VN - Ren'Py - FurrHouse [Ch.22] [Chimeros]

The game delivers an enjoyable and engaging experience, combining entertaining gameplay with thoughtful world-building that helps bring its setting to life. From the moment you start, it’s clear that care has been put into creating a universe that feels cohesive, immersive, and full of personality. The environments, background details, and lore all work together to make the world feel worth exploring rather than just serving as a backdrop for the story.

Fantastic, a nice variety of character designs, the voice acting is great and plenty of sex scenes, plus a really imagined world and a real treat for those who prefer to play as a futa protag instead of a dude.

PROS
+ Story is kind of interesting with all details about Avalonians (non-humans general name), Enchanters (MC is, and his mother was one of them [he didn't knew that tho], something like between Avalonians and the humans), MC being like his father Keanu (he was a Ayranit, a winged demon with glowing eyes, powerful, and dangerous, he went back Vanuatu [where he is from] to make sure MC or Avalonians he is close not in danger because of him, and MC's Ayranit appearance is hidden by powerful spell put on him by MJ [Mary-Jane, fox house keeper {connected to the house by magic, and responsible for security, help Enchanters with management if needed as well, and quite f them they are spouse of the Enchanter, and polygamy in houses is common with members as well as it seems} of house Daisy in] and Elaria [She is a wolf]), and his mother wanting to protect/hide him from Lux Arcana (A organization responsible for ensuring that Houses [most houses are engaged in trade r magical research, some of them specialize on hunting dangerous creates or ciriminals as well, Arcana does hire these houses when they need, and even Avalonians or Enchanters who don't belong to houses can be hired as a mercenaries by Arcana Offices in major cities, and since their house broke up Chandra, and Daisy were working as freelancers for some time as well] and Avalonians follow the rules, and don't interfere in humans lives, or politics, and they are after the Ayranits, and dragons, and they hunt them down, etc, just because of some Ayranits tried to coup with attempting to assasinate Triumvirate), how two members of Daisy's (She is a dog) house, George and Ellen betrayed them, told Lux ARcana about Roxanne's connection to the Ayranits, and she ran away to live with Keanu, leaving MC with his grandparents, since Lux Arcana has no power at Oceania/Vanuatu, house Daisy in (according to Lux Arcana each house must have a human or half-human wizard, and six Avalonians, and not more than that, so that one house can have too much influence) was able to come clean thanks to MJ's family connections, after all this info dumped on us by Dasily as a newly awaken Enchanter, and keeps dumping even more info, says she hopes we become the Enchanter of their house, wake up MJ from 20 years of hibernation (she seems put herself into a trance to maintain the house, because the magic of the house fades over time without an Echanter, and impossible to restore it, and the house Daisy in is losing it's magic for some time, so she wants MC to become their Enchanter ASAP, and seems like it's incredibly difficult to find a replacement for the Keeper or Enchanter, and even the clan succeeds they still have to reconfigure the house magic fro mscratch which is more difficult than doing it with a new house, so usually in this situations the clan either ceases to exist or if new Enchanter or Keeper is found, they buy a new house, but that's hard as well, because for buying new house clan must be fully formed, and setting up magical field around it can take years, so it's crucial MC to become Enchanter to avoid all of these, because since he is son of the previous Enchanter house will accept only him), etc, even tho Chandra (a snowcat from her house, and both seems seeing MC's mother as their own mother [because both how she treat them, and they were being orphans, and they were raised by Elaria's mother Freya]) is skeptical about this whole thing. Eitheway Mc wents to the house, learns he has a month to find a Housekeeper, and year to recruit rest of members (currently he has 2 members, 3 if Fleur (Racoon girl looks like zombie with hangover according to Daisy lol) joins as well, and like that our journey starts, the game keeps dumping more info/lore in you over, and over again, but this should be enough to make you understand what you should wait from this game.
+ The game has a good sense of humor, lots of funny scenes, some memes, and irl references.
+ The whole idea of each race having its own advantages and disadvantages was a small thing, but immersive from a story point of view. And there is some rivalry going on between races as well, and they come after you as a Enchanter since you take too much attention to yourself, and the game gives you a choice as a player to deal with which ones you want.
+ The game gives you the option to choose what MJ will gonna call you at some point, which is quite immersive, and there are some handwritten ones she has funny interactions as well
+ The House thing is nice, especially how they take the vow one by one, which was quite touching.
+ MC is kind of likeable, he is not stupid, he has the guts, has a sense of humor as well, like saying ''Yer Wizard, MC, ha-ha'' after learning his powers, and becomes more powerful as the story goes on.
+ Daisy is an interesting character as well. Normally, she constantly blushes and gets shy, but when it comes to certain stuff, she is really good, like driving, she turns into a badass girl, and it's funny AF how she listened to some commands like ''Kneel down, Daisy! Now!'' with saying ''Woof'' back in day LOL
+ MJ has likeable personality as well, she is bit tough, and kind of funny gal, like how she calls Daisy & Chandra to hugh her with saying ''Come here, and hug yo mama, lil' bitches.'' with love or how she keeps calling MC ''Dawg'' and some girls ''Dawgette'' and she has weird Bob Marley wibe with all that smoking, and chill act as well LOL. And when you say you fucked someone's wife, she is like ''Don't worry, dawg, mamma has your back! While you have Ophelia's back, haha'' LMAO. And her relationship with MC is really fun and lovely.
+ Magic is useful in this game. In fact, Daisy has a Vintage Impala looking exactly new, and traveling at the speed of sound! As MC told ''Holy Shit!'' In fact, all beastmen can turn into animal forms, we even saw Chandra turn into a big damn cat, and they traveled when he was on her back
+ Not for everything, but at least for some stuff like choosing to be on the path of side girls, etc, you have the choice of power.
+ Some characters look quite hot, and have a kind of unique art style as well.
+ Even tho we never saw MC's face fully, the parts we saw, he doesn't look like your cliche MC, and he is not like weird skinny kid models.
+ The game has a good amount of content.

