HTML - For Family [v0.0.3] [DemonGrinGame]

[Based on version 0.0.2] This game needs a ton more time in the oven before releasing a version here I personally feel as there is far too much clicking you do that can easily be cut out.
The dev has removed the need to re-clothe yourself as per an previous review has said about that being odd to be forced to do. However I feel that the Dev hasn't understood why it was best to streamline it.

Currently there is a lot of clicking to be done to get to an point where you can progress an quest line as sometimes you need to go through a week of days. It's a pitfall a lot of sim HTML games fall into is having 7 day week where only one day of that week (sometimes a specific time of day) making the game drag on when it doesn't have an skip day button or way to get through it quickly. As a result I feel that it's best to switch to just it being time of day OR weekday and weekend which appears once every 3 weekdays.

I also suggest the Dev looks at other games to study from and take inspiration from.

Also just a word of warning.....don't go above $500 as once you go too far and go home you're forced into an event where you give $500 to pay for the electricity bill that's due. However this event occurs on LOOP so if you cheat in say $2k, say goodbye to all of it as the game will just steal it all away. It doesn't change anything, just an anti-money hoarding mechanic for some reason.

People are judging this way too harshly for a v0.01. There is already a decent amount of content and it's not badly written. The concept is cool and I am looking forward to seeing how it develops.

It could do with some streamlining, some things take a lot of clicks and some places it isn't clear you need to be in a certain outfit for anything to happen there but the bare bones are good.

Review of v. 0.0.1:

I know this is the first release, but this game is way too rough. The interface and font are shit. And it's one of those HTML simulation games that, for some reason, demand you to get dressed every day, click multiple times to move between locations, etc. This is shit design. Wardrobe only affects anything in corruption/sissification games. Even then, it makes no send for the player to, at every in-game day, click wardrobe, them casual wear, then dress, than watch a gif, just to finally started the game. It's beyond tedious after just a week or so.

The rest doesn't show much promise, but I can give it the benefit of the doubt if the developer improves this design. Otherwise, there's no reason to play this before anything else.