RPGM - Final Orginity [v0.4.7 EA] [Ropoductions]

Introduction
wanna give this game the big and meaningful praise it deserves with only just one particular thing that prevents me from giving it 5 stars.. that it's just unfinished. besides that feel free to read my review

Game Description
this is a story driven corruption based sandbox carnival RPG. you play as a village girl named Amy and you have a sister Jenny. both of you are very close and you share all kinds of aspirations, dreams, desires. but then your village gets raided, and Jenny is voluntarily abducted (but Amy doesn't know she did it voluntarily and intentionally). you go to the nearest city where the cult that raided your village is headquarted, and start your adventure to find your sister, and along the way get involved in alot of lewd activities depending on your choices

Things I Liked:
- Amy. tbh one of the best female protagonists i've had the pleasure of playing lewd game with. i can't really put it into words how much she mogs other female protags the garbage on this website produces. she's so full of character and behaves like a real human being. her character is presented like this from start to finish. it's better if you saw her character for yourself so i wont describe her, trust me she's really good
- the corruption. your corruption is presented as your level and you level it up by engaging in lewd acts. the more your corruption the more bolder some of your scenes and dialogue are. that aside the way it's presented is very good. the game already establishes Amy as being sexually curious but still very new and shocked about sex. she wants a boyfriend and someone to love as well as a romantical first time, normal girl stuff. but the reality of her adventure sinks in and sex is presented to her in a way she didn't originally intend for. you either keep her pure and normal expectations or you can will her into reluctantly (but consentually) doing those things she might not want to do, and then watch as she becomes more bold about it and more enjoying of it
- characters. there's a whole host of characters in this game and each one is presented with life, that is to say they are all written and animated very well. each one is different from the last and each one holds a place in the story. you got Chad the orc who talks and acts like a surfer dude. you got Frank the brattish and annoying kid. you got Rokas the rotten and miserable little slave trader. you got a wise priest, you got a dwarf couple, you got a talented artist, an elvish flute player, an ogre pimp, a madame of a whorehouse, a black guy who owns a hooter restaurant, a strong and silent bodyguard, a rich banker, a young but unseemly nobleman, and so many more damn characters and they're all awesome.
- story. it really is great. the vast majority of NSFW games only commit to a good premise then just either turn to shit or forget about the story. this one does neither, the story presents itself through the gameplay effortlessly and you really feel like you're making progress and developing a narrative. and neither is it a deep, complicated and boring story that turns people away, it's rather the opposite.
- artstyle/scenes. i love it, so unique and so well made. doesnt look stupid but rather beautiful and easy going. whether you're in a scene, walking around or looking at a character portrait the artstyle is there and its great. speaking of scenes we have to talk about them. they're all animated, i.e. you get to see tiddies jiggling and a cock moving in every scene (not EVERY scene but you get what i mean). the dialogue within the scenes isn't retarded but clever and well made. its not too long not too short. and there's many scenes, with different scenarios/situations and all of the same high quality
- world building. putting orcs, elves, humans in the game while highlighting their intrinsic differences in nature. really putting into perspectives the differences of all the districts in St. Polla. the little backstories of various groups - the red and blue cultists, the orcs in Palisade, the other slave trader(s), the military, the various nobles in the game, so on and so forth. you really are in a unique video game world feels distinct
- gameplay. this might be the weakest aspect of the game but i still liked it. you have WASD and you have your Enter key, and through those two controls all of the things i describe above you experience. its very relaxed and easy, and there's no boring lame RPGM combat. i think all this needs really is just some minor, well made minigames and then its no longer the weakest part of the game. besides, if the game was intended to be a story driven scene collector, you bet the gameplay should behave like one
- basically everything else i forgot to mention that should be considered when rating a game. it's all great, really, if you can think of something that i didn't talk about i would wager with near certainty the thing you are thinking of is high quality in this game

Thing I Disliked:
- this is the only reason i'm not giving the game 5 stars. it's unfinished. once you and Frank get home from the red light district, have that conversation, and the credits roll, that's it, then we must wait for the next update. and keep doing that until the game finishes. now, please dont get it twisted, im not saying to rush the game, neither am i saying this is inherently bad. i just run off of a principle that if im going to rate a game 5 stars it should be finished. it should have a point in the game's playtime where we establish an end. i should be able to conclude the game and be content knowing i played from start to finish. the game is 3 years old now and still in development. i can only hope the devs are getting close

Conclusion
good luck to them (the devs) in getting there. but until we see the end of Final Originity, i'm gonna stick to 4 stars, with what should be a 5 star no questions asked hands down review. please play this game, it is absolutely worth it

4/5

I wanted to like this game. But honestly, it's not really a game. It's RPGM with the skin of a game. You walk around and all that, but there is nothing to keep me engaged.