CONS
- Story is interesting, but it still feels like the game dumps too much lore into you, especially at the prologue, and there are way too many walls of text with not so much change of screen. And there are some stuff doesn't make sense at all, like they kept talking about how suspicious it would be to MC go office right away with members, etc, since it should take some time to save house, and MJ unless he shares blood with old Enchanter, yet they did exactly that, and officer Hanna was suspicious of them, DUH, and told them they will be watched by their agents, and their portal will be locked, and she told MC she is sure he is connected with his mother, DUH again... And then some houses wanted to meet with the MC, since he had taken too much attention to himself...
- Story content and lewd content balance is fine, but lewd content happens a bit too fast, like with almost no romance, girls are ready to throw their virginity to MC, and that feels a bit weird. And considering how they act, the clothes they wear around, and stuff like that, this game definitely feels like it lacks romance and any serious relationship.
- Even tho for rare examples like MJ it can be fun to see some people with weird accents when their numbers are higher than one person (which we have a lot of them in this game), it becomes a bit annoying.
- Placement of the text/dialogues is really bad.
- The screen is too damn bright/white, especially hard on the eyes if you save a lot, and play at night.
- Character models, especially body-wise, are quite fine, if you don't count characters having rough/old/wrinkly hand, feet, knee, or elbow textures for no reason, but the especially face designs have one big flaw, and it's the big foreheads of characters, like almost all of them have this problem, and it makes them look really bad. Some of the examples are: Esme, Iliria. Some other design problems I saw were MJ's tattoo looking too big and bad, Arwen's face looking unnecessarily old, and Iliria's design being disappointing for an elf; there are tons of amazing elf design references out there, so it makes no sense she is looking ''meh'' like this. And some hairs really look awful, like Almienna's hair.
- A lot of side characters look way better than main love interests, and I gotta say this is quite a big CON.
- Considering how powerful MC is, he doesn't look matching, he is not a skinny kid or something, but he has almost no bicep, tricep, shoulder, trap muscle, etc, he has abs for some reason, but lacks upper body muscles.
- The photos in MC's mother's room were literally photos from real people, and that looks way too weird, they should just use stock old guy models created with this game engine or something if they don't want to spend time to create unique grandparent models.
- Visually, the game looks low quality at a lot of stuff like Elaria's tattoos, certain background stuff, chouches, etc, or the animations, they especially look worse than the pictures in terms of quality, and have some visual bugs like clothes or underwear going inside body textures, or characters' feet being inside the ground, literally...
- Keyaru (MC's father) looks way too young, he looks like a 15-16-year-old teenager with a beard, in fact, MC looks way older than him, and if you show their pictures to two people to ask who the father is they would say MC is the father of Keyaru.
- Sex scenes feel a bit short in most cases.
- MC found an artifact weapon at chapter 20, and it was just a revolver, which is disappointing, imagine having a chance to give him a cool weapon like Grim Reaper style of Scythe, etc, but instead going for a revolver...

