VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Fictional Story [Final] [DiscipleOfVirginia]

I didn't think I would like this game but I did (ashamed). It is over the top, totally unrealistic and all, but some of the writing is golden and I actually laughed out loud twice. It is pretty short but has some replay potential and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Nice job dev. My only complaint is it was too short and there were some spelling issues (since English is obviously not the native language) but overall I liked it.

Short summary:


This is a bad kinetic novel where the main character is degraded by an ugly grandpa for the pettiest reason you could think of. Only worth checking out for nice ass and soft body jiggly physics animations.



Good Things

• Nice ass
• Some okish animations

Bad points

• Idiotic storyline. The girl is upset with BFs inattention, so she licks out the asshole of the ugliest dirtiest old man alive
• Her tits don’t even have areolas
• Ugly bastard spoils all sexy scenes, which I guess is the point

For me, this game was worth playing only because its female model and her ass lol.
The English and coherency in the game is a bit lacking sometimes.
The story isn't that interesting... after a few minutes I was just skipping the dialogue, especially the one that isn't between Ida and the old dude.
The animations are ok, not something special or revolutionary, so because of that and due to it being the main appeal of the game, I would give this game a 3/5

the renders are great
never seen a game in tghe bbm or old bastard category
NTR is always nice when the male BF is a shithead
havent played a game like this
looking forward to more from the author
good job dev
there is some broken text in english
you can see the renpy var names

*Graphics: 3.5/5 = Not the best facial expressions on the characters. But overall good renders, and the girl is very hot.

*Animations: 4/5 = Not always great, but on most scenes they are good.

*Story: 2/5 = Here is where the game fails. Well, like on most NTR games, you need to accept how stupid the girl's boyfriend is, so that's ok. But the girl acts like a brainless sex doll, so the plot and the story overall feels very unreal. The good part is that is short.

PS: I must say I'm a fan of the "older guy with younger girl" fetish, but not when the guy is THIS level of old and ugly, lol. So keep in mind that you really need to be ok with it to enjoy the game.

Short kinetic novel that leads you on a path that is so unrealistic and preposterous, that leaves you asking - what?
Overall the models are nice, scenes are good, but the story and the plot is just ridiculous that it's hard to keep going. Great for quick fap if you want to just enjoy the scenes though!

This short novel has two endings. It could be more devolped since it is really short. The renders and graphics are nice and the animations look OK as well. The main female MC could be a bit more attractive. The main issue is with the story, it is too unreal.

One of the best visual novels of the genre, a girl with anger problems, a boyfriend very of this generation and an old man with the balls kissing a beautiful girl in public, knowing that he has nothing to lose. It's a great story! Even with potential for a second part, Jörgen and Ida's relationship may evolve. I know that the bad ending already shows a bit of the sodomization of Ida at the hands of Jörgen, but it is very short, pjede be more extensive, with more scenes, that involve fearing sex in public, forcing Ida to do more with her body, filming a video and sending it to Ida's boyfriend but hiding Ida's face ... Ka story is good, the characters right, the protagonist is hot! The best design of jna bimbo I've seen. Almost realistic.

The game was pretty good. it has really nice renders, really nice animations, some meta humor, criticism of our social media culture, great Sex Scenes, and a Great Story. really enjoyed the game. however, I couldn't find the other games of the trilogy. really wished to play other games. great good developers. did an awesome job. best of luck. I can't wait for other games like this one.

I want to give 4.5
Gameplay: there are options to choose from so it is not some linear story where you can only click to next scene, for me the game went smoothly, no bugs which made it good experience.
Story: still a bit confused, a nice(body) girl with a stupid boyfriend, but I think the woman is a hidden slut and her anger is likely an excuse for her to release the beast, no problem, since I am here to see the depth of rabbit hole. Found 2 ends.
Graphic: A few scenes showed her body jiggling in a weird way despite the moving of character and I think a few body features could be softer/smoother.
Overall: I think 4.5 is good, a bit sad the devs did not make the game longer.

A fun little romp. The female protagonist is hot and doll/bimbo-like. The male characters are atypical and somewhat disgusting.
It's not particularly realistic, but who cares! It's just a showcase for a particular dark niche.

Short but intense game. This is perfect for a quick fap session.

The main girl is really really hot and the game has some nice animation.

Although, I wish a bit more effort was put into the female's nipple which are really disappointing compare to everything else.

i love disciple of virginias games.. it definitely deserves 5 stars!
that old jorgenn is a fucking old bastard haha...i would love to see more of the old bastards obsessed with girls asses...some ass sniffing...he would be hot and perfect in his games...success in his projects and I hope to come out a second part or more.
P.S
sorry for my English

This was some sick ass old man pervert fucking shit. Damn was it good to watch. One warning though, muting your sounds in the game menu options does NOT mute all the sounds. I nearly jumped out of my chair and spilled my coffee all over my lap when all of a sudden a sick nasty slurpy sound came out of my computer to match with an old man licking. The other unmuted sounds are old man ass slapping and vibrator noises from a 3 foot long black beast it looks like he is shoving up her ass. Hey , her twat of a boyfriend may not be fucking that ass but old Jorgen is sure tearing it up just fine. I was sort of hoping Karl would get to hit it too and old Jorgen would nail the fitness student in her ripe ass as well. Hmmm. Maybe there will be a part 2?

What can I say? I was curious to know if it would be a nasty show. I was definitely not disappointed. Almost wish it would have been longer and even more degrading for Ida. Ah well maybe in a part 2 she does an entire YMCA of old homeless bums because Jorgen told her to do it. To each their own I guess. If you can't handle watching a nasty looking old man rail some tight young ass then this is NOT for you. But if you too are a sick pervert that just wants to watch a really good fuck then this is right up your alley.

