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ForeverLosing

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It works perfectly on the latest joiplay. I notice that a lot of people seem to have an issue trying to play it on android so I might write a guide for what to download, install to properly play the game if I have some time left so that the developer can link that in the OP for android players.
I would be honored to
 

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Sorry! I want to keep it a surprise for a couple of reasons:
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I see since technically in some paths or NTS Lovers path you impregnated her or can impregnate her , i thought she would be open to Raw maybe since technically the other guys cant impregnate her right now since you already fertilized her first if it ever got to that point
 
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ForeverLosing I have some unsolicited suggestions and advice.

about galleries in Ren'Py:

They are very annoying, finicky, and requires a lot of debugging to get right. There are multiple developers that have given up on their project and abandoned it because the gallery didn't work properly and it was too much effort to get it to work. IF you decide to still implement such a system I highly recommend you keep it to a gallery you enter through the main menu and not a gallery you access from within the game itself to keep technical work to a minimum. Ren'Py really isn't built for having scenes with multiple permutations, you'll be fighting against its limitations if you do so. A solution some developers choose is to have textless scenes in galleries, but that doesn't fit your work.

Personally I think it's better to not have a gallery because it forces players to play through the game and try multiple paths, all of which are good and they might learn to enjoy as well even if it wasn't their first choice. Having a gallery would make it the easiest least friction choice. A lot of new players will just download a complete save file and skim the gallery which doesn't work for your game as it's a writing centric piece of work with art just being supplemental.

About "visual indications of choice & consequences like color coded text or symbols":

This can actually limit your work and make it way harder for you to bring an illusion of choice to choices in your work. It might also remove some eroticism by lessening ambiguity on why Cassandra makes some choices. For example envision a future sex scene where the MC can make Cassandra decide on her own what to do and different conditions result in her making different choices for herself. If you know exactly why she chose to react a certain way it removes this ambiguous tension to the scene.

A benefit of a system like this would only come if you add such a large amount of choice & consequences to the game that most players miss it and would only appreciate the reactiveness of the game by seeing evidence of it directly through symbols/colorcoding.

I think the system you have right now is perfect, the colored text right now indicates what the choices will affect but does not show the actual outcome of those choices, it gives the player a sense of direction while there is still mystery and uncertainty about what the choice exactly did. If you ask me you WANT the player to not know exactly what changed or happened purely because of the setting and themes of the game.
 

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i thought she would be open to Raw maybe since technically the other guys cant impregnate her right now since you already fertilized her first if it ever got to that point
It's not all about fertility to Cassandra though, on her wedding day under the eyes of the gods she made a vow to never sleep with another man, and that's what she has to overcome. And, as far as she knows, the gods were actually watching; she is the champion of one after all.

So per corruption progression, first she'll convince herself that anal isn't sleeping around (poophole loophole), then that condom sex isn't it. It seems silly and arbitrary to us but it's quite important to her character who really does value her marriage with the MC and her vows.

So when you take all of that into account, Cassandra falling upon another cock is quite the corrupting moment. And I want to make it special. And unexpected.


ForeverLosing I have some unsolicited suggestions and advice.
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Thanks, I'll refer to this whenever anybody asks why this game doesn't have a gallery :ROFLMAO: no just kidding though, you bring up a lot of valuable points and I agree with all of them. Thanks for looking out for me! At this time I will avoid coding a gallery and limit the amount of choice indicators (though I do still think I need one for the debased trait)
 

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ForeverLosing I have some unsolicited suggestions and advice.

about galleries in Ren'Py:

They are very annoying, finicky, and requires a lot of debugging to get right. There are multiple developers that have given up on their project and abandoned it because the gallery didn't work properly and it was too much effort to get it to work. IF you decide to still implement such a system I highly recommend you keep it to a gallery you enter through the main menu and not a gallery you access from within the game itself to keep technical work to a minimum. Ren'Py really isn't built for having scenes with multiple permutations, you'll be fighting against its limitations if you do so. A solution some developers choose is to have textless scenes in galleries, but that doesn't fit your work.

