What is with this recent trend with game descriptions, where whoever is writing them thinks they're a poet and writes the description so that it follows poetry structure? To the point they're putting commas at the end of every line, regardless of if the sentence makes sense anymore when they do.
It's a description, not a god damn poem. Write a friggin paragraph. And even when you are writing actual poetry, you don't end every line with a comma, the damn line still has to make grammatical sense.
It's a description, not a god damn poem. Write a friggin paragraph. And even when you are writing actual poetry, you don't end every line with a comma, the damn line still has to make grammatical sense.
