It has a lot of potential. Conceptually, there is definitely something here, so I hope that this improves with time.
The most glaring issue is extremely hard to ignore. That being: the English is abysmal. On many occasions, the dialogue randomly switches to Spanish for a line or two for absolutely no reason. But even when it isn't doing that, the English is very poor and frequently mixes up pronouns. Please hire someone to proof-read your stuff. If you wanna hit me up, I can even try to help out with this.
The art style is, by and large, the biggest selling point. The art is beautiful. Some of the sex is a bit weird-looking because the PC's dong is comically oversized and the cumloads are extremely cartoony. But overall, the art and animations are the biggest things here.
Not a huge fan of the memory match mini-game. The game could do without that. Weirdly though, you really only get benefits by *failing* the mini-game, which I found odd. But that does lead into the next issue.
The amount of branches is too damn high. It was hard to know if I saw everything because little things change unexpected things. Either put in a gallery with some kind of rewind to allow attaining all possible scenes, or make it so you can see everything in one playthrough.
The map is okay, but a bit disorienting at times. The place is really big and mostly empty, so wandering around is not really enjoyable.
The most glaring issue is extremely hard to ignore. That being: the English is abysmal. On many occasions, the dialogue randomly switches to Spanish for a line or two for absolutely no reason. But even when it isn't doing that, the English is very poor and frequently mixes up pronouns. Please hire someone to proof-read your stuff. If you wanna hit me up, I can even try to help out with this.
The art style is, by and large, the biggest selling point. The art is beautiful. Some of the sex is a bit weird-looking because the PC's dong is comically oversized and the cumloads are extremely cartoony. But overall, the art and animations are the biggest things here.
Not a huge fan of the memory match mini-game. The game could do without that. Weirdly though, you really only get benefits by *failing* the mini-game, which I found odd. But that does lead into the next issue.
The amount of branches is too damn high. It was hard to know if I saw everything because little things change unexpected things. Either put in a gallery with some kind of rewind to allow attaining all possible scenes, or make it so you can see everything in one playthrough.
The map is okay, but a bit disorienting at times. The place is really big and mostly empty, so wandering around is not really enjoyable.