VERDICT
Weirdly enough, the strongest part of the game is the story, even tho it's not the most well-written one out there, but the game has way too many CONS, and without them, it's an average game at best, even tho it has potential to become more.

Story just dident capture me in any way and while there is choices im not really sure how much they matter in the end, in start it sounds like your forced to gain loyalty points and such to get to sex scenes, my issue is that what i dont care about someone and want nothing to do with her, then i would most likely lost points and it will be a bad ending and yes i tested that and you do get a game-over.....thats just not my type of game, i want freedom to fuck who i want to and not just a mindless fuckfest.

Next is the girls and cant say i found a single one hot in any way, not only are the renders below average its also purely aimed for players with big tit fetish and thats not me, i will never understand why there arent even a single smol catgirl or something in a game like this, furry should be cute not only pure bimbos which makes them look fake or like whores, so to put it stright theres 0 diversity in builds so it only favors to one type of players.

MC also feels way to weak for a half deamon, kinda just feels weird and as for the main story progress its slow very slow...

As for choices they are idiotic, it gives you shit like 3 choices when asked if you like a girl and all 3 replies is yes, yes, yes, the only diffrense is if its a dom/sub/both but there are no options....

If the game had some diversity in builds i would proberly hate rated it a bit higher but it is what is it is, those with the big tit fetish might love this one but for us that dont have it, its not really playable.

Really cool game.

Art is not the best but also okay.

There are dom and sub options, sadly not for every scene and not for every character.

Story is mostly interesting.

In furrphone where all characters chat and use emotes, that make them feel a bit more real.

Nice game

Story is great, moves along well. Maybe a tad too quickly, given how easily MC jumps into things despite being a neophyte. Characters are well fleshed out. Picking a favorite is tough, but I have to say MJ is my number 1 dawgette.

I legitimately, earnestly, love this game. Intended to pick at this games chapters slowly over the week but damn if I didn't get sucked in and knock all 15 current chapters back in a night.

I'm not gonna sit down here and type out an essay about how its a technical marvel or innovating in ways that have never before seen because it isn't. Nor does it need to.

Every part of this gem is just bursting through the flagstones with -heart- and its a damn delight.
Is the story particularly unique? No, but it's an incredibly effective supernatural vehicle for telling an emotionally centred story about found family, loneliness, the burdens of responsibility, and a dozen other very human young-adult experiences.

Are the LIs throwing aside all past harem babes? Nah, they're a pile of romance archetypes that have been around since the dawn of time, with just enough spice, subversion, and actually-made-me-laugh humour to raise an eyebrow and make them stand out amongst each of their many harem-girl counterparts.

More than that, they feel like fully realized characters, pick any of the five girls living in your house, (sans the goth trash panda because she just hasn't had much time in the sun) and I could tell you their goals, insecurities, and relatable reasons to be so hopelessly into our ogre-club swinging (possibly futa!!) MC, all of whom become infinitely more endearing for the effort.

Said oni dick demon MC is also an -actual fucking person- with a personality and everything!! Harem writers everywhere are sweating and clutching their pearls! Its refreshing, and rides the tight line between too much personality to get into roleplaying and too little to ever relate to quite well. I'd probably fall for this accidentally badass dipshit's big schmeat if I was a catgirl too.

