Ver: 5.100
Excellent game. The writing is above the usual porn-writing in a lot of these VN's and I appreciate the verity in appearances for the LIs.
My only issue is that the actual romance for all the woman feel a little cookie cutter (meet, date, kiss, fuck) and feels a bit rushed. You go from being strangers to having one of them tell you they understand the problems you're going through and that they are here for you within a week or so. If the author ever wants to improve on anything, I would just have more time pass in-between stuff, just so it feels like these people are actually getting to know each other.
However, it's not enough for any points to be taken out. Highly recommend you take the time out to read it. It's about 4-6 hours long right now, but has a great deal of content, lewd or otherwise.
Excellent game. The writing is above the usual porn-writing in a lot of these VN's and I appreciate the verity in appearances for the LIs.
My only issue is that the actual romance for all the woman feel a little cookie cutter (meet, date, kiss, fuck) and feels a bit rushed. You go from being strangers to having one of them tell you they understand the problems you're going through and that they are here for you within a week or so. If the author ever wants to improve on anything, I would just have more time pass in-between stuff, just so it feels like these people are actually getting to know each other.
However, it's not enough for any points to be taken out. Highly recommend you take the time out to read it. It's about 4-6 hours long right now, but has a great deal of content, lewd or otherwise.