VN - Ren'Py - Futa Dominium [v0.3] [AB Software]

The writing in this is completely atrocious with every character seeming to want to bang the MC within a second of meeting her.

It feels like there is effectively no build up or corruption due to the MC being a slut to begin with and comes across as completely cringy. At least try to offer more seduction or maybe add blackmail elements to spice things up.

Would it not be better to start the MC as innocent and then get corrupted by the futas at least this way there could be a build up to the sex scenes.

The faces on a lot of the characters are really weird and could do with being re-worked and updated.

I struggle to find positives other than the fact it's not buggy or crashes.

Superb project, this.

Creative choices are interesting and full of hidden details, the jokes that dot the story are good, the story is intriguing, renders and scenes are great... And futas. Futas everywhere.

I can't quite find anything that is bad with the game. Like, there will always be things one'll disagree with, but those come from personal opinions and ideas. They do not affect the experience of the game, IMO.

Underrated gem. Looking forward to next update!

This game performed beyond my expectations.
I just checked in out of curiosity at first.
I like busty mature women with big tits and big asses.
I don't like so-called Futa, or similar content that simulates homosexuality.
This game has Futa in the title, but it doesn't play like the usual Futa games with all the cocks flying around.
The whole story is about a plump and lustful woman, and it really does what the author said about writing something extraordinary.
The core of this is a VN with a female protagonist. The other elements are just embellishments to make the story more colorful.
The future is promising.

I find Luna one of the hottest female protagonists. (5/5).
Renders are mostly excellent (4/5).
Choices matter and most sex scenes are avoidable, i.e. lots of player agency. (5/5).
Story is innovative, obviously fantasy, some things are questionable, e.g. the weirdly forced spanking scene (3/5).

This shit is so peak it hurts.

The teasing and sex scenes are hot, lengthy, and appropriately verbose. Story and writing keeps you engaged/immersed. The models are solid. And the references are constant and fun - I can tell the creator is a very cultured individual :'D

Only issue is that there's already like at least 20 major futa characters who are all basically locked onto the MC like missiles. Seems to be another case where the scope is getting too big for the relative infrequency of the updates.

But like, there's only so much I can care when each update is this damn hot lol.

(Review of v0.3)

Futa Dominium is basically an AVN created as fan service for futa lovers. Males have barely any presence in the story and both males and females are relegated to sexual toys of the futas, which are becoming a sort of new "race" as per the background story, creating a fracture in the society which the developer tried to stage complete with a political conspiration in US soil, where the action takes place.

The premise means this is mostly of interest for those into this genre who are enticed by the prospect of seeing the conveniently extra-curvy MC being banged by one or more futas just because. And they aren't necessarily pretty either. If you try to find a decent story here you will have to try hard; I was mildly interested until the point where the loving stepmom takes the MC on her lap and starts spanking her at work in front of everyone just because her shitty boss suggested so. Enough is enough.

As the story progresses you get to know the "players" who are supposed to be relevant in what's going on behind the scenes. At a certain point you even get to see a shootout, which is decently done in the dramatic sense but falls flat in some scenes, which look like photos of cardboard boxes. That said, seeing as most developers seem to struggle to create a believable scene in a populated downtown area I presume the tools available must be super hard to use.

Visuals are the strong suit of the game. The few female models you run across won't disappoint, while futas are a mixed bag. The best I can say here is that at least they don't (all) have horse sized shlongs. There are no real "animations" to speak of at least until the point I reached in the story, unless you count as such alternating 2 frames. Some transitions also take so long that you never know if you're supposed to click to advance or should wait a bit more.

What makes the game disappointing for me is the way the story presents almost every new character as another shitty perv just waiting for their chance to bang the MC. If you're into senseless fucking you'll see plenty here, but if you're after something with substance you might consider other options.

This is one of the best Female protagonist game which have futanari ⚧ world building.
I would seriously want to reincarnate as Luna if possible for me.
The best thing about this game is ,its not just sex.
The Story Building is masterpiece (well i can give more hints to add more twists in story as a writter but that would spoil my fun of this game)
There are very less games with good story. A sex without story is a food without taste. So to all those sex centered games, learn something from this. And Other game stories feels vague sometimes. A story have its own logic but we have to make sure the logic stands in right way. Those stories ruin their own logic. But this one is perfect.
Not just that, the emotions, the thrill that Luna feel. It all feels realistic and possible.

IDK about you but i am gonna destroy Gods and replace them for building a world only for Females and Futanari and then i will reincarnate myself.
People who hate this stuff shall stay away. Do not give baseless idiotic ideal world ruining ideas to Developer. Dev is doing best and is good at it.
Art is good, story is good, emotion is good,
I can understand how Luna feel . That's why i call this an art.

Dev if you are reading this, just keep going. Female Protagonist in Alpha Futanari world is the best thing we can hope for. If you need creative ideas regarding this, i can just share so feel free to ask. But you are doing good work.