I fucking love this shit, cringy references, awkwardly timed jokes, warts and all.
VERY excited to see more (dev pls let me fight-fuck Arwen)
(also rail Chandra's ass hard enough that the brat-cat shuts the fuck up, god I love her)

From the start story is not interesting so i used skip button all the time I just couldn't get into the story there is so much info forced upon you that you don't have time to process all of that.

MC is boring and not very smart he isn't even trying to train so he can be stronger.

I played until latest update chapther 15 and he is still WEAK he didn't get strong at all.

Either way this game has many problems which should be fixed first one is story and MC.

This is just short version other people have written more detailed review you can check.

Version Ch.20

A quirky, light hearted and fun modern fantasy story with lots of sexy girls of different races. The game gets updates at a good pace with each chapter worth around one hour of play and there are now twenty of them.

I last reviewed Furr in Chapter 11 and figured now it's a good time to do a quick reconciliation. Overall, most of what I said then remains true, but I also feel the game momentum has stalled. Beyond some light hearted moments, nothing much has transpired from Chapter 12 - 20 in terms of plot and characters.

Story
Our half demon half human MC (you can choose either male or futanari) is recruited as an enchanter to revitalise the House of Furr in a universe where many other magical races such as beastmen, vampires, demons, elves, succubus etc. live amongst ordinary humans disguised.

There is an overarching plot covering a broader conflict between demons and the magical ruling elite, but most of the story so far rests in the daily adventures of MC running the House of Furr and being involved in activities such as setting up the house, striking business deals, diplomatic events, resolving internal disputes etc.

The challenge is after all of these basic building blocks were set up, nothing really moved. Each chapter is just more slice of life moments, albeit with a fantasy twist. I like games with good world building, but there has to be more than that after 20 hours of gameplay.

Game Mechanic
You can choose to play either as a male or futanari (strongly recommend the latter, futanari MC is hot even in a sea of diverse females). Most of the options either affect personal variables, relationship points with Furrhouse members or diplomacy between houses.

They do branch the scenes occasionally, but otherwise follow a main path.

Background / Character Renders
Pretty decent and varied mix of real and magical world, there're also some animations in non-sexual situations here and there which are nothing stellar but add a nice touch.

The number of characters in Furrhouse is impressive with many LIs being uniquely different due to a myriad of races so it does keep things interesting.

Character Development
MC's pretty cool and dominant without being abusive (I chose dominance over diplomacy) and has a pleasant personality that should appeal to most players.

There are six LIs who are your house members and each of them is varied and nicely presented (MJ is the MILF motherly kind, Chandra is wild and exotic, Daisy is bitchy but loyal, Arwen is big hearted, Flurr's a mink and Esme is samba salacious).

Challenge though is after 20 Chapters; the characters are still sort of stuck and no different from their initial impressions. The MJ you know at Chapter 20 is still the same one you know at Chapter 2 when she was first introduced. Ditto for all the other main LIs.

In addition, there is a whole suite of side girls of different races and most are quite fun to interact with. The humour in the dialogue is on point without being overly intrusive.

Sex Scenes
Lots of them including both the main LIs and many side ones. There sure is specie diversity here so there should be something for everyone.

Most of scenes are ok generally though animation is a bit of a mixed bag - some look like direct HS2 port overs that are unimpressive while a few of them look quite good. Overall, I would say the quantity is A and quality C+ to B+.

There are also many gratuitous short, repetitive generically animated doggy and blowjob scenes sprinkled throughout the game which serve neither plot nor porn purpose.

BGM and Sound Effects
The developer has a penchant for finding tracks that are not that often used in other games and it sometimes create a unique atmosphere for better or for worse. The rain dance routine using an old medieval folk song is pretty memorable.

Sound effects are basic and used appropriately.

Conclusion
Furrhouse is a funny lite ride, you simply go with the flow without thinking too much and enjoy a parade of girls with exotic designs. The world building is detailed and unveiled gradually along the way convincingly without information overload.

