Ren'Py Finding Cloud 9 [v0.5.1] [Onyx Decadence]

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Chris_Prat

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The problem I have with a lot of people here is that they play a few games that are a complete fuckfest and then assume that every game should have a similar pace. It's like no one appreciates the efforts and hard work that goes into storytelling or even making great renders for that matter. It's all smut, smut... and more smut.

Decent AVN stories are hard to find for me so when I do find one with potential in my mind I'm hoping that the Dev doesn't fall for the "We need lewds" trap and stick to their gun about the story. I've seen plenty Devs add random side characters just so they could get the smut guys to pipe down and some times that ends up taking away from the main characters and story. What I'm trying to say is let OD cook, please.
I'm suggesting something believable... That's all... There's no need of having a lewd scene every 3 minutes like it's excessive to have some over 3 hours after...
 
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Finding Cloud 9 [v0.3.1] Unofficial Android Port

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Before I Forget

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I'm suggesting something believable... That's all... There's no need of having a lewd scene every 3 minutes like it's excessive to have some over 3 hours after...
I'm just not into Devs feeling like they need to change their stories all because people are horny and can't bother with decent build up. Keep in mind that this game is still very young.
 

fishbrain

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Good so far. Really like most of the models and I think Isabela is my favorite.

One criticism the bartender at the super swanky high class club is wearing a fucking jean jacket. Come on now that is way out of place.
 

fishbrain

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Hah. Thanks for pointing that out. You’re right. A couple of renders, so might change it up to fit correctly. ;)
It's mostly irrelevant, I don't think you'll lose any support because of it LMFAO but being a detail oriented person it did stick out to me.
 

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Does anyone know the names of all the characters or where I can find them? I translated it into my language, but some names are different, like Richard's, which in the translation became Ricardo. There have been times when Maya was ''Virtual'' kkkkk
 

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Posting this text box replacement, for anyone that wants to change from the default invisible one. (It make's it easier to read the dialog text.)

Just place the textbox.png file into your gui folder, and run your title. Then go into your Settings and disable the text box, and hit return. Then go back into your Settings and re-enable the text box once again. (This should enable text box to now show on your screen).

Enjoy.

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Hmm...decent story so far. Just don't like how MC's childhood girl friend, responded after their event being intimate with each other. Also don't like how Elizabeth recently tells MC she is involved (dating or fucking) with another guy who is a criminal biker. And it was odd, considering how she responded when MC tried to tell her bikers are bad news (most already know this about that culture, that bike gangs deal with prostitution, murder, drugs, etc.). And with what happened to her father, she come off as a stupid and naïve girl.

And most in the community don't like potential main love interests being fucked by another dude...it's the sloppy seconds issue. I also noticed some girls don't have affection points, so I guess they won't be a choice for the semi-harem, later in the story.
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Hmm...decent story so far. Just don't like how MC's childhood girl friend, responded after their event being intimate with each other. Also don't like how Elizabeth recently tells MC she is involved (dating or fucking) with another guy who is a criminal biker. And it was odd, considering how she responded when MC tried to tell her bikers are bad news (most already know this about that culture, that bike gangs deal with prostitution, murder, drugs, etc.). And with what happened to her father, she come off as a stupid and naïve girl.

And most in the community don't like potential main love interests being fucked by another dude...it's the sloppy seconds issue. I also noticed some girls don't have affection points, so I guess they won't be a choice for the semi-harem, later in the story.
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Thanks for sharing. Good points. Biggest portion of girls are not sloppy seconds. I dont intend all girls to be alike either. Different stories, different outcomes.

Some things regarding Mila have not been disclose yet. Something in her past is making her react in such a way. If the player is interested in her, he will try to figure it out and get her. If he believes she is worth it.

You got the whole point with Elizabeth being kind of naive. Perhaps grown up but love gives you pink glasses, makes you do dumb things, right?
Not sure what you mean with her father.
A big assumption regarding affection points. I have simply not put in the variables for some characters. If you played the game. All girls show up in the in the character window.

All in all, like I said, different stories, different outcomes. Some characters will be more straightforward. Some not so much.
Thanks for the input. Makes me think more on the story and all its aspects.
 
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Thanks for sharing. Good points. Biggest portion of girls are not sloppy seconds. I dont intend all girls to be alike either. Different stories, different outcomes.

Some things regarding Mila have not been disclose yet. Something in her past is making her react in such a way. If the player is interested in her, he will try to figure it out and get her. If he believes she is worth it.

You got the whole point with Elizabeth being kind of naive. Perhaps grown up but love gives you pink glasses, makes you do dumb things, right?
Not sure what you mean with her father.
A big assumption regarding affection points. I have simply not put in the variables for some characters. If you played the game. All girls show up in the in the character window.

All in all, like I said, different stories, different outcomes. Some characters will be more straightforward. Some not so much.
Thanks for the input. Makes me think more on the story and all its aspects.
Thanks for the quick reply. I wanted to mention I like how you have been very patient answering players questions, even the ones where they are being overly aggressive towards your story structure. Great work...I wish other dev's showed your respect and patience with their fans.

And with regards to the the father comment I made, I felt due Elizabeth being recently aware her father secretly creating meth or some other hard drug for an organized crime syndicate. She would have avoided anyone involved in any kind of criminal activity, but instead she is stupidly ignores, and still is dating a biker dude (...and so I'm wondering, and I'm sure others would like to know if they have been sexually active with each other...or has it not happened as of yet? Unless Elizabeth is actually bi, and is with the biker chick at the bar instead?). And because Elizabeth is a bit older, I assumed she would have been smart enough to not want to be involved with anyone involved with a criminal organization, because of what happened with her father.

And I found it odd, MC's reaction with Elizabeth being intimate with a biker, MC could have shown more of a back bone and more concern with that relationship at that moment. To the point where he would have been totally honest with her right away, regardless if some negative info was going to slip out...it would have been a good spot to show his love, care and protection for her. And considering Elizabeth's father was keeping his criminal acts from everyone in the family. And MC is now forced to do the same thing as her father did, he would lose the "maybe we will talk to her about it later attitude" is very troublesome (I found the "what ever attitude" odd, considering I had 7 points in MC's intellect stat...and yet he is still acting like a dumb and spineless idiot).

Normally bikers don't treat woman very well...over a short period of time it usually doesn't go well for their women. As the guy will becomes violent and controlling, acting like a pimp...forcing the girl into drugs, getting her hooked. Then transitioning her into stripping, or worse doing porn, or into prostitution making money for their club (I hope that doesn't happen to her). For me, I felt MC didn't show enough concern for her...considering she is a loved one in his life (and a potential love interest), also a part of his immediate family.

Though, I did like how MC protected the Mom right away from the slimy restaurant owner. But it was odd with her choice of dresses for a job interview (it's like she is asking to be sexually assaulted by any random dirt bag. Maybe wearing those on a date, but not an interview). And considering what just happened earlier on with the other slimy guy, I'd assume she would be smart and more aware. (Though, I'd like to know how the restaurant owner knew her husband was just put in jail... :unsure: )

And finally, when MC was given the task to deliver product at the photo shoot, it gave the impression that it was actually a porn shoot location (lighting stands and all the couches). And even the look on the girls face that she seemed a bit concerned after both guys had their drugs, it seemed she was about to be forced into doing sexual acts with both men after MC left. But in a later scene she said it was just a normal modeling gig, or was it...? :unsure:
(Are any of the girls lying to MC?)

Looking forward to more content when it's released.

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