This is a funny game. On the one hand, you have the MC Luna, where her environment is controlled by 100% porn logic. But I don't care, because she's hot and the scenes are hot. Then on the other hand, you have this political thriller emerging that, as of version 0.3, has no direct connection to the MC. But I don't care, because this lack of connection means that I can skip through those sections without losing track of what is going on with Luna. Or I can read it, because it's actually not bad.

The logic could be better, and the thriller could be better, but decent futa games are rare enough that I'm willing to grade on a curve.

I also appreciate that almost all of the sex scenes involving Luna can be avoided. The lone exception was acceptable to me, once I saw how it happened (trying to avoid spoilers here).

There's even a bit of storyline branching, depending on how you deal with one of the characters. Though it might have been better to know beforehand that your decision would lead to a branch.

I do hope that Luna's storyline and the political thriller storyline come together, though. Because right now, there's almost no overlap. And I do concede that a number of women here are not attractive by conventional standards. I'm not expecting a soap opera where everyone is suspiciously good-looking, but there are some appearances that are downright distracting, particularly Arianna. I was able to move past it by focusing on Luna, but others may feel differently.

VERSION: 0.3
SUMMARY: Futa game with lousy plot and dialogue, second only to its often fugly characters.
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.

1. Model Visuals..................... : ⭐⭐⭐
2. General Visuals................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐
4. Character (Persona)............... : ⭐⭐
5. Story Quality & Pacing............ : ⭐
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue........ : ⭐⭐
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics...........: ⭐⭐⭐
8. Playtime & General Quality.........: ⭐⭐⭐
9. Sounds & Music.....................: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
10. H-Content & Fetishes.............. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Generally models look good/fine, but there are some that look like botox demon spawn, NOT joking!
2. Visuals in general have high quality renders and polish.
3. Sounds are not bad, the lewd scenes have some decent sounds, not many but that which are there are good. The sounds in general are not bad at all.
4. Kinks seem to the be primary driver of this AVN, which isnt a bad thing at all! (just don't expect anything profoundly interesting or good in terms of story or dialogue)
5. Per above point, there are some pretty kinky scenes that should get most people "going".

CONS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. First major issue is some of the character faces, are incredibly off putting and ugly, and not all are Futa woman that look like that, but most can be cromagnon man for museum exhibits. See my comments.
2. Animations are pretty much non-existent and are just a few stills, pity.
3. Apart from being futa and so the "world" is fairly bullshit, the plot is non-existent and just porn logic, jerk off material based around futa content.
4. Dialogue is shallow and completely unrealistic (bullshit) and the story leans heavily into porn logic and where that fails or falls away, the rest of the plot feels like a 5yo wrote some of the dialogue/scenes.
5. Characters don't seem overly interesting and per dialogue are equally shallow and mostly all written like they are sex starved perverts and/or morons, again porn logic focused.

OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)

• Started off reasonably fine, but when the FMC got to the school and I saw the first character then the principal I thought WTF. Their faces look seriously like botox gone wrong, like serious neanderthal man vibes coming from these creatures. WTF did the developer think producing such monsters? The principal looks probably like what a Futa woman would look like with the square set jaw, eyebrows of a man, but really...is that what the dev was going for? Well done, then made some really ugly WoMAN
• Per above point, the FMC and her stepmother, and many other characters look fine, even pretty, BUT these 2, which were the first I saw are really FUGLY, and they are not the only ones trust me.
• While I empathize with the developer, they did mentioned that artwork does change during the game, I still stick to what I said on models and would encourage really doing some rework.
• Apart from that, mechanically this AVN is good, and I actually think good for what I believe must be its intension, because some things here can only be done so deliberately and no because of lack of skill or ability. Kinda scary to think
• The AVN also has some weird comedy, some funny, other simply disturbing (but funny)

TLDR:

I am not an avid reader, fan or expert in any way of Futa art, and honestly in this AVN its not even really completely relevant as it also pertains to non futa, but some of these faces are absolutely ugly! Mostly the Futa ones though, they look like shemales, most futa AVNs I played have attractive futas... Dialogue/story is cringe worth and this game can be chalked up as fap material, if you can get it up for some of the faces

Excellent game. One of my favourite futa games. The story telling is great and I like the different characters that the game offers. The sex scenes are next level. If you are looking for a game similar to StarPeriphery, as it was my case, this is one.
I would love to have the option to choose to a MC.

Review as of 0.2

This game definitely has the potential to be a top tier futa on female game, no questions.

Only 2 chapters have been released for the game, but it already has around 1-1,5 hour of game time, with LOTS of sex scenes.

The protagonist is a super hot female, her face, her body is excellent.

There aren't many interactable characters yet, but the ones that are present are good, you can definitely see that they have their own personalities, own goals, and not just brainless people around the protagonist.

Im not a conosseiur about renders and such, but to me they look great, the environment and the people too.

The sex scenes are already abundant, they mostly focus on you being the submissive girl, and I think it was done well, I enjoyed the scenes very much .
One massive advantage this game has on others, is that the sex scenes are not short, they arent just a few text exchanges or just a few images.