I like the option of a futanari MC which adds a twist to the overall experience. Main room for improvement is perhaps the developer can improve camera angles and introduce more custom animations and phase out the out of the box HS ones that have fallen behind times.

Unless the idea is to just coast along on recurring Patreon income, the story needs to pick up pace pronto. Twenty hours is just too long to be simply doing basic world building and character introductions.

Checkout Sabadongelov rate down below first then read mines. I agree with what they said and decided to add some more cons as well as giving this story its actual current rating.

I'm tired of ppl rating novels from potential. Handing out 4-5 stars for novels that are poor/average. When the story never gets good/better these ppl never come back to change their rate so ppl don't waste their time. I 'played' this game up to ch9 and sayed I've had enough. This story is bareboned and worse it's a semi-kinetic bareboned story. The plot is nothing new and we've heard it before. I would say the music (It doesn't make want to turn off immediately or mute after while), the few unique looking characters, male or futa option (sort of more on that later), MC/FMC is visibly taller then Li's, and MC/FMC actually take initiative; a breath of fresh air but that's really where the positives ends.


Before starting with the negatives let start with the one semi-negative. The Male/Futa option. From what Ive seen there's at least two different types of futas. Type 1: Dick with pussy. Type 2: Dick & balls with pussy. Some ppl will say there's a type 3 but no; female breast with a penis is just trans. The Dev chose type 2 here and seem to forgot about the fmc other sex organ. There's no attempt made by FMC or the Lis to even try touching or playing with that area. The balls cover that area almost completely as well. Why was this futa option even included if you going to do nothing with it. Why not just make a female who can use magic to swap sex organs when they feel like it. I mean there other characters in the story who do exactly that. Since we're talking about FMC lets talk about the first negative. Depending on the camera angle the FMC body looks strange. Her mid section to lower half. It's like this pear shape body with skinny legs. Pear with toothpick legs underneath.


The Loredumping is insane here. From the moment you enter the hidden world the LIs cant stop throwing up information at you. Information that could have been gradually fed to us overtime and provided to us by the 'deck' at our own leisure. By chapter 5 I had hope it would stop and by chapter 8 I had already turned on skip unseen text. I just didn't care anymore. Speaking of the 'deck'; you think playing guess who the pokemon *cough* girls minigame is funny but it only restricts information and annoys players even more with the force fed info dump.


Why does it take to chapter 8-9 that your character is finally sitting down getting to know one of the members of the house. Oh that's right so much lore dumping and world building must be establish before getting to Lis; you know the main reason ppl pick up your game to play. You know I would argue all the chapters that's come out are really 3-4 chapters spread out. From the day to day events, 2-3 things happen and the day is over. Idk who's days look like this but my days and pretty confident that most ppl days are organized from early morning, morning, midday, afternoon, evening, night, & sometimes late night. You could have had the MC/FMC train body/strength/techniques during early mornings, having breakfast with some Lis mornings (you know to actually get to know them), midday-evening some kind of event/events/lunch/dinner (more chances to get to know Lis, and night-latenight learning magic. Basically stats. Strength, Speed, Magic(Dark/Fire/Illusion/Summoning,etc),Runes/Talismans, Armor, MagicArmor?,Money, Inventory, Shops, clothes, tattoos, weapons, etc. That way the players can actually see the progress and feel their character/house grow powerful. You know like a visual novel with sandbox rpg elements. Like a real power fantasy that this game plot is trying to convey but fails. Not your 'sandbox' really a 'replay' mode.


The Racing minigame. Why do you Dev think ppl want to break their mouse trying to win that race. Either change it to spamming arrow keys(<>) or even better make it into a quicktime letters or arrow keys. Hell it could even be a reoccurring event between you and the girls of the house. Not just Chandra and it could be use as a gauge to show your improvements over time with your athleticism. With the same reward for the winner. Winner gets head/eatenout. That means you will have to adjust the speeds of the girls of the house to what they are wearing (since chandra was wearing sandals and was still fast) and what your character speed stat is at the time.


