RPGM - Free Use City [v.0128] [Johnny Bro Art]

This is quite my jam : Milfs all over younger shorter MC, incest and free use.

The dev clearly put considerable effort in the animation department, and this is quite early but I already would like some changes (based on personal preferences) :

- Larger dick on MC. A huge dong would be more fitting with how voluptuous the babes are. It would create better range of motion in animations, and simply had to the sexual fantasy element. Plus, the "guide" character already has a huge one, so why not MC.

- Prettier character models. I'm all for curves (even unrealistic ones), but the models could be a little more balanced, making them more shapely and a little less blob-like. Also, Abigail's face is not very attractive.

- I'm not gay but MC is too ugly and its distracting. His chest wobble like breast during scenes, and some body parts makes him weirdly buff for how short he is. He simply looks like a 40 year old who had surgeries to pass as a young dude. I would go for a more coherent appearance : slimmer, more pretty boy look (I swear I'm not gay).

- Better story pacing. The premise is not bad and I love that we get lewd stuff early, but still none of it feel earned because there is no intrigue, no tension, no build-up whatsoever. I think the dev could use some inspo from games with similar premise, like demon deals, to achieve better story beats. I know it's early, but right now the game is a glorified scenes gallery.

This game has potential, but I think it isn't very appealing right now. I would say the animations are too large for the size of the story atm.

Overall, I wanted easier control over the videos, but I understand much of that is the RPGmaker engine. I wandered into the gallery at one point and I was stuck in what felt like 5 minutes of videos- that I'd seem before, without any way to exit. I guess I could have walked away.
I would say the videos are good, but there are currently too many of them. This is a very short game right now, but it is 2GB. I was hoping for more game and less video player.

However, it is a well done set of videos. I think the dev did a good job on them, but I think they have set too many for each sex interaction. I'd suggest 1 or 2 vids rather than more than 5 in some cases.

Maybe it is just that I wanted more game with my Porn game.
Enjoyable, but I'm not sure that I'll be coming back.

The animations are really well done, but there are dozens of completely empty buildings that serve no purpose in the game. When you enter them, all you see is "NEXT UPDATE." If those buildings are empty and unused, why are we even able to enter them? Every time after seeing the "NEXT UPDATE" sign, it throws you back to the center of the map—then it's back to walking again...
You as a player have absolutely no idea where to go or what to do.

For the Dev- I really hope you remove the unnecessary and empty content and polish the game a bit more. Because the animations you’ve really done a great job with them.

Game Version: v.0127
Score: (TBD after substantial content)
Value: (TBD after substantial content)

Not a Full Review...
This is mostly just a quick review as the current amount of content in the game is barebones. However, the premise of the plot is interesting and the level of freedom established in names/relationships as well as engagement in lewd content is strong enough to warrant a cursory 4/5 stars.

For a brief rundown there are two (2) paths you can choose right from the beginning that will dictate the content you see, but the quests themselves follow the overarching plotline. As of now five (5) of the six (6) total lewd scenes are locked behind the "King" path with the early stage quests heavily favoring it.

The lewd scenes themselves are rather pleasant given they're done in what appears to be VAM. Some issues become apparent though in that the animations are split into several long sections that autoplay rather than using seamless loops. Additionally, there is a feeling of inhuman movements as some of the animations are either too stiff or jittery. Overall it's an area that does need improvement given the theme, but it's not egregious enough to detract from a player's enjoyment.

To the Developer
Creating a game is hard, especially so when diving into it without industry experience or a skilled team to back you up. The purpose of this review is twofold:

1. To generate a bit more traffic with another score and
2. To notify future players of the current state of the game

Don't hesitate to reach out to other developers or join discords asking for advice as most developers are open to sharing their knowledge. You have a strong base for this project that I'm intrigued to see where you'll take it!

its a good start of the game, animations are smooth for rpgm i would recomend a different start intro made little sense for an alien to show up through a portal and how the mc just happen to be there.

Uhm, yeah, this isn't really anything yet. You can download it to look at the animations, they are indeed very jiggly and kinda fun.
Atm, this is just a video player. The fun of a free use setting is exihibitionism and the intrigue of a taboo being casually broken. As such, it needs to have well constructed scenes, that play around with the fun weirdness of a free use world. This game doesn't do that. So, yeah, my advise is to wait until these things are implemented.