Java Completed Football Camp [v1.0] [Trombocyte Games]

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Overview:
Its first version of my game. Football Camp- game about football girl in the man camp. Game have horny content and unusual gameplay mechanic, based on probability theory and choise. Its early version, but he have basic gameplay and some sex-scene. Of course there will be more content in future and i correct some bugs. I would like you to try my game and I will be glad for your opinion.​

Thread Updated: 2024-06-27
Release Date: 2024-06-27
Developer: Tombocyte Games

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Version: 1.0
OS: Window
Language: English
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[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Tauro Thurius]

Thanks for fueling my nightmares with another NPC.

 

[trifork]

def like the concept!

 

[Shadowndev99]

BEHOLD !!!! the power of windows paint ...advice to the dev there something called AI so if you cant draws anything

 

[Mr.SpacePenguin]

waow graphics are sure improving in 2023!!

 

[Me-ta-Xa]

Nothing to see here...standard medical check up for female football/soccer players....

But seriously....even Mario Bros. 1 had better graphics and even a better story judging this screen (I can see his finger in there, why the big pink sign telling us the obvious!).

 

[rKnight]

That moment when your patrons ask to do it cheaper...


Never thought I would say this but, why not using ai cg instead?

 

[Hedonax]

As someone who hates that ai crap and it's goofy look, I'd actually prefer you keep doing this art. People rushing to AI generated art is a massive mistake in that it makes all their games look the same.

That said, what does "based on probability theory" mean in this context?

 

[Mercedes]

It may be an interesting premise, but the implementation is unfortunately very poor.
The game is actually a sidescroller with a poorly animated MC. Insexcity did a better job of this years ago.
The drawings of the scenes are even worse. In my eyes, they would just suffice as a concept drawing.
In addition, you have to walk through empty screens every day to get to the actual actions. Here would be sometime a quick trip recommendable, if ma just do not want to go for a walk to possibly act with the grandpa or would rather go straight to the Triningsplatz or visit the locker room before the game.

I also miss a certain personality structure of the protagonist, or a progressive corruption. She still reports the groping village idiot, but has no shyness with grandpa or the coach after a lost game.

There is still a lot of room for improvement, but there are also many opportunities to add content that isn't there. A team consists of 11 players + bench, so there should be at least 20 players in the camp.
What about support staff, especially masseurs and paramedics? A canteen with common meals? The already mentioned shower on really bring into the game? Clothing purchase in the Dort before the next disco visit?
Clothing theft in the locker room, nightly team visits, ....

Unfortunately, I can't say that it's a good first attempt in its current form, and I'm sorry to say that it's already foreseeable that this game will never be a pearl of the genre, but I'm curious to see what the next two or three updates will do here. So I hope that my criticism is also a suggestion.

 

[Truvelo]

 

[gafo]

Great idea, but I'd be thinking on getting an actual graphist or illustrator.

 

[Strong1]

A Java game? That's a rarity!

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Griinch]

Trombocyte Games Good luck on this one! If you want the dev badge submit a ticket here

 

[elstupidwolf]

I usually don't say this because I think it's disrespectful & wrong but.
I can draw better than that

 

[Mercedes]

I usually don't say this because I think it's disrespectful & wrong but.
I can draw better than that

Apply as a cartoonist for the game

 

[Trombocyte Games]

As someone who hates that ai crap and it's goofy look, I'd actually prefer you keep doing this art. People rushing to AI generated art is a massive mistake in that it makes all their games look the same.

That said, what does "based on probability theory" mean in this context?

Its mean about football mini game- his based on probability theory

 

[Trombocyte Games]

It may be an interesting premise, but the implementation is unfortunately very poor.
The game is actually a sidescroller with a poorly animated MC. Insexcity did a better job of this years ago.
The drawings of the scenes are even worse. In my eyes, they would just suffice as a concept drawing.
In addition, you have to walk through empty screens every day to get to the actual actions. Here would be sometime a quick trip recommendable, if ma just do not want to go for a walk to possibly act with the grandpa or would rather go straight to the Triningsplatz or visit the locker room before the game.

I also miss a certain personality structure of the protagonist, or a progressive corruption. She still reports the groping village idiot, but has no shyness with grandpa or the coach after a lost game.

There is still a lot of room for improvement, but there are also many opportunities to add content that isn't there. A team consists of 11 players + bench, so there should be at least 20 players in the camp.
What about support staff, especially masseurs and paramedics? A canteen with common meals? The already mentioned shower on really bring into the game? Clothing purchase in the Dort before the next disco visit?
Clothing theft in the locker room, nightly team visits, ....

Unfortunately, I can't say that it's a good first attempt in its current form, and I'm sorry to say that it's already foreseeable that this game will never be a pearl of the genre, but I'm curious to see what the next two or three updates will do here. So I hope that my criticism is also a suggestion.

Yes, some things will really be in the game and I'm already doing them. Walk to empty screen its because early version, more random action in this screen wait on future

 

[Trombocyte Games]

View attachment 2723629 Thanks for fueling my nightmares with another NPC.

I replace his face to the next update)