Animations are mediocre. That 3some with Chandra/Daisy... here's a list of some games I recommend you Dev play to the first animation and really take it in. If you cant take the animations to half the level of those then remove them from the game and up the visuals/textures. Semen could look better. Where's the moisture from the women. Orgasm faces needs to be added. Is creampies/pregnancy planned? You can even get ideas from sound and sexual dialogues from the games I recommended because the ones here are not good. This isn't even a mobile game and there's games like lust village doing it better. Stop wasting time with the salor moon magic animation displays.


Small Nitpicks: Early game we are told the houses do different type of work for large amounts of money. Where are those jobs. The MC/FMC is a computer wizard. When are they going to actually finish packing up their place and start on these side projects (computers/devices) they promise what 3 ppl already they were going to do for free. Oh my bad too busy info dumping, world building, and poor lewd scenes. The MC/FMC other appearance could been better then just
demon wings. Your telling me you couldnt give them a more unique look with the wings,eyes,hair, markings. You know for game thats called Furrhouse but theres no black cat golden eyes girl. Why are the cat tails succubus tails. I the appearances of these other creatures are going to be better. Dragons, merfolks,bunny, druid, lizard, snake, deer, centaur, etc.


Now to the houses in general. Dev its one thing to force us the players to accept your Lis into the house as core members, but limiting the house limit to 6 members (your story main Lis only) is ridiculous. I can understand having at least 6 members within a years time to form a house but 6 as the max. Some of us don't like all of your Lis. At what point does the player input matters. We can't choose who's accepted or getting kicked out of our house. Can't change the name of our house. Can't plunder other houses members & housekeepers even though this is a game about harsh fantasy world with politics. I mean you can even see a play for Ophelia and 2 members of house of darkness(fight event between houses) and another play with Iliria and all of house of nature(assassination event). Increase the limit to 20+(The bare minimum should have been 20). That means more Lis need to be made. Where are the mercenerys & other houses. Hanna can be turned. If the players only input for choices are lewd scenes with this person or not then add the kinetic tag to your story or state it in the plot summary.


Giving this story a rating higher than 3 is like a slap in the face to the devs that actually put in the work. I do not care if this is the first work or that its only in the early stages. Plenty of work get abandoned waiting for 'potential'. Not mention there are other early games first 3 chapters out now that are better. My rating will change when the problems have been addressed and reworked.

Ch. 10

The plot is not new, but still it's well handled, models are good and with variety. It has nice animations and good physic. It also has music and not just the same boring music you listen to everywhere. Dev went down a deep rabbit hole to dig up a song in an obscure european language so that a nice scene would become great.

It also features a futa MC, but haven't tried that (and I won't) so I can't say how it is implemented. Still, it is there.

Onto the negatives: LIs throwing themselves at MC "just because" bothers me. Saying "his race is naturally charming" isn't enough. Also the way MC obtains his powers is hasty and not related to any effort from him.

It's already nice, but it has room to grow.

I'm really enjoying FurrHouse! The story has me hooked, especially because the characters are so interesting. MJ is definitely a standout – she's gorgeous, The animation is smooth and adds to the overall experience.

Renders 4/5
Characters 5/5
Story 5/5
Gameplay 3/5
Animations 5/5

Overall, this is a fantastic game! It easily gets 9 out of 10 from me. The characters are engaging, the story is interesting, Definitely worth checking out!

it's a very fun game with interesting world building and nice sex scenes, the characters are all different from each other, making it nice for you to find about all of them and seeing how they interact with each other

Review as of chapter 9.
TLDR: Interesting but unpolished game I would have given a 3,5 if possible, but as that cannot be done and the game is still in its early stages, I'll give it a 4.
EDIT: have added somethings to my review since my first review based on the game as of chapter 6, the score remains the same.

Pros

• Music. Not that it matters too much, but still a nice addition. Not all games have it.
  
  
• Sex is animated. Nothing special though and considering this version of Honey Select, to be expected.
  
  
• Male MC or Futa. I play the futa version and it does feel as if it is taylored for the MC being a futa and not just something thrown in for good measure.
  
