Feedbacks and opinions about my game

[Atlius]

Hello everyone,

I'm writing a nice story set in the Roman Era.
The development thread can be found here: https://f95zone.to/threads/cyrenaica-magna-by-narralab-development-thread.227574/
but it seems no one is interested at all. I was wondering if you have any comment or feedback about it, at least looking at the details I gave about it in the development thread.

We are working hard for a 0.1 release, so I'd really appreciate your takes on the premises of the game and/or any suggestion

Thanks to all those who will spend some time to read this and the other thread <3

 

[kilobananov]

at least looking at the details I gave about it in the development thread.

I am probably being way too picky and pedantic, but if you want to be authentic and more or less historically adequate in styling your environments and characters, you should avoid such things as acrylic nails, for example Even though they are an elegant detail.



Same applies to machine-made fabrics with complex patterns


Also, if I were a dev of such a game, I'd be careful regarding makeup, [absence of] pubic hair and whatnot.
Gofile link is dead btw, so there's nothing to download.

 

[desmosome]

I read just the overview, but it sounds like a cool story. I would try it out when it's released. Most development threads don't see much engagement. Only a select few gets lucky enough to build real hype before release. Once you make your first release, you will be able to gauge public interest.

 

[Atlius]

I am probably being way too picky and pedantic, but if you want to be authentic and more or less historically adequate in styling your environments and characters, you should avoid such things as acrylic nails, for example Even though they are an elegant detail.
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Same applies to machine-made fabrics with complex patterns
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Also, if I were a dev of such a game, I'd be careful regarding makeup, [absence of] pubic hair and whatnot.
Gofile link is dead btw, so there's nothing to download.

Thanks!

 

[Atlius]

I read just the overview, but it sounds like a cool story. I would try it out when it's released. Most development threads don't see much engagement. Only a select few gets lucky enough to build real hype before release. Once you make your first release, you will be able to gauge public interest.

Understood. So everything's normal until first release (at least). Thank you!
I knowthe question may have been silly but it's my first game, so...