Ren'Py - Abandoned - Fiery Passions [v0.3 Beta] [HotGameDev]

The Good

The AI art is well made for being AI art. That's it.

The Bad, and The Ugly

There's no game here yet, there is a money grind that is poorly implemented, no story, no conclusion or development with any of the characters, the little writing there is is amateurish and childish. Now that the game has been confirmed as abandoned, not even the promise of improvement would make this worth looking into. Go play anything else if you value your time.

There is almost no story. So don't look for a story before starting the game.
The characters have no depth. It has content that you can find everywhere.
The visuals are good but the faces of the characters are copies of each other.
The scenes are just two consecutive pictures. There is a rape scene and even its development is stupid.

In short, I gave 2 stars because the game can be improved. I hope the producer does a good job.

Well... what to say folks?
The artists up here has done Awsome work. Animation is cool, style is super and other graphics to.
Gameplay is ok I guess... you just do much talking, stalking and stuff.

BUT.

it is bad actually. Very bad game. There are few reasons for it, but to put is shortly - no voices and to poor narrative. Like… i get that it is Beta, but if devs put money in art thinking that it is Best Solution - they are wrong.

2 chars for now here are just to be sprites. 2 chars are for 2 scenes each. And thats it.

I have some hopes for this one and I was very entusastic about it before… before I take some sleeping pills from market and saw that scene. It was like SO BAD. No life there.
Had a feeling like devs take player for some pervert with onlye one thing in mind. To jurk off.
You cant just buy some pills, drop it in a coca bottle and take that girl with static Pum-Pam bad scenes. She cant wake up, she will not be remembering that, you dont undress her and…. well, sleeping brothers will get what I mean.

Bady-bad beta with awsome art here. Maybe eventually I will try it when it is rady, If they will not dorp it along the way.

Gave this a shot because of the beautiful art. Wish I hadn't.

Pros:
The art. Gorgeous.

Cons:
The writing - terrible grammatically but also thin and stupid.
The characters - they are nothing. The horny MC with no personality. The lonely widow with no personality. The angry gym girl with no personality.
The navigation
The money system
The story - is there one?
The xxx content - two nudes and a rape scene

hope it'll be not abandoned after a few update, because it looks soooo good. the cg are stunning, we will see the story plot as it's at the beginning....hoping for more!!! keep up with the good work man, I'm already a fan (and if possible maintain the mac version as I'm a mac user )

The game is enjoyable and cleanly made. Its not quite great (and certainly far from incredible) but I still gave it four stars, cause I enjoyed my time with it.

Pros

- Art is cute and sexy.
- Scenario is hot (I like it when the MC isn't some perfect good guy that all the girls instantly throw their virginity and devotion at.
- Knows what it is, and doesn't try to be something else.

Cons

- The art is sparse, which means the writing needs to be excellent to cover the gaps, if done properly this is even BETTER than having tons of stills and animations. It is not done properly. The artist is clearly Russian, speaks barely passable Engrish, and doesn't know how to write build up or climatic scenes, or even post coital scenes*. Stuff like that only builds the overall erotic nature of the game. But the Dev doesn't have that kind of skill YET. Hopefully by the time future releases roll out he's got a competent english speaking writer on staff. Either way, best of luck, Dev.


* there's a scene where you drug your cousin and fuck her while she's unconscious. An easy, easy easy lay up to this scene would be, when you see her in the kitchen tomorrow, to ask her how she slept and she replies that she's really sore and it must be her new workout....

Content is pretty barebones at the moment, there aren't even any scenes for the best character yet, but what's there is pretty decent.


There is some polish missing. Transitions into and out of dialogue feel a little long, some of the hints don't have times listed, you have to go to the bedroom to wait, diologue is pretty odd sometimes. Small things like that.