  
• Real futa, cock and pussy. Subjective, but for me personally a plus.
  
  
• Choices matter a lot. Affects variables mentioned below, but can also lead to completely different scenes with different characters and affect which characters and factions the MC will develop his/her relations with.
  
  
• Many different variables, that keep ticking up and down depending on the MCs action. So far it's kind of unclear how they will matter, if at all, but that might become evident as the game progresses. EDIT: Confirmed in chapter 9 that having high enough dominance means certain options/alternatives are no longer available (presumably submissive options). Hopefully, high stats not only means fewer alternatives, but also that certain paths unlock that otherwise is unavailable.
  
  
• Deep world building.
  
  
• No Engrish, but sometimes grammar mistakes.
  
  
• MC takes initiative and makes moves on the LI. A low bar many games struggle to clear.
  
  
• Men taller than women. Once more a low bar many games struggle to clear.
  
  
• EDIT: Explanation for the harem. Once more a low bar most harem games cannot clear. In this case, it is connected to the Isekai world that the game takes place in, where "alphas" (both genders) can have multiple partners in a harem. Also, exponentially more females than males in the Isekai-world.
  
  
• EDIT: Jealousy among the members of the harem. Also something that should be common in harem games, but is not. Makes it more believable and gives it some tension and nerve. How it is handled isn't perfect though, see below.

Cons

• Men are evil, stupid villains, women are wonderful. Lazy and boring harem trope. Considering the secretive Isekai-world they live in has five women for every man, it's even more ridiculous that there are so many male bad guys running around and virtually none of the bad guys are women. Can't the game at least give us some female rivals/enemies? The MC doesn't have to fuck everything with a vagina. Or, even better let that be an option even with the enemies! Can spice things up! Just because someone is an evil bitch doesn't mean she can't be fuckable. Anyway, boring and low level effort by the Dev in this regard.
  
  
• Loredumping. All the time. So much time is spent explaining the world. Fitting to some extent as the MC is new to the secret Isekai-world (nice excuse to lore dump a fantasy setting), but it's still too much.
  
  
• To much background info on new acquaintances. Like the loredumping, it's too much, too early. Unlike the loredumping, there's really no good explanation for why virtually everyone tell the MC their life story after just barely having met him/her.
  
  
• Lack of erotic tension, flirting and build up. Rather common in porn games as many porn game devs suck at writing dialogue, but still annoying. Is not made better by all the lore dumping and background telling. What it leads to is a lot of rather dry conversation that is suddenly interspersed with sex out of the blue. That in turn leads the sex to feel "meh", at least to me.
  
  
• Dev inventing the story as he/she goes. Evident in the middle of chapter five where the MC in a fit of reminiscing about lost lovers tells a story of a lover he/she had like seven years ago who just disappeared without a trace. That same old lover of course turns up at the end of chapter five (like a day later in game time), reveling that she was an avalonian all the time (avalonians being the denizens of the Isekai). With a little forethought, the dev would have had the MC muse about the old lover in chapter 2 and then have her turn up in chapter 6 or 7, so it wouldn't feel so forced and on the nose.
  
  
• Lack of agency in critical situations, despite the abundance of choices. For instance in chapter 6, the MC forgives and welcomes the old lover who turned up at the end of chapter 5 after like three seconds of scolding her for disappearing without saying anything. And that's despite the game keeping track of things like negative diplomatic ability and dominance. A character with high dominance and low diplomacy should be able to tell the old lover to go fuck herself, or at least demand that she make it up to the MC (in fact, any game with decent agency should have that as an option, but especially a game that tells you that you can play as a dominant and socially blunt type). But no, the MC will simp and the player has no agency over it.
  
  
• Sex interupted. Things start to heat up. Then something or someone interupts. This is *not* a way to create erotic tension, it's just annoying.
  
  
• MC making moves, then apologising afterwards. Happens multiple times. Once more, if we're supposed to be able to play the MC as someone who is dominant, then why are we apologising left and right? Can't we at least be given the option if we want to do that or not? If you're making a move on someone (kissing for instance) and then apologise immediately afterwards, you come across as terminally horny and lacking in impulse control, not as assertive and dominant.
  
