VN Forgive - My First Game

[Fra_Seorn]

Hello everyone,
this is my first game, at the moment it can only be found on this forum. I have not signed up for sites like Patreon or similar, maybe I will in the future, but for the moment this is done and exclusively for my pure passion.
The game is a VN that tells the story of a father and daughter re-establishing their relationship, which broke up 12 years earlier, when their daughter was 18. From that moment on, the daughter no longer wanted to have anything to do with her father, who had to accept badly the decision of her daughter.
At the beginning of the game, you will be asked to enter your name, and the type of relationship with Emma. If you want Emma to be your daughter, just write daughter, or you can choose sister, this type of relationship can also fit. If you don't want anything incestuous, you can enter anything else.

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[undertaker661]

nice visuals

 

[Fra_Seorn]

nice visuals

Thanks for the comment, I hope there will be many more, both negative and positive, it doesn't matter. The comments feature is to help me improve.

 

[Fra_Seorn]

Emma
30 years old, recently entered the difficult world of show business, she has become famous for a special advertisement. It's not clear whether she is extremely exhibitionist, or just with her head in the clouds. What is sure is that she needs help to get by.



Paola
Emma's best friend, and the cause of the quarrel between MC and Emma. She has very open sexual habits, if she likes someone she has sex with him/her without thinking about the consequences. She is now married, but she doesn't seem to have changed her habits.

 

[miyoko11]

It looks good. I like their bodies. Maybe their makeup can be more refined. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Anyway, I will support you

 

[Charan. 568]

so far, so good. keep it interesting and exciting without going into open relationship and keep the exhibitionism going. i guess it'll be awesome with your character design.

 

[javikaston]

any ideas what is going on with it ?

 

[TheHighSpire]

The visuals are nice. But what I care most about in VN's is the story and decisions. Basically the story have to follow its own internal logic, and not break the immersion. In that vein, overly dumb/naive/innocent/etc characters are not believable to me.

So, if the story is nice and the visuals appealing, then you're on a path of a great game (IMO)

 

[Losersriot]

Another day... another male protagonist game...

 

[Pogo123]

i played the release version of the game and i have to say a few quick things with hope for the new update:

- girls have great hot curves, lovely shaped. sexy.

- really solid quality!

- i like the idea BUT: 1. the father looked way too young and should look more like the elevator guy after the time jump especially if the daughter looks quite old for her age. (i hope this got changed a bit in the latest update)

 

[@ssasin]

Emma
30 years old, recently entered the difficult world of show business, she has become famous for a special advertisement. It's not clear whether she is extremely exhibitionist, or just with her head in the clouds. What is sure is that she needs help to get by.

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Paola
Emma's best friend, and the cause of the quarrel between MC and Emma. She has very open sexual habits, if she likes someone she has sex with him/her without thinking about the consequences. She is now married, but she doesn't seem to have changed her habits.

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Hey there dev it's a very good start for your VN. For which could you please tell the do you have patreon or discord where we could get further updates

 

[Doorknob22]

Hey there dev it's a very good start for your VN. For which could you please tell the do you have patreon or discord where we could get further updates

There you go: https://f95zone.to/threads/forgive-v0-01-remastered-fragames.71068/