As another reviewer said I'd like to see more xeno games, in fact, I plan to bring this element into the first game I am currently working on, so this is one of the reasons that brought me here.
I'd say that I find this game mildly titillating, for being a real cannon of a game there would have to be more erotic tension, no basic animations, and more emotional display - even if they are aliens and it might not be that easy to achieve that at first.
The writing contains the usual avoidable sloppiness, confusing "it's" with "its" and "lets" with "let's". Many players won't notice or care. Aside from that, the text is readable. The story is not mindblowing but OK. Some earnest attempts to bring humor into a human-alien first contact.
*** 1/2