Interesting plot, with the conflict between mother and daughter, tolerable drawing, but absolutely delusional script....
It feels like the author first writes the script, and then remembers that the update must be crammed into the mandatory sex scene and begins to break the story under the scene that does not fit there.... as a result, the scenes turn out absurd, not natural and not logical, and the characters are just crazy....
Conclusion!
I think the author needs to decide whether he is creating a story or porn, because clearly one conflicts with the other.
As far as I'm concerned, it's a common problem among VN authors who insert sex scenes into their stories just because they have to be there, for whatever reason, and not because of plot considerations.
If there was a choice of how to handle situations, it would be a different conversation, but there is no choice!
At the moment it is ★★☆☆☆ (2/5), in the future if the author will decide and correct himself, then ★★★★☆ (4/5) and if the project will be lesbian incest, then all ★★★★★ (5/5).
PS. The first time I played version 0.4 and barely passed it - quit three times, but came back to find out what will be next!
In 0.5 all the same - the first scene and I turned off the game!
I apologize for the English!
It feels like the author first writes the script, and then remembers that the update must be crammed into the mandatory sex scene and begins to break the story under the scene that does not fit there.... as a result, the scenes turn out absurd, not natural and not logical, and the characters are just crazy....
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Conclusion!
I think the author needs to decide whether he is creating a story or porn, because clearly one conflicts with the other.
As far as I'm concerned, it's a common problem among VN authors who insert sex scenes into their stories just because they have to be there, for whatever reason, and not because of plot considerations.
If there was a choice of how to handle situations, it would be a different conversation, but there is no choice!
At the moment it is ★★☆☆☆ (2/5), in the future if the author will decide and correct himself, then ★★★★☆ (4/5) and if the project will be lesbian incest, then all ★★★★★ (5/5).
PS. The first time I played version 0.4 and barely passed it - quit three times, but came back to find out what will be next!
In 0.5 all the same - the first scene and I turned off the game!
I apologize for the English!