I think if the developer continues with this path, it will be a top tier game in the futa on female category, no doubt.

Haven't gotten very far into it but can already tell it's my cup of tea. If you are into dommy futas this game will scratch the itch. Writing is basically there to set up a string of futa encounters for the protagonist, which is all I want. Renders aren't the best quality-wise, but they're very hot.

Pretty atrocious.

• Writing is atrocious on multiple levels. At a low level, the individual characters speak like they're demented. A lot of "oh wow, she's so hot" and "I'm so horny."
• At the middle level, the writing continues to bounce around POVs that make no sense. You're shown bits and pieces of things that the MC has no way of seeing, over and over again, to the point where I'm not even sure the MC is the MC any more.
• At a high level, the overall arc of the game is insensible. Even parody has to have a hint of reality in it. This is just entirely divorced from it.
• The models are also often bizarre looking. Body proportions have weird shapes and more than a few character's faces look like there were developmental issues in their childhoods.
• There is no corruption, unless by corruption you mean an MC who's both a virgin and DTF each and every futa they see. There's no resistance, no seduction, no moral dilemma, no burn at all.
• But at the same time, the game is not a stroke story, due to all the unending interludes, some political meta-commentary, others just random things happening to random characters we know nothing about.

I can't think of a single pro for this game. Unless you're totally starved for futa game content, there's nothing of value to be found here.

By far the best futa game. The scenes are amazing, the game has good good loking models. No fluff very early into the game already we can see sex scenes.

The setting itself is perfect for me you play as a female in a dystopian society filled with futas. The lenght of sex scenes is perfect as well

Very good work so far! Looking forward to future updates, enjoyed every second of this playthrough. Luna is so hot! Can't wait to see her with the step-mother, hopefully we'll get some more content with futas that are around her age too

True hidden gem and a fairly rare niche (Futa game with Female MC). If you're a fan of politics/alternative history, the plot for this game will surely draw you in. If you're only in it for the sex scenes there's a good amount of it even though it's still early in development.

If there's anything to criticize it would be some of the technical aspects (animation, models) but nothing dealbreaking, plus it's the creator's first project so I'm willing to cut him some slack for it considering the writing and story are fairly decent (clear english, no grammar failures, well-structured storyline).

Will keep an eye on this project and update accordingly but as it stands right now, so far so good.

Pretty good game with cool action and pretty graphics.Although,it's pretty disappointing,when your choice doesn't really affect the game(You can skip few scenes,but in next dialogs you would see those event still happened,but you've just haven't seen them)

The game’s still early, only at version 0.2, but it’s already got some amazing world-building, which is pretty rare for a porn visual novel. Don’t sweat the early issues like Aida’s appearance, it gets fixed by day two.

Honestly, sometimes it feels like you’re watching an action thriller, because you kind of are! It’s a cool mix, and it really works. This is the dev first game, and you can tell he's learning fast because the visuals and storytelling just keep getting better as you go.

I’m giving it 5 stars because this kind of work deserves support. There aren’t nearly enough games like this in the Futa genre.

Oh, and don’t pay attention to “osider’s” review. He threw a tantrum in the comments and then decided to review-bomb the game. Just ignore him.

A fantasy story about an alternate world where Futa people are now a part of mainstream society. The story is somewhat interesting but it takes a dramatic turn, which I was not to enthralled with. I would have liked it more if it focused less on the drama/politics and more on the absurdity of these sex starved Futa creatures.

I also found that most of the alpha Futa's were rather creepy looking, and came across more as men in drag with huge cocks, rather than actual Futa beings.

On the plus side, I absolutely love the Luna character. She is not your typical Instagram beauty, and that is a big plus in my book. You are also given the option to control whether Luna has sex, and there are a lot of Futa cocks for her to suck and fuck.

This is a good game, with a hot MC and some very artistic renders. I just wish the Futa looked less creepy and the game focused more on the absurdity of the situations Luna gets herself into, and less on drama .

[v0.2] You are a bodacious young teenage girl who loves futa cock. Fortunately, you've just moved to a new town that centers around catering to and supporting futanari! It's your job to worship and fuck as many futa cocks as you can! There's also some political intrigue and such, but who cares about that when your mother has a massive FUTA COCK!

Playing as a stacked female that worships futanari is a fantastic experience. All the futa women are hung and sexy. There are a couple places where you can show resistance or a somewhat dominant streak, but so far the focus is clearly on worshipping futa cock and being a submissive.

There are a lot of scenes delving into the politics of futa women, and a whole lot more that take place away from the main character. I've skipped most of those so I can't comment on them. I'm not really interested in scenes that don't have any bearing on the main character's relationships and that the MC isn't even aware of.

Great renders, unique body types and style, animations, and even sex sound effects! A high quality product that caters perfectly to what I want to see in my porn games: Futa women fucking other futa and women!

And yes, the futa don't have pussies (so far). It's not ACTUAL futanari but who cares?