Feedbacks and opinions about my game

[Atlius]

Hello everyone,

I'm writing a nice story set in the Roman Era.
The development thread can be found here: https://f95zone.to/threads/cyrenaica-magna-by-narralab-development-thread.227574/
but it seems no one is interested at all. I was wondering if you have any comment or feedback about it, at least looking at the details I gave about it in the development thread.

We are working hard for a 0.1 release, so I'd really appreciate your takes on the premises of the game and/or any suggestion

Thanks to all those who will spend some time to read this and the other thread <3

 

[podllboq]

at least looking at the details I gave about it in the development thread.

I am probably being way too picky and pedantic, but if you want to be authentic and more or less historically adequate in styling your environments and characters, you should avoid such things as acrylic nails, for example Even though they are an elegant detail.



Same applies to machine-made fabrics with complex patterns


Also, if I were a dev of such a game, I'd be careful regarding makeup, [absence of] pubic hair and whatnot.
Gofile link is dead btw, so there's nothing to download.

 

[desmosome]

I read just the overview, but it sounds like a cool story. I would try it out when it's released. Most development threads don't see much engagement. Only a select few gets lucky enough to build real hype before release. Once you make your first release, you will be able to gauge public interest.

 

[Atlius]

I am probably being way too picky and pedantic, but if you want to be authentic and more or less historically adequate in styling your environments and characters, you should avoid such things as acrylic nails, for example Even though they are an elegant detail.
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Same applies to machine-made fabrics with complex patterns
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Also, if I were a dev of such a game, I'd be careful regarding makeup, [absence of] pubic hair and whatnot.
Gofile link is dead btw, so there's nothing to download.

Thanks!

 

[Atlius]

I read just the overview, but it sounds like a cool story. I would try it out when it's released. Most development threads don't see much engagement. Only a select few gets lucky enough to build real hype before release. Once you make your first release, you will be able to gauge public interest.

Understood. So everything's normal until first release (at least). Thank you!
I knowthe question may have been silly but it's my first game, so...

 

[ModestDL]

I have read all the posts on the topic of development, and I can see that you are trying hard to create a historical logic that is plausible for your game. However, I have the impression that, in porn games, most players do not care about logic or authenticity. All that matters in a porn game is the presence of sexy characters and sex scenes.
It's unlikely that most players will want to delve into the intricacies of the plot and historical authenticity while holding their penises in their hands. After all, this is not a history textbook, it's a porn game that people go to jerk off. So, not many people will be interested in reading through pages of text. So, I agree with the commenter above and suggest you don't get too upset beforehand, just wait until the game is released and see how the players react.