VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - First and Foremost [v0.11a] [UnderTheStairs]

The writing and grammar is bad and frequently doesn't make any sense at all. The characters look very odd with sort of an uncanny valley feel to them. The actual render quality, however, is not bad and the game looks decent (not counting the girls).

The writing is bad. Translator bad, and doesn't make sense in some scenes.
Anna looks like an alien. Re-work her before going any further.
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The writing is of poor quality. The character Anna needs to be fixed. There needs to be more structure to the writing and story. I'm honestly not even sure what is going on.
You get random flashes of titties and kitties. Hairy hairy kitties.
Then you have the weird living room scene at the end of the update. I'm not sure what actually happened to lead to that.
So to the dev(s) start over and try to get some help with the writing first. Then move on to trapping Anna in Area 51, and finding a new model for her. The only thing going for this VN is that the renders aren't to bad. Maybe have the landlady take the beaver to the groomer just a little.
Good luck with this one. I will more than likely not come back around to see if anything gets better with future updates.

Ignore all the bad reviews from some jerks who just want sex so they go watch porn.
putting that aside the game is very good we have a hot mother who loves her son but struggles internally whether to give in to temptation we have the son who also loves his mother and wants to fuck her very hard there are also some fetishes like bush in the vagina that In my opinion, it's fine, it's a mother, that is, a lady, not a girl, so that she walks shaved in the same way, the story doesn't tell much, I hope it improves, but on an erotic and romance level it's very good.

I'm sorry, but this is really bad (v0.11a).
There are parts of the dialogue/narration that are completely incomprehensible or nonsensical.
There is no real flow to developments. Things just seem to come out of nowhere.
There's excessive random flashing.
In some images the dick looks more like an arm, but maybe he's just part horse.

The fact that there are people that rated this five stars is truly baffling.

Version: v0.11a
I love the setup! The story is good, the girls look beautiful! The graphics are great and the mother looks believable yet sexy! The MC is good so far and not somehow weird, totally effeminate or degenerate or what else you know from other AVNs. It gets quickly to the action, but with a believable and romatic backstory!

Still, the game has problems:

The English translation is bad
The Incest patch doesn't seem to work, at least for me. It's still a "stepfamily"...
The MC's penis looks very strange. Almost like an ulcer...

Nevertheless, I give it 5 stars because it's still better than 90% of the AVNs out there. If he fixes the problems the game is actually perfect!

So let me get this straight.. Mc comes back home after some time and gives a french kiss to si...ahem.. housemate and bangs the mo.. ahem.. landlady. That´s it? That is the story? I mean if your goal is to give content asap to show off your rendering skills, it is a job well done. Great, authentic renders. But there is no story, no character development, actually a bizarre relationship in a fa...house. Where will you take the story from here after giving the most important , anticipated content up from the start? Good luck
Good renders that´s all.

I want to star with the good part about this game... The graphics are amazing, renders are gorgeus, well worked and original and that alone is the reason why I'm giving 3 stars.
As for the bad part (The cons section) There's absolutely no character development, it's extremely hard to follow the story and to understand what's going on, the English translation is absolutely terrible 80% of the time you'll have a vague idea of what they are trying to say, and on top of that the thoughts and dialogue between characters isn't mixed in an organic way, therefore you'll need to be constantly going back to try to make a sense of it all.
My final conclusion is the game have potential the renders are amazing, but it needs an English translation badly, a good game can't survive of beautiful renders alone it needs a good story to back it up.

Awesome game! The current content is limited but from what is shown the graphics and character development is amazing! Highly recommend this game! Get's straight to the nitty gritty with adequate backstory and the graphics are amazing! Wish there was animated scenes though. Highly recommend! I look forward to new updates!