VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Game of Hearts [Ch.5 R2] [SparkHG]

Ch.4 P2 R1

Elaborate dialogues (confrontational and seductive) that combined with the characters and the music (which impressed me) really generate an exciting atmosphere for the reader, thus also the whole story so far very enjoyable to follow.
It is a VN with choices, during the seduction action that, for each individual sexual interaction, end with a score indicating the rating with which MC handled the event.

For me, a rare example here of writing appropriate to a sex novel.
Oddly enough to date only 182 funders and I think it deserves many more when compared to some over-funded projects where the effort of implementation compared to this one is insignificant, but that's just my opinion.

You have to wait a while to get the update but I think it is worth it.

Well, this is probably one of the best, if not the best vn on this site.

Story: fresh, engaging, quite unique
Characters: feel real in a wholesome way.
Renders: simply beautiful with plenty of details
Animations: Really, really good one of the best i´ve seen.
Choices: plenty and they do matter focussing on either attraction or corruption.
Skilltree?: you gain demonic energy and have to decide how to spend then, i like it.

Play this vn, you will not be dissapointed!
Oh, and yeah this dev deserves support and i support him.

I think it is one of the best games out there. I can't believe more people don't talk about it. The renders, bgm, characters everything is magnificent . The story is also really good . I hope they add more content and a gallery option.

The only problem for me is the pacing of the story. It is really slow.


Thanks for creating this game...

There are games that fancy themselves being a slow burn and then there's this. A story that's trying to cook a pot of Raman noodles with a birthday candle. Eventually, most people are going to say fuck it and throw that shit in the microwave. By holding down skip. Some will say this is well-written and I wouldn't necessarily disagree. It doesn't suffer from lack of proofreading, it's HOW it's written that makes it extremely frustrating to play. The writing is VERY wordy and often quite bland. Using words like.. genitals or trying to convey passion but falls flat thanks to the devs being typical porn makers. They have no interest in showing men giving women oral. Thus the MC does little more the finger them while they all suck his dick in every sex scene because of course they do. In essence, this game straddles the line between a softcore erotic novel you'd get from a library because of how pretentiously it's written. And cheesy male centric porn because of how much it revolves around the MC.

Other than that, the sheer amount of MC worship and how anchored the story is to his POV is insipid AF. Even when the women have internal dialog, most of the time it's from the perspective of the MC reading her thoughts. Or it's HIM describing what she's feeling at pivotal moments that could have been used for prime character development material. Instead, it's used to make the MC look omnipotent. Such as a woman being alone, masturbating. You'd better believe he's going to be present somehow, narrating it. Bottom line, there's too much puppeteering going on in this story and it stinks.

very beautiful renders, the girls are unique and it's good to see proper thic characters for once. and the story also is intriguing and well told. good luck with this project and wishing the creator all the very best

This is the best game I know. Renders, dialogue, story... really top notch. The emotional resonance of all the characters is so deep; I admire the writer's perspicacity. I salute the dev, and look forward to their work, in any form. Bravo/a!

This game is amazing. Seriously. I am so excited every time I see a new release and I stop everything I am doing to check it out.

It may just be me and my kinks, but OMG I wish I could give this thing more stars. It's like the dev themselves are demons and reached into my mind to know what kind of VN I wanted.

I would imagine there are people who will not like it, but I will not be one of them. This is so clearly my #1 VN that it is not even close. The space between #1 and #2 is just miles apart. Seriously.

Thank you dev, for an amazing game.

You have to download and at least give it a try. You will not be disappointed.

This one was a great surprise. The LIs look amazing, they're quite unique with the exception of Julia, but she's cool too although I do hope to see more variety on future updates. The story is pretty ok, but it does have a lot of room for improvement. It has a nice and welcome dynamic on sex scenes as well. Just great job overall.

I'm giving this game 5 stars. The visuals are top-notch, especially in the steamy scenes

The corruption gameplay loop adds depth, but the singular focus on one character sidelines the overall narrative

Writing fluctuates slightly, somtimes detracting scenes, but mostly enhancing. Recommended for corruption and neotori fans seeking some nice and engaging gameplay

One of the best animated Games on the Site so far, the Graphics are really well made and the Girls/and Woman in the game stunning good looking .
I think the Quality of the Masterwork will only rise with Time the Developer have to experiment with his/her Skills
I hope at some point we get permanent access to the upgrade Cube,a bit anoying to have to wait for new upgrades when they can help in the next follower Case.
I really would like when MC could get some general Upgrades what work on all Girls/Woman/Demons scince this is about a WAR between Demons some fighting oriented Skills would be cool

This game really churns out the content. The models and animations are in the top tier of current adult games, and the amount of content that has been released during the short time it's been out, would put many other Patreon games to shame.

I'm a big fan of the pacing and character development. The character back stories go deep, but it never feels like an exposition dump since it's all relevant to the main story, and it's told gradually in between the phenomenal scenes.

The influence system is interesting since it's purposeful to the story, but I can never decide which route I want MC to take, so that is frustrating.

3 out of 5.

Has the potential to be much, much more; the visuals are fantastic, the music is decent, and the overall story is a little schlocky and rushed so far but entertaining enough. The sex scenes are actually pretty great- the focus on female pleasure actually makes the game feel erotic. I generally like the characters' personalities and their interactions, too. So what's the problem?

The writing. It's... not good. The prose, the grammar, the syntax; the dev's grasp of English