VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Free Pass [v1.8] [After Choices]

This AVN has gone through a lot of ups and downs in terms of development. The dev fought through a rework, active fan feedback and their own challenges and finished the project. It's nice to see an AVN like this get completed so congratulations to talented developer. We need to support devs like this one.

From a production standpoint, the renders are amazing and the women are all beautiful (Joon is just drop dead gorgeous). Clearly the production is a 5/5. Where it falls short, however, is the writing. Developers sometimes feel as long as they can get some solid animation and some beautiful renders, the H scenes will be fine. IMO, they forget the N in AVN stand for novel. Yes, the images are great but the writing needs to be solid as well. Erotic writing is hard and is often overlooked in these AVNs and this one is no exception. There are a couple really good H scenes, but for the most part they are dissapointing.

It's not just the H scenes. While the concept is really good, the writing is awkward. It's readable, but it doesn't really translate well and it pulls the reader out of the game. I know English is not the developers 1st language, but if they really want a top notch production, they need to get a writer in and make some improvements for me to rate this any higher than average. In the meantime, you should download it and make up your own mind. It's worth it just to see some amazing renders. Just don't expect much from the story.

This game could easily deserve 5/5 stars.

BUT there´s a serious downfall.

To me "lesbian friendly" means, lesbian content is not to be ruled out.
For the game it means: "lesbian only".

It wasn´t even that bad, if the game wouldn´t constantly remind you of missin content, in case of your coice for "lesbian friendly".

That´s a big flaw, most likely based in the (suspected devs american origin) american typical labeling of straight/lesbian/gay!

Fist, I can´t get a grasp of why gay sex between M/M and W/W has such different impact on american mindsets.

Second, since americans (mostly americans although nothing is wrong with that) are so focused on anal sex, why would they dispise M/M gay sex that much?

I would´ve given only 2*, if it wasnt for the inclusion of that trans character.

No matter what, implementing such exclusive paths and constantly rubbing in what you´re missing by choosing a path does the game nothing good.

I whish I could give a better review. I seriously do! It could´ve been an easy 4* if not for the constant rubbing in of the *missed* content due to the mislabeled path coice.
Small mistake, BIG impact.
Let´s hope, the just started Part 2 will avoid these mistakes.

I still enjpoyed the game very much

It have been a while since I played this game, but What I distinctly remember is that I don't like this game, particularly because of damsel in distress type of fmc that is ripe for exploitation, and all other characters surrounding her are hyneas be it her husband, her "female friend" or other entanglement.

It is personally my preference in AVNs is that either they go full bonkers where porn loguic applies or they remain grounded, it is this middle line that many AVN tries to walk is where issues occur to me, especially when the main character driving the narrative is so bland and uninteresting and the character that are driving the change are also nothing to write home about, they have no personality that is driving that corruption of fmc . And its seems because they are serving an ideology rather than any personality trait, which is boring, as AVNs are interesting because of personality that inhabit them, when AVNs loose that anchor , they loose me as a player , and that is teh biggest issue with this AVN.

There isn't anything technically wrong with this game, but it made very few daring choices.

What I liked: the MC is quite nice looking. In fact, all characters look quite nice.

What I wished to see more in the game: paths with MC spiraling down into insanity. There are very few scenes that hint at it. I fact, the MC is tamer than the average OF girl.

What I didn't like: too much text. What is the point?

It took a long time for me to get round to playing this and im happy to say i really enjoyed this game.
From what i can tell the story has had a few changes throughout development so some older reviews are for a different version, however i believe the finished project is great.

The main character is beautiful, the progress of the Sukhhon route in particular was fantastic and tbh i found some moments heartwarming.

Took a few hours to finish so it wont hurt to check this out.

I look forward to trying out more of this creators projects and i hope they keep up the great work.

It becomes pretty obvious the game REALLY wants you to be a lesbian and cheat. If you do neither, character interactions start to feel almost schizophrenic with missing dialogue and characters whose introductions were dodged just pop into the story.

I mostly persevered to see how begrudged the choices would be to stay with the husband. Divorce was constantly brought up even if you didn't choose it as an option but eventually you can get an ending where his penis triples in size and he's a dom out of nowhere. So I liked that particular ending, but most of the choices were just process of elimination because the other option was a turn off.

This game has really nice graphics and very attractive female characters. The story could be really good, but stays under the expectactions. The corruption and evolution of the main character is not that smooth. Could be more ideas in the story and also for the ends. The ending is a bit dissapoitning. One scene and done.

