screen to see the progress on the Heroine's NTR status.

Overall i'd say this game is fine. There is no vanilla H scenes and it's purely NTR unless you can get the money within 10 days. Also I will die on this hill that Yuni needs more scenes.

I played with the male MC only POV because I wanted to try out the dungeon crawling experience and save up all the scenes for later, when I feel like fapping. I haven't gotten around to the fapping yet, but I can tell you about the gameplay.

It's half baked. Almost passable but lacking the necessary depth to make it actually an enjoyable experience. First of all, the combat is basically like those "bump into monster to exchange blows until one of you dies" kind of thing. You know, like Enchanted Cave and various other similar games, just without any depth or puzzle elements.

There are a few sets of equip upgrade for attack, defense, HP, and a couple of accessories. That's the extent of your progression, and really, the dungeon wasn't designed to be fulfilling or enjoyable. It doesn't even have a boss, as far as I can tell.

To make matters worse, if you actually wanted to pay off the dept in 10 days to qualify for happy end, you probably shouldn't even be buying equipment. Just take the sis who can one shot anything two times per day to the top floor (dodging all the monsters on the way there) and get the expensive loot. Actually playing the progressive dungeon crawling will basically not get you the happy end for any reasonable playthrough. And if you didn't want the happy end anyways, what's the point of this whole system? You can just exit the dungeon immediately and pass the days if you want the most NTR ending.

Plus, there is a huge campus map that is essentially entirely pointless. Other than one uselessly annoying fetch quest that makes you run around the whole place, you never do anything on campus. I've never found any of the standard free roaming scenes in a game like this, where you might find various "hidden" sex around campus. There is basically nothing of the sort, and no side quests or story related reasons that lead you to certain areas of the campus. The entire game is sleep, go straight to dungeon, buy/sell stuff in shop, go to sleep.

I actually haven't gotten to the fapping part yet... so I can't talk about the scenes. But the initial set up and the bond of these two are explored just enough (pretty good set up without taking overly long). Based on my coomer experience, I think the H part will be pretty good when I get around to checking the scenes. As far as NTR progression is concerned, it seems promising for fappability.

Translation seems to be typical Saiky edited MTL that they pass off as manual trasnlation. There are a fair amount of errors, pronoun mixups, and sometimes lines being attributed to the wrong character. Also, the editing gets noticeably sloppy after the intro.

The annoying thing about this game to me is that with just a bit more effort, this gameplay system could have been fun. Oh well.

It's a fantastic game, it has good buildup, good illustrations, good voice acting, and a fantastic ending, 10/10

This is a 100% NTR game, I don't know if this has a happy ending tho, it's built as a NTR game from 0 to 10, so NTR enjoyers, this is your kind of game!

Meh, once I reached the first H scene I figured they were all gonna be the same level and decided to just pull up a full save and go through the recollection room.

This could have been a much better ntr game.

Voice acting moans very nice, very hot.

Scenes are just simple static image which is 1/3 blocked because of the dialogue box, okay there.

Threesome scenes were definitely the hottest, but there wasnt enough content overall to even get me off once.

Delete and forgotten, ill save the space for something better, cant believe I was hyped for this game

Played the dlsite version from long ago. Recalling my thoughts here:


Good:

• Voice acting. If there is one thing I remember from this game, it will definitely be the voice effects in the scenes. This along elevated an otherwise subpar game for me.
• Scenes are pretty hot, if you enjoy the NTR stuff.

Areas for Improvement:

• Gameplay is...ok. Maybe some people like it more, but I thought it wasnt that fun and i cant turn my brain off too.
• Could use more scenes for both heroines as the corruption happened a bit too fast, especially the sister. Maybe I'm biased but I love 小花衣こっこ's voice and she deserves more screentime lol
• Could use more scene variations. A lot of missed opportunity given the usual "heroine helps out debt repay" trope that you can find in other similar games.

Overall a mediocre game that has great scenes. Personally if I had to choose again, I would just download a save and call it a day. But it is not too long of a game anyway, so never hurts to try. Maybe its your cup of tea.