VN - Ren'Py - Formula Zero [v0.01a] [Celeritas.VN]

The first release has an incredible amount of potential. The characters are interesting and the writing is concise but also detailed enough to flesh out the world and characters.

Very minor things like some spelling errors and some text defaulting the main character's name occur but pretty infrequently.

I'm really looking forward to following this game as it develops.

I'm going to give it 5 stars even though I definitely have some notes, but overall the plot is solid, the characters have good writing, and the models are solid.

The relationship with Emma at the start was confusing, I thought for sure she was the girlfriend until about halfway through the episode, I must have missed something along the way but if I didn't maybe want to go back and give a little introduction, I had no idea she was supposed to be more sisterly.

There were a couple of times instead of using the name I input at the start, the dialogue said Max, which is the default name, it took me a second to realize they were talking about the MC.

Very very promising start but definitely not a lot of, sexual tension for a first episode. In fact there was nothing romantic at all, no plot threads to continue with, just a complete introduction to formula one.

Giving this 5 starts based on what's here so far in the first release. If the game continues at this quality, and ends up with a respectable amount of total content it'll keep that 5 stars no problem.

The characters are very well done. The models for the women are within reality. One of my biggest complaints about most AVNs is how crazy devs get on the model sliders.

The theme/story is one we haven't seen 50000 time before, so that's a nice bonus. I have no particular affinity for F1 or racing, but it's just nice to have some variety.

Also, the scene in the hotel when Emma peaks is one of the most adorable things I've seen in any AVN. It's a real "we must protect her at all costs" moment.

Goated Game.
As someone who loves F1 this is pretty good especially the car sequences.
The plot is very good, as well as the character story's it feels human.
This might also be the first AVN of its kind so there's a lot to be excited about!
Looking forward to future updates.

This is an amazing start of a game. Pretty top tier animations and characters. Great writing. It's kinetic now with no sex scenes, but both of those things are likely to change from what I read. Either way, I'll be watching this with great interest!

Great first release and for someone who was already a fan of AVNs and an avid fan of Formula 1, I'm excited to see where that creator is going with the story. Overall great graphics, great story, a few mishaps with "Max" popping out instead of the chosen name but love this and excited for the future updates !!

Very solid first release version. As some have pointed out, there are no impactful choices yet implemented in the game. Considering though it's the first release version and we only just get to know the characters and the general plot, I think it's a minor issue to be overlooked. The general vibe definitely fits the game environment and you can tell the author is at least somewhat experienced when it comes to Formula racing. I am looking forward to future updates.

Formula zero is soo damn good.. even though there is no smeggs yet. The dev knows how to write the beautiful plot and characters are very mature unlike other avns who are craving for sex always..

It will become a masterpiece if it doesn't get abandoned.

I’m waiting for the next update, I hope the update gonna come with more content, I like the concept and the history, in the next update would be great a little sexxs but no much, cause the history is so good

Looking forward, very good first release! I'm a F1 Fan so its automatically very interesting for me
Cant wait to find out the next career steps of MC.

I hope you can choose some Choices and how it would turn out.
Some straight way story without choices would be not good for such a game

really nice concept, this might be the first game in a long time to have me hooked and eagerly waiting for an update. Everything about the story, the relationships and how it incorporates one of the biggest sports/entertainment in the world.

Sometimes - very rarely to be honest - you get a first experience that exceeds expectations. It would be easy to roll out the usual caveats when considering the current stage of development, but this release comes with a level of attention to detail, understanding of human emotion, eroticism and yes beauty, that impressed me. A lot. I experienced an inspired story by somebody passionate and knowledgeable about the world in which the story exists; something I believe could make Formula Zero a project worth nurturing! <3

Storytelling. Animations. F1. Dude are you kidding me. It's been so long since I've been so hyped for a story like this. I was so disappointed when it ended I just wanted it to keep going. Apparently the dev has three jobs and a family. English is not his first language but the grammar was pretty flawless. Renders are superb. I will be waiting very impatiently for this one to continue. 10/5 stars

Great start. I really like the story so far, which is quite original. Not the same old tropes. The models are fantastic and different. The characters are interesting. There are some places where the user-provided MC name didn't take (I presume because the default name is hard coded).

But overall, I'm excited to see what comes next.

This has been a superb first release: smooth video combined with great still renders. The story is intriguing and engaging so far. I look forward to seeing how the story develops and to the addition of the other tags.
Props to the maker for their stand-out initial release.

For an early game it is already a 5 star start.
Remind me the time when i first watched Game of Thrones and couldn´t wait for the next episode...........
Everything is made with great detaisl and care.
Story, music, sound, effects, charakters, graphic just 5 star material.

Great so far. Looking forward to the next update. The are enough real aspects to the racing story to overlook the slight issues with Max being used by characters even if you changes the name. Keep it up.

Beautiful game cant wait to see it unfold. The Character designs are beautiful. The story so far is amazing, Animations are 10/10 best ive ever seen in a AVN. 10/10 game so far. The game is so good im giving first ever review for a game. F1 is my passion so seeing a game based on it finally makes me so excited

Great piece of story telling. Mature slow cooking michelin star deserving appetizer. No cheap porn addiction provided, yet compelling possibilities for future exploits . If anything, then theme oriented quality work. Hope for speedy updates and continued quality. Thank you!

Man this game is extremely promising. Renders are great, story has a great start. The girls that we have seen so far are sexy. Personally am a big racing fan so it is cool to see the acurate Spa circuit in the beginning and later Hockenheimring also very accurate.

Right now it has no choices. For me I'm perferctly fine with a more kinetic novel type game, but I know some people have different opinions on that. But if the story is as good as this start was, than I don't mind it at all.

I'm very hyped for this game