VN Ren'Py Abandoned Find Your Way [v1.0] [Visual Desire]

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You are Britany, a successful girl who get divorced and now she having a fight against her ex-husband and other companies who are trying to take her down.
Make her new path of life and destroy these people who are trying to make you fall.​

Thread Updated: 2022-04-03
Release Date: 2022-03-30
Developer: Visual Desire -
Censored: No
Version: 1.0
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Canto Forte

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Not comprehensible pile of non distinct pieces of information that make little sense.
Strike 1:
” a successful girl who get divorced and now she are having a fight ”
So this broad is a divorcee in a fight. This has no reasonable maning at all.
Who is she? Did she order a fight over so she can have a fight and show us all of that?

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” against her ex-husband and other companies who are trying to make her down ”

Ex husband is a company? Is she some sort of A.I. running a company?
How are they making her anything? the Ex is ex for a reason, no?
What bone does she have with them? We are missing any and all motivation for this.
We know nothing.

Strike 3:
” Make her new path of life and destroy these people who are trying to make you fall. ”
Do we go into world building? Are we the architect from matrix?
Is she a killing machine in the trenches of a war?
What are you falling offa? You have no bone with them.
 

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You are Sam, a successful girl who get divorced and now she are having a fight,
against her ex-husband and other companies who are trying to make her down.
Make her new path of life and destroy these people who are trying to make you fall.
Such as Kimochi, Fapnation, Itch.io and more whilst successfully administrating an online pirate porn site.

Free dor all
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Thank you for this gift, it's an odd one to give away with a game but okay....
 

Ifartedtoolong

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The engrish is strong in this one. A proofreader they need. They're going to be fighting their ex-husband and other companies but will also be fighting against sexual assault charges as well.

Characters:

Britany - Main Character.
Sam - Interviewed and future secretary.
 
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Jnx

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Every time I say a word about bad english/no proofreading my comments get deleted
Fix yer game, Notch. Google translate is not your friend.
 

88Michele88

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I thin Brittany is the main character since Sam is the blond one who looking for job and we interacted as Brittany no Sam. It kind feel a littl missleading on who is Main Character here.
 

Canto Forte

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NO, nothing like that. You are harvey weinstein turned lez trans after his final transformation
doing his/her/their female molestation for a job gig all over this game.

Characters:

  1. Britany - Main Character
  2. Sam - Interviewed and future secretary
 
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Ifartedtoolong

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BaasB

OP needs to be updated as I posted about the mistake in their overview and they changed it so it's now.

You are Britany, a successful girl who get divorced and now she are having a fight against her ex-husband and other companies who are trying to make her down. Make her new path of life and destroy these people who are trying to make you fall.

Still needs to be proofread but at least the name is right now.
 

orensan

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The engrish is strong in this one. A proofreader they need. They're going to be fighting their ex-husband and other companies but will also be fighting against sexual assault charges as well.
Not only that, they need someone to work on those sprites, look at the girl's hair in picture #1, it looks very sloppy imo
 

FookU2

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That is some next-level Engrish.
Sounds like they are inquiring who she will be forced to eat.

EDIT: after realizing that was the description of the game, I now understand the context....she is being punished with down votes.