  
• EDIT: Social situations as well as central fetishes/fantasies handled clunkely. This ties into what I have already mentioned about the lack of erotic tension, lack of critical choices and the MCs tendency to make moves and then apologising afterwards. I probably should have rewritten those paragraphs and worked this into it, but I'm too lazy, so here goes: The dev doesn't seem to get all the human interactions and fantasies that supposed to go into the game. Meaning, good ideas, not so good execution. I have already mentioned some above, but I will give two more examples from chapter 9:
  • Jealousy induced anger disapating too quickly. In on instance, two LIs find out the MC has been fucking both of them. They call each other "bitch" and start talking about fighting it out. But it quickly goes from a physical fight to a magical duel to a game of scrabble. It's a bit to silly and the mood shouldn't have changed so quickly. Furthermore, in a best case scenario, the player would be given the choice of A) trying to calm them down and mend their relationship B) doing nothing and C) fanning the flames of their jealousy and rivalry, even though I understand that most players probably would go with A).
    
    
  • Being dominant, but not really being dominant. In one scene, a LI from anouther house, who the MC fucked in a previous encounter, flashes her hairless pussy to the MC as she, her husband, the MC and another LI from FurrHouse is having a conversation. The MC can respond by ignoring the LI or giving her a fucking sign with his/her fingers. Doing the latter will increase the MCs dominance score. Regardless of how the MC reacts, the husband and the LI from FurrHouse will remain in the room negotiating, while the LI from the other house takes the MC for a tour of the house. But she cuts the tour short and brings the MC to her room, where she undresses and pushes the MC down on the bed before having sex. So, how is giving the fucking sign an act of dominance? Especially when it is not followed up with any action. Rather, it should have given points in Lechery (also a stat). Then, as the tour begins, the player should be given the choice of having the MC push the LI up against a wall, tearing her clothes off and ramming herself into the LI as punishment for teasing him/her and sexually arousing him/her in an inapproriate situation. Or, if that is too much deviation (and therefore to much work), the player should be given the choice of having the MC be the one to declare in no uncertain terms that there will be no tour and that they instead will go to her room, followed by the ripping of clothes and ramming in her room instead. And yeah, when you have a cock as big as the MC, ramming into a pussy like that will *hurt*, even if said pussy is well lubricated. Which would be the point. THAT would be how a dominant character would/could act in a situation like that. Instead we have a MC that acts submissively to the LIs dominant behaviour and once more, we are also not allowed to tell the LI to fuck off.

Early days for this one, but it's a really promising start and could develop into a fantastic game.

Pros:
-Futa protagonist option
-Good models with a variety of body types
-Dominant and submissive options
-The story takes its time when it comes to developing relationships between the characters. You don't trip and fall into pussy or go around spouting corny one liners to get the girls to sleep with you instantly. While there is certainly sexual tension between the MC and some of them, the dev is smart enough to let things develop before jumping into it. We need more games like this that focus on character development instead of just shoving tits in your face every five minutes.
-Choices matter and consequences are implied to happen for certain decisions.

Cons:
-Info dump at the start of the game. I know it's tempting to all the information about the world and setting to the player as fast as possible to make them understand what's going on, but it would have been MUCH better to work that information into a long conversation that the MC and Daisy could have had during the car ride or something. Having a massive screen full of "choose this topic to get a small info dump about this" choices that you need to go all the way through is very immersion breaking.

Looking forward to more of this.

Still early on in its development, however the world already makes for a very interesting foundation. Monster girls are always a plus and there are enough different girls to make for a fun VN. I also like that you can play either as a futa or as a guy. The writing is also good and I only noticed a small amount of errors. I hope the dev keeps going and already has a plan for the direction he wants the story to go

I think it's a very nice game, beautiful characters, a very inviting story that has great potential. can't wait to see more of it. Of course I'm also excited to see how the story develops. I wish the developer much success and the perseverance to finish it and many supporters to make it easier.