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NeonGhosts as usual I love your well thought post and onto why you do certain things. I do have a question if it isn't to much of a spoiler. When Risa gave Guy the drugs is she actually trying to stay clean or was it because she was going to be searched. I want to say she wants to stay clean for real especially after she told her story but it was a question that was in the back of my mind since I played. Also I love the Risa storyline it's my favorite right now initially I had my doubts but you managed to surprise me with how good it turned out to be
 
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NeonGhosts as usual I love your well thought post and onto why you do certain things. I do have a question if it isn't to much of a spoiler. When Risa gave Guy the drugs is she actually trying to stay clean or was it because she was going to be searched. I want to say she wants to stay clean for real especially after she told her story but it was a question that was in the back of my mind since I played. Also I love the Risa storyline it's my favorite right now initially I had my doubts but you managed to surprise me with how good it turned out to be
I know I'm not Neon, but I have a thought on that.
I really think she wants to get clean that's why she gave Guy the drugs.
 
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I know I'm not Neon, but I have a thought on that.
I really think she wants to get clean that's why she gave Guy the drugs.
When you tell her that you called the police to have Lucien arrested,
you see in her eyes that you are her lifesaver,
and that she sincerely wants to get clean and get on the right path.
Yeah that's why I think she wants to get clean but idk maybe im just reading to much into or just irrational thoughts. But her giving Guy the drugs when she knows she will be searched is giving me some doubts or second guesses for some reason. Since they aren't gone or flushed down the toilet. I know the reason she bought them and all that but at the same it feels like letting guy hold onto them but not getting rid of them could open a door for her to talk him into or seduce him into giving them back later.
 

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This is an actionable complaint. I'm going to add the option for Guy to turn off the camera, rather than watch it. I think that'll be the easiest way to please everyone, without having to break the 4th wall and ask the player if they want to watch it. Sorry about that! I kicked around some ways to solve it, and somehow never ended up at the simplest one.
Thank you so much for your response. I play the game kind of middle of the road and stay away from the very dark stuff, so it surprised me. But otherwise really enjoy the game. Keep up the good work.
 
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The bar is set so low here. Literally ANYTHING can get a 5 star review from someone here. Every time I see someone crowing about "excellent writing" I am immediately thinking to myself yeah because no one reads actual novels anymore. Don't get me wrong. This is imo the best game currently on here but it is far from perfect. And don't get me started on the white knights and fanboys. Smh. People need to touch grass once in a while.
Can you recommend us some of those books that are better than FiN? I mean books about a guy going around grooming girls and the such.
 

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The bar is set so low here. Literally ANYTHING can get a 5 star review from someone here. Every time I see someone crowing about "excellent writing" I am immediately thinking to myself yeah because no one reads actual novels anymore. Don't get me wrong. This is imo the best game currently on here but it is far from perfect. And don't get me started on the white knights and fanboys. Smh. People need to touch grass once in a while.
That's true. No sex total blueball games get their fanbois and white knights, and for some reason in some cases seems to actually be against the rules to give them a bad review.
 

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Can you recommend us some of those books that are better than FiN? I mean books about a guy going around grooming girls and the such.
I don't see Guy as grooming the girls. At least not on my playthrough.
 

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NeonGhosts as usual I love your well thought post and onto why you do certain things. I do have a question if it isn't to much of a spoiler. When Risa gave Guy the drugs is she actually trying to stay clean or was it because she was going to be searched. I want to say she wants to stay clean for real especially after she told her story but it was a question that was in the back of my mind since I played. Also I love the Risa storyline it's my favorite right now initially I had my doubts but you managed to surprise me with how good it turned out to be
Doesn't she says she threw them in the toilet? Or is that route dependent? I assume, unless lying(I am watching you Risa:mad::Kappa:) that she is trying to get clean :unsure:
 

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Really enjoyed the update. I could be wrong, but it's looking more and more to me that Lucien possibly has connections to several of the characters in this one. Obviously, Risa of course. It's looking like he was the guy who photographed Ashe and subsequentially got his ass beat to a pulp by her dad and he lied about it being a car accident. Risa mentioned that he changes his name a lot, so that accounts for the name not matching and seems like his MO. As an aside, it doesn't sound like he fucks any of the girls he shoots, maybe he can't because Ashe's dad cut his balls off, hopefully anyway, he deserves it. I also think he was the loan shark that Brent owed money to and was the one who tried to force Nicki into shoot a gangbang porno, that is definitely his MO. Again, used a different name. Finally, he is a drug dealer so Gabby's dad might actually be working for him. To me, as much of the main villain he is in this story, it would make sense to have him connected to more than one of the LI's. Just my thoughts anyways. Looking forward to seeing how everything plays out in this one.
 
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I don't see Guy as grooming the girls. At least not on my playthrough.
The thing is you can't compare novels with cyoa stories. While one player goes full dark Guy, another goes full good Guy and another one goes Corruption route. That means the writer has to tie in 3 stories that exclude each other with hundred of little permutations and combinations like if you watch Pepper webcam show or if don't. Some choices are minor and don't matter much but other will change the story you're reading.

Still I'm really interestd to hear about those great porn novels that other dude was talking about.
 
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I was starting to get concerned whether you'd have the stubbornness to get through the arduous and ungrateful work that is developing AVNs but that post has convinced me this project has a long-term future. Kudos for even responding honestly.
A lot of times people will only raise their voice when they're unhappy about something and are invested.
So, to make a counterpoint: I look forward to see your story continue since I happen to really, really like how you're cooking.
 

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The thing is you can't compare novels with cyoa stories. While one player goes full dark Guy, another goes full good Guy and another one goes Corruption route. That means the writer has to tie in 3 stories that exclude each other with hundred of little permutations and combinations like if you watch Pepper webcam show or if don't. Some choices are minor and don't matter much but other will change the story you're reading.

Still I'm really interestd to hear about those great porn novels that other dude was talking about.
Exactly which is why I said Guy doesn't seem like a groomer in how I play the game but you made it sound like that's the whole story.

There are some great stories with porn but I doubt there are many better than this.
 

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Doesn't she says she threw them in the toilet? Or is that route dependent? I assume, unless lying(I am watching you Risa:mad::Kappa:) that she is trying to get clean :unsure:
I don't recall that unless I missed it but Guy had the drugs or at least the bottle on him when Owens searched him
 

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I don't recall that unless I missed it but Guy had the drugs or at least the bottle on him when Owens searched him
When you call the cops or you don't really she will discard the drugs, if it's you call the cops she trusted you and gave it to you.
if you didn't call she will flush it in the toilet.
she really wants to be clean
 
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