It's the typical slop. "Innocent" girl who actually isn't that innocent in her own mind, can be corrupted. Making "naive" mistakes as to happen across curious circumstances. It's just...kind of boring.

I will say I do like Pixel Art so that art style I do like. Other than that, feels like a glorified VN with gallery viewer merged together depending on your decisions.

If you like story driven, then you might like it. If you like action, this is not the game for you. If you like combat, not the game for you. If you like the whole corruption angle, you might like it.

I truly hope this game succeeds for the dev, but I just couldn't get into it.

The only "good" thing I could say is it does let you have multiple ways of solving things, which then opens up doors for the situations you find the MC in. There is a gallery. I'm assuming you can unlock all the gallery stuff regardless to avoid replaying the game. However, I only got like 90 minutes into the game.

Everything is subjective and this is no different. Everyone likes and dislikes things.

Even if you read this review and think, Hmm...not sure. Doesn't hurt to give it a shot, maybe it will strike something in you that it didn't for me.

Solid 10/10 but i have to fill this up with a lot of words so ima tell you again its a solid 10/10 from gameplay to art to story, this game isn't lacking in any department, it's almost an insult that this game is in this site.

Amazing art really good story quirky 10/10 game i hope the dev have success in making what they want ill watch the thread and follow the game surely to check new updates, the dev cycle seems fine hope we get more content soon

Final Orginity is on the right track to be a wonderful title one day. The overall vibe is…bubbly, despite how grim the plot can be at times. Everything from the artwork to the music is charming and lighthearted in a way that reminds me of early Newgrounds flash games. My only gripe is that the current version leaves you yearning for more. There is sex, sure, but for the most part the protagonist is locked out of ever going past third base.

I do not wish for this seemingly average rating to be misleading for the game. Let it bake for another year or so. I will gladly change my review to a 5 in the future if the project wraps up in a satisfying way (and has Amy eventually get fucked silly).

A good RPGM game is rare, and one that you genuinely enjoy addictively is even more rare. I'm ashamed to say it took me this long to try this game.

Final Orginity is amazing. Most of the time I forget this is supposed to be RPG Maker because the developer put so much quality and effort into the product where all the assets are original, and it's beautiful.

There's no combat in the game, mostly just exploring but this is where the game shines. With choices. The replay value for the game will be insane, going back.

The art is also beautiful. Love me pixel art and this delivers on a professional level. The female characters are super cute which makes it even better.

As for the story, it's decent. Kind of predictable at some parts but it holds up for a fantasy based narrative.

Overall, outstanding game and I will now be following it with great interest. If you love games with decision making, you'll love this.

Also the music is insanely good as well.

What a great game. It has unique art and an actual storyline, well written characters and I don't know how else to put it but "comfy gameplay". This game has truly been put heart and soul into, it's easy to tell. I'm really excited for the next updates and seeing where they take the game.

Pretty meh game the gameplay its literally loke an rpg maker Go and touch that the go back and touch to talk and do that like ten times, its too booring.
The animations are meh and the desings are kinda good but nothing from another world. still Lame game bad wank not recomendable 3/10
(Sorry for my bad english)

Lets start with 3/5 stars is not a bad rating, it's just what is it now for me.

First of all, the art is good. It's not another RPG trash that can be easily found on this site. There is a soul in this one. Issues with it are that there needs to be more actual content, and also, there is LOTS OF DIALOGUE THAT TAKES FOREVER.

Start of the game takes forever and you cant skip it. If you missed some dialogue you cant go back and look as to what you were asked to do and its easy to get lost. There is one scene every 5-10 minutes of gameplay that takes forever and side quests are linear and scripted don't feel like a sandbox. The corruption aspect does not feel like corruption at all, all you have is to select "yes or no", and it changes nothing as of now.

It's just so lacking in content right now that playing it takes too long to be worth it. With years it will get better and more alive, but as of now its a VN with some scenes.

Great art, hot MC, looking forward to seeing how the game checks out in a while. The only thing I'd say I would like to see if more indicators of what lewd things you can do, if any, before moving on. At the end of the day that's what people wanna see, and constantly going around to see if something can happen or not gets rough.

Beautiful art, music and atmosphere. I loved the character designs. This game manages to be cute, funny, hot, and kinda dark at times. The story could be improved in some places and some of the routes could be better, but they're all unique.

Overall very high quality slow paced corruption game with different routes, stunning visuals and attention to details. I can't remember the last time I enjoyed something lighthearted, easily 5 stars.

It's also an underrated game, and it's crazy how some people can't seem to appreciate its quality. It's just mind-boggling how some of the quality games just don't get enough attention and support.

