VN Ren'Py Fractured Hearts [Ch.1] [Turbo Kinetic's]

[ChadInStrapJacket]

cause I have seen a few people mention it in some way or another. Erika's character model belongs to me alone, her model itself isn't used in any other games. but yes, she does have an overused hair. i just like it for her personality. dont get used to her hair, no spoilers though.

its also not just hers. i used some base models for all 4 girls in the jackson family but swapped skins and used face and body sliders to make them my own. actually my first attempt as emilia came out so old looking she ended up becoming Susans model. #funfact
technically imran is a custom too i think but not on purpose haha

also im doing the lords work and shutting down the ntr cucks
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What no father growing up does to a mf, mashallah, they come and make demands, their pecker can't get hard without another man's cock presence in the screen, wallahi.

Addition: Though I wonder about this game dev making, are you going to add NTS, Sharing, Swinging? from you sig and your comments prior (here and multiple threads), it seems like you're a sharing fan. (which to me, still a cuck genre)

 

[Fap-Nation enjoyer]

nice coincidence. im writing an emilia scene right now haha

what fuckin cracked start, bravo sir

 

[Jnx]

not every game is going to be done by an English degree holder. I sleep 5 hours a day. mistakes will be made. i also don't have any beta testers or anyone to go behind me checking. i'd be curious about the pronouns i messed up. some of the other stuff is planned to get addressed.

The correct answer was "I'll try to do better." The issue was every single time those issues happened, not every once in a while. Every plural had apostrophes, Every past tense sentence had extra words tensed incorrectly, and "than" is a word that I don't think is in the game.

Now, you might be surprised to hear this, but outside of the default UI, the English and the cringe worthy Erika scene were my only two issues with the game. (Maybe the fact it's essentially an "MC returns home from the military after X years and everyone wants sex story for the 2409854230869th time doesn't help) But I thought it was fine. But the English got so egregious I couldn't handle it by the end.

 

[Mcknobz33]

do you need to get the secret ending to be on the harem path or am i reading that last line from the update wrong?

 

[lucik93]

Came back here after i played the game to say, damn Turbo... right in the feels.
Also MC did not take his leather glove off since i saw him mentioning he worked at the docks, so pretty sure he's a hitman lol

 

[Cra1g281]

cause I have seen a few people mention it in some way or another. Erika's character model belongs to me alone, her model itself isn't used in any other games. but yes, she does have an overused hair. i just like it for her personality. dont get used to her hair, no spoilers though.

its also not just hers. i used some base models for all 4 girls in the jackson family but swapped skins and used face and body sliders to make them my own. actually my first attempt as emilia came out so old looking she ended up becoming Susans model. #funfact
technically imran is a custom too i think but not on purpose haha

also im doing the lords work and shutting down the ntr cucks
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what is it with NTR and sharing, is it just more sex for them or do they secretly have a fetish for it

 

[Mrsexoo3]

thats NTS not NTR haha

Thats like saying " its not shit, just manure."

The only difference between nts and ntr is that nts is willing cuckoldry, as opposed to cheating/unwilling in ntr, So to someone that doesnt like cuck stuff nts is the same and even much worse than ntr.

If you plan to add nts you might want to put it in the op next to the "no ntr" disclaimer

 

[TurboKinetics]

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Thats like saying " its not shit, just manure."

The only difference between nts and ntr is that nts is willing cuckoldry, as opposed to cheating/unwilling in ntr, So to someone that doesnt like cuck stuff nts is the same and even much worse than ntr.

If you plan to add nts you might want to put it in the op next to the "no ntr" disclaimer

Swinging would ve different then cuck stuff. And i never even said i was putting in ntr. Whered you get that idea lol i was just clarifying.
No. Im not putting in ntr.

 

[TurboKinetics]

Came back here after i played the game to say, damn Turbo... right in the feels.
Also MC did not take his leather glove off since i saw him mentioning he worked at the docks, so pretty sure he's a hitman lol

It will make sense, um SoonTM.

 

[Cra1g281]

It will make sense, um SoonTM.

ohhh mystery and intriuge i like it, keeping us on the hook so to speak

 

[TurboKinetics]

do you need to get the secret ending to be on the harem path or am i reading that last line from the update wrong?

Short answer, yes there is a seperate path for the end of chapter 1 on the harem path

 

[TurboKinetics]

What no father growing up does to a mf, mashallah, they come and make demands, their pecker can't get hard without another man's cock presence in the screen, wallahi.

Addition: Though I wonder about this game dev making, are you going to add NTS, Sharing, Swinging? from you sig and your comments prior (here and multiple threads), it seems like you're a sharing fan. (which to me, still a cuck genre)

Im a fan of nts swinging and some select nts sharing. No im not putting in NTS. Although technically the harem ending is reverse nts lol

 

[Mcknobz33]

Short answer, yes there is a seperate path for the end of chapter 1 on the harem path

so english isn't my first language so i may have worded it wrong but i am still confused, do i need to get the secret ending to be on the harem route or will there be a choice later on to get it?

 

[TurboKinetics]

The choice to select the harem ending is much later but to unlock that choice you have to unlock it in chapter 1

 

[TurboKinetics]

so english isn't my first language so i may have worded it wrong but i am still confused, do i need to get the secret ending to be on the harem route or will there be a choice later on to get it?

The choice to select the harem ending is much later but to unlock that choice you have to unlock it in chapter 1

 

[Mcknobz33]

The choice to select the harem ending is much later but to unlock that choice you have to unlock it in chapter 1

so i do need to get the secret ending to do so?

 

[TurboKinetics]

so i do need to get the secret ending to do so?

If you didnt meet capt woof woof you did not unlock the harem ending

 

[chicken head]

Fan of nts making a harem game WOWRespect

 

[Mcknobz33]

If you didnt meet capt woof woof you did not unlock the harem ending

and you only meet them by picking the choice that gives you the secret ending

 

[chicken head]

ABSOLUTELY NO NTR