Personally I think it's better to not have a gallery because it forces players to play through the game and try multiple paths, all of which are good and they might learn to enjoy as well even if it wasn't their first choice. Having a gallery would make it the easiest least friction choice. A lot of new players will just download a complete save file and skim the gallery which doesn't work for your game as it's a writing centric piece of work with art just being supplemental.

About "visual indications of choice & consequences like color coded text or symbols":

This can actually limit your work and make it way harder for you to bring an illusion of choice to choices in your work. It might also remove some eroticism by lessening ambiguity on why Cassandra makes some choices. For example envision a future sex scene where the MC can make Cassandra decide on her own what to do and different conditions result in her making different choices for herself. If you know exactly why she chose to react a certain way it removes this ambiguous tension to the scene.

A benefit of a system like this would only come if you add such a large amount of choice & consequences to the game that most players miss it and would only appreciate the reactiveness of the game by seeing evidence of it directly through symbols/colorcoding.

I think the system you have right now is perfect, the colored text right now indicates what the choices will affect but does not show the actual outcome of those choices, it gives the player a sense of direction while there is still mystery and uncertainty about what the choice exactly did. If you ask me you WANT the player to not know exactly what changed or happened purely because of the setting and themes of the game.
i don't mean the telltale sign of " X will remember that". i mean, the best example i can think of, very ironically it is from "The Eclipse Witch". Where dialogue from a scene changes, as a branch and that branch is shown bottom right. Depending on the context it might be "anal experience", "virginity".
I haven't analyzed how this can be created nor i tried it myself in my own game, if i make something. Non-hentai games, i think i did see one example but i can't remember the name or my memory is just too foggy.
I don't mean illusion of choice, just a little hint of a scene or a character doing something.
It seems what the game has so far is just enough,coloring specific words to indicate what you done.
 

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Sure. I wouldn't mind seeing a reference pic or something though.

Is POV creampie cleaning too dirty? lol I haven't drawn it yet but have been dreaming of it
No, no, no! Not too dirty!
It's almost unique content! There is so little of this even in games, not to mention video platforms.(POV version) We 100% need this, just knowing this can attract a lot of people's attention. More POV, especially with all kinds of actions that are considered humiliating in society.
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There are games where FMC falsifies multiple times or even the entire game, eventually maintaining "fidelity". There are fans of such content. But if you overdo it more than 2-3 times, then the MC himself stops believing in what is happening and thinks that it is a fake.(and the viewer too) The main thing here is not to overdo it. In my opinion, it would be great to have 1 branch where she will do this without warning and in the most rude and humiliating way possible in order to trample the MC as morally as possible. the 2nd with falsifications and the 3rd with 2-3 falsifications.
It's not all about fertility to Cassandra though, on her wedding day under the eyes of the gods she made a vow to never sleep with another man, and that's what she has to overcome. And, as far as she knows, the gods were actually watching; she is the champion of one after all.

So per corruption progression, first she'll convince herself that anal isn't sleeping around (poophole loophole), then that condom sex isn't it. It seems silly and arbitrary to us but it's quite important to her character who really does value her marriage with the MC and her vows.

So when you take all of that into account, Cassandra falling upon another cock is quite the corrupting moment. And I want to make it special. And unexpected.
This is a great vision of the situation! Something that is so much missing in many similar games! She doesn't stupidly throw herself at a dick or not attach importance to it, she deceives herself and others, looking for loopholes, slowly falling into the abyss of passions and losing the battle a little bit at a time. She's strong, powerful, and cool, but the most interesting thing is what's going on in her head and how she implements it.
 
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In my opinion, it would be great to have 1 branch where she will do this without warning and in the most rude and humiliating way possible in order to trample the MC as morally as possible. the 2nd with falsifications and the 3rd with 2-3 falsifications.
This is the ideal I'd love to do if it wasn't so much work haha. But I'll take your suggestions into account and try not to overdo it. It's just a trope I've seen two dozen times that I want to do properly, you know?
 
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In the beginning of the game, when Danton and wife are in the bathroom. Is there path in which something happens there? I might be wrong but I feel Iike I did trigger a scene there last time I played. Its in day 4 if you are wondering.
 
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