Just few words... Hot, sexy, kinky, fetish, lewd, a bit crazy, a true porn-game no grindy....so much fun also the dialouges... I like the old man is so ugly, nasty... one hour of pure hot sex... sorry just for the one only stand story... Thanks dev... please more lewd stories...

Writing: 7/10
Imagery: 8/10
Gameplay: 5/10
Kinks: 6/10
Overall: 7/10

Grandpa strikes again!

This whole thing reminds me of the relationship of Anna and Alfred from Anna Exciting Affection, which is to say, very good.

The girl is at odds with her boyfriend who is a dweeb, an asshole, and a jerk. His mistreatment of her drives her to seek comfort elsewhere, even in the groping hands of a perverted old man who looks like he's one foot out the door.

But with age comes experience and wisdom, and grandpa here can lay pipe with the best of them. Out doing the girl's boyfriend in both size and skill, and bringing her to heights of pleasures she's never experienced before.

Animation is very well done, the scenes were very well put together, if only grandpa didn't look as haggard as he did this would have been a legendary fap.

Also, how is going back to the lackluster boyfriend the good end? Come on. Clearly being grandpa's new cock koozie is the far better ending.

The best thing about this game for me is her identity: librarian-type meek/soft (with anger issues) with a gym-going bimbo body. and while she's opposed to everything at the beginning she comes to find that she loves it.

Things I think people might dislike:
1. ass licking (especially while saying how nasty it is)
2. nasty hairy old men( the hairy part is brought up a lot)
3. I think some would find the setting and situation creepy (it is) and that would turn them off. though others have this type of setting as a kink.

despite those kinks that I'm not a fan of I still say it's a great game.

Concerning NTR, I think most people that hate NTR won't really have a problem with this game, yes she's cheating, but her boyfriend is so stupid and shallow, and also hasn't slept with her for 3 months, they might as well be roommates. I say give the game a try until the old man gets her out of the bar (less than 10 minutes of gameplay) and decide if it's cool with you at that point.

After the beginning, the game is pretty much sex throughout.
length ~1 hour
only one choice near the end that determines her ending

My rating for this Game is:

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Great Characters
+ Great Animations
+ Great Sex Scenes
+ Great Story

Cons:
- Nothing

Conclusion:
Finally a Great fab game after months of emptiness. The story starts off Innocent, but then Bang, Great Screwing scenes, also , many of them really hot, the characters are all very new or different, everybody has a different view on this, and damn nice closeups.
When I read that his was a demo and the full version was on Patreon it didn't take me 5 minutes to sign up , world record for me.
Hoping to see more of this and now is one of my favorites for this month,
Well done Dev.

quality wise the best discipleofvirginia made so far. the humour is meta and quite nice, the animations are great, no horror which isn't a bad thing (for me at least) and no too crazy female faces (like in the other ones for whatever reason). nice mainscreen and a great amount of a demo with my personal favourite dirty kink. but i have unfortunately make a few small criticims (unfortunately just regarding the female lead) which stopped me from making this a 5 star start/demo.

Pros:
+ really nice renders
+ really nice animations
+ really great portrait of some dirty old man (which happen way too few times in games for whatever reason)
+ female mc which has some nice curves
+ good english (never was a problem)
+ overall no too freaky faces
+ meta humour and criticism of our social media culture (tikthot, twitch etc)
+ one of the most interesting mainscreens i have seen (really well done)
+ big demo with some solid porn stuff (could be more ofc)

Cons:
- the girls face is still a bit too "dolly/blow up doll" like. overall nice attributes but put together in a way it nearly looks too artificial but still one of the most tasteful female faces DoV created so far - which is - for whatever reason surprisingly hard for him/her. i would still suggest - if she will be the mc of the game and since it seems he/she want to and really does improve from game to game that he slightly overhauls the face more to the look for example like the girls face from "Appoline" for example.

- female mc's nipples are really odd like she has nearly none kinda let it look like not fully rendered or something - i personally don't know why some game devs have a hard time creating nipples (so yeah he is not alone here even its the oddest nipples i have ever seen so far - sry xD) even it could (and should) be so easy to make decent, delicious and sexy looking nipples.

- its really nice to see the dev tries to make an hourgalls body shape but the waist/hip transition looks also a bit too artificial (i know some girls on social media look like that too but it just doesn't look that right. don't get me wrong small waist and big hips are nice but i can give plenty of game and real life examples which get done more natural. (but this point is the least important of the three in my opinion) but the overall shape is really nice and the hair look great and the idea of her face too. also like her outfits really much.

- the font is a bit hard to read but you get used to it and its unique and unique can be great (as long as you don't overdo it ;-))

but i am really thankfull for the kink, the overall quality and the overall idea of the female mc. if the female mc gets improved and there will be more stuff and more hardcore stuff going on between Ida and Jörgen (and maybe similar characters and scenes) i am really thinking about supporting this project cause otherwise i really like it.

(sorry if my criticism was again a bit too harsh but its "just" a personal opinion and i pointed out many good things too @DiscipleOfVirginia so, please, don't be mad at me )

We should have more games with this ugly bastard theme as the protagonist I don't even know how people can relate to muscular protagonists with 2-meter cocks, when most aren't. They could make more real protagonists.

Art = 9/10 (With the exception of the protagonist's breasts, I didn't like her nipples very much).
History = 8/10

I wanted the old man to be the protagonist, but I thank the developer for providing us with a game with this theme.