VN - Ren'Py - Flickering Lights [v0.1] [SilentVerge]

A good start, personally I would have preferred a little bit of story and renders. 5 minutes of play to properly evaluate a story(seems ok)are few but the renders are good and also the animations. So, good luck and go on

PROS
+ The art style looks good.

CONS
- The game has too much text, but not enough story behind, text describes things too much, and makes it kind of boring to read.
- The game needs more renders/pictures for scenes, currently it has pretty less amount of them, and characters doesn't feel alive at all, you can't even feel like they are talking when they are talking.
- The game is pretty short even for a DEMO, so be aware.
- Some sex scenes have only one animation, and they are not that great. Sex scenes need more renders, animations, and positions/angles with better physics.
- Save menu can use come changes, classic RENPY save menu is already good, I don't see any reason to make it different aside from adding your game's own style to it.

VERDICT
The game looks promising, but only if developer improve the game, if not then it will be poor or average at best, normally I would give 2 stars for a game like this, but since it's first version I will giving 3 stars, and hope developer will do better job with upcoming versions.

Nice Render, Visual Art Style and Beautiful Character

Story seems to be good but still short
and the dialougue is fine

The scene is great but not much view or render

Can't wait to see more of it and thanks the devs for the game

Well let me be the first to review this I guess. Below is the pros and cons so far.

Pros:
- Renders are on point and graphics are good
- What little there is shows the MC as strong and independent
- The premise of the VN is original and solid

Cons:
- There was a whole lot of reading for very little story. Every move was typed out using words and phrases to make it over the top.
- Just not a lot to review. 1 lewd scene and a few others but not much content.
- Even for as short as it was I found my self getting board with what I would call pompous righting.