+ The game has a good story.
+ Some of the characters in the game are very well introduced.
+ The character modeling in the game is very nice.
+ We can choose the endings of the game depending on our choices.
+ We can have different relationships, so we completely choose the opposite sex we love.
+ We can get whatever we want in the game.

Free Pass: Season 1 [v1.22] [After Choices]


Pros

• Excellent quality of image renders.
• Fairly good quality of animations.
• Playability, performance and grammar are all just OK no issue

Cons

• Lack of genuine or more of fictitious for sexuality especially with outside character
• Lack of seductiveness in sexual approach

TLDR
Good Game.. Good Pacing.. Amazing Visuals.. Above Average Story line..
Kinda rushed ending.. Slightly iffy dialogues and language .. Hot sex and many kinky taboo fetishes explored but many paths left unexplored.

Overall give it a go and play through and remember that choices matter. Its a good game that is fairly short and is fun for the time it lasts.

Amazing scenes, very realistic looking art, very asian looking FMC, she was just great i loved her.
But more the other women were all great too.
i played Lesbian path, and then dicks allowed path.
took a break between the two because i was kind of bored with the game.
i have like 4 games or maybe even more where i am stuck at this same stance, of taking a break between them, but now hopefully that one is down, another will be finished soon.

Such a great game but soooooo short. The dev has a unique style of character models and the story was funny well atleast the fem only side of things. However as i said...its too short. I am hoping they will work on a game that has abit more content.

If I want to rate this game from one to ten, this game will get a score of 3! The story of the game was very weak so that it did not attract you to continue playing the game, the sexy scenes were very poorly done and the graphics of the game were not good. In general, I think it was not worth my time and I skiped most of the scenes.

The quality of the game picks up the deeper you go into it, as it adds music, more sensible plot directions, and several other things into the game.

However, for a vast majority of the game, you're playing a thoroughly disjointed story with very little in-world logic where characters cease to exist if you're not interested in them, with a repetitive bird chirping sound that is honestly worse than having no sound at all.

That being said, the visuals are obviously quite appealing and it is true the game picks up quality in the latter half, but it is unfortunately not enough to compensate for the 75% content of subpar quality that the game has otherwise. As such, I cannot give it a more acceptable rating.

Honestly like many pointed out , the writing is subpar or at best average ... however with such a presentation , artistic flair , those renders , and the cultural references and choices , makes it stand alone quite well enough .

And the choices and paths , while not working out perfectly (navigating toward a desired outcome during the endgame party was annoying) , but are varied and decent enough .

I'm guessing some of the ratings are knee jerk reactions to how the story ended and felt rushed , but i don't care . The site is full of top rated games with equally subpar writing . The game standout on its visuals and choice of asian MC .

I think this was one of the best game ever, the MC is incredibly sexy in a genuine way, both phisically and mentally. I love the contrast between her sexuality and her home culture.
Loved also the fact that you can personalize the path you want her to take, leaving room for all fetishes and keeping the story coherent.
Great graphics and animations, added to lovely playability.

What the game has to offer in terms of renders, it is laking in depth of story

Gameplay
Music is nice but is lacking voice over sex scenes. What I did not liked is that you do not have a clear galery mode to review all possible scenes at ease.

Girls
The girls are amazing, with Yoon being a welcomed change to the general trope. I am not a big fan of the tran content and the fact that it could be disabled but keep lesbian was a bit annoying.

Story
Simple story but enjoyable. Nice to see the corruption of Yoon and different routes it can take. It also go into some fetishes and roleplays. If the story is the main aspect for you, you might found this one a bit sholow and not congruent with itself

a VN with very good graphics and many fetishes. Story is quite implausible but interesting. Characters are very well defined. Its weakness is choices, there aren't real different paths and choices matter only in the ending and not so much. Ending is another bad part of this game, I really didn't liked how it has been structured. By the way this is a good product and it worths to be played.

This has been an absolutely Amazing game. Not just as NTR, but it dives into a bunch of other emotions as well as kinks. It never overstays its welcome with any of them (even though sometimes you may wish it stayed a bit longer) but pays off on most of the things you'd like to see. The MC isn't the 'hottest thing on the planet' but fits well the character she's meant to portray. And the story really is happy to deliver on emotional ties between various characters (including poly relationships) without necessarily being a harem-only style game. Really, its worth playing, give it a try. I can't wait to see more games from this developer!

Taking off 2 stars because the final update is straight garbage. Totally rushed story ending, and the renders went to crap, with no animations at all. I don't how you can take such a massive step backwords. It's still worth checking out as everything up to the final chapter is really good.