The demo is very promising, even if a little short. The characters are very well done, but we'd also like a bit more emotion and slow burn for at least some of the protagonists so that it doesn't become just a simple succession of unrestrained scenes. Bravo, superb start!
VN - Ren'Py - Femboy Sorority [v0.1 Public] [Jaya's Dawn]
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JBP
My warmest congratulations on this magnificent debut.
Congratulations on everything.
The graphics are excellent, and the story makes us want to follow it step by step.
Thank you very much, and all the best for the future. -
ThaneShayk
This review is based on version v0.1 .....
What we have here is a VERY promising start to a VN by a very talented Dev.
The Good:
- Lovely renders and LI's
- Great writing.
- Very promising plot.
The Bad:
- It's VERY short, even for a demo or v0.1 release.
The Ugly:
- Dev teases a longer scene if you have a patron version of the Dom/Sub scene between two characters. But with such a short demo release, this felt kinda too early to be doing this, and I would have been more likely to subscribe to their Patreon if they hadn't done this so early in the VN's development.
Final Opinion and Rating:
The game seriously has a lot of potential and has the making of a very successful VN. It is a very short demo release though, so be prepared to finish playing it in around 5 or 10 minutes. Might take you longer to download it than to play thru it.
Version v0.1 is a promising 5 star worthy title when you take into account the beautiful LI's and renders, along with a very well written story with an engaging plot so far.
This rating should definitely be considered Mutable, since it is a Demo release . I don't usually feel demo releases need a review, but this one changed my mind it was so well done.
So my rating is a 5 out of 5 on the start, and I'll be watching and playing as it develops. Wishing the Dev good luck, patience and perseverance throughout their journey.