The game is fairly mediocre. Well, the art is nice, it has light-hearted atmosphere and a few funny jokes here and there, but that's all. The plot is nonexsistent with some crappy cliche about eViL CuLtiSts at the beginning that is forgot 10 minutes later. The game doesn't feature lots of porn content, either. And with no combat or any other distinctive gameplay features it turns to be just sort of walking sim.

This is the type of game where you walk around aimlessly with little to no directions, talking to every NPC and finding obscure locations to try to advance by a single millimeter at a time. Why? What is the benefit of making it so tedious? Do you think it's fun? Use quest markers or a map that tells you exactly where to go for goodness sake. What kind of game do you think you're making?

There's just no reason to make it so bothersome. No one is playing this for enjoying exploration or puzzle solving. "Gameplay" should be absolutely minimal in a game like this. The English also needs work. The positive aspects are too hard to enjoy thanks to the gameplay.

Very high quality corruption centered fantasy RPG with adventure gameplay. Game centers around a girl whose village is ransacked and best friend gets raped and indoctrinated into the cult who set their village ablaze.
I love it, would pay for if given the chance.

Amazing art and characters and storylines. I can't believe there's branching paths and a nice slow burn to it all. Mostly seems to be a 'corruption' game so I'd say let yourself play this like a real game and get to know and love the characters a bit. Really hoping the dev keeps this quality going and doesn't get persuaded by the inevitable barrage of people who always want everything quickly. Dev communicates well, updates consistently, and also seems to just be a very swell person so I am hopeful this game will go all the way!

As of v0.3.0: Excellent slow-burn corruption game with amazing art and lovely music! So far the scenes are all very tame but I’m looking forward to seeing more (any) hardcore scenes!

10/10 very promising game!

This really blew my mind. The quality of the production, the art style and the writing are all top notch. It feels like a lot of care was put into the development of this one, from the animated scenes to the cartoon character design.
Even opening the menu is nice, the sound is just pleasant, especially when you're trained to expect the usual, grating preset noise that you get when the devs don't put in the effort to change it.
I really wish the makers of this project good fortune.

Great surprise to find this. Nice unique feel to the characters and love the pixel artwork. Slow paced corruption of main character which is good. Doesn't have huge RPGM maps so not loads of pointless wandering around.

Highly recommended if you like female protag corrutpion games.

I'm writing this reply in hopes of the game developer reading the thoughts of a player. But mostly to express my thoughts on the matter. After playing around with one of the routes. going to come back to munch on the others some more on a later date. The game is at the end of act 1 and start of act 2 point of the story and I'll will say that I'm enjoying my time playing this game. The story has twits and turns hinting at a deeper layer. And that's just one of the routes. Thou their has been some bugs with the lingering effects of the diner job and if you return too early to the diner to check on your progress you cant leave even after talking to the manager. As well as a missing load function on the game. you have to go to the main menu click continue on your saves. However that is an oversight of fleshing out the routes in this game. And their are a lot of routes. Each unique, expertly drawn, animated, and attention grabbing. Like how their are consequence of not doing certain tasks like the mercenary and the goblins. And the soundtrack goes really hard at certain moments. you didn't have to but you did so major props on that. Kind of makes me a bit sad on how we aren't going to fight some foes. But that's the rpg part of my brain be tickling. Hope to see any of the future updates and some minor suggestions. I wonder if it wont be too much trouble in implementing a combat function for amy. Lord knows she needs to learn how to fight. either being self taught, asking the mercenary and maybe learn his name, learn some thieving tricks, or face a dilemma on that female guard who might arrest you for an incident on her or begrudgingly try and train you on some guard techniques in exchange for some favors since her job is on the line and needs help fast. Also it would be funny to be play as a part time announcer at chad orc cousins wrestling matches. appreciate the Easter egg of a dwarf hold having the same name as one in Warhammer fantasy. look forward in further developments and try and handle the scope creep. you guys have an amazing game on your hands. do you best to keep the game functioning.

Absolutely love the game and the very unique artwork. Kinda reminds me of a toon themed hentai just sadly without any sex. The new content with "Pimp" games is hilarious if not a little confusing as to why that's in there; story wise it just doesn't make sense and is so randomly thrown in there. Played through all of the routes and gotta say sub Rokas route is by far way ahead in potential juicy content compared to others, so try it out and be a fan of it. Other routes are a little weird and has low playability that will not have you replaying it just to see it again, but try them out to experience what this story has to offer and see how big the world is even in its early stages.

Even with all the negatives that you can find in the game, it still outshines with its potential to be something great and can see many details that the developer worked hard on. I will wait and eagerly look forward to see how this project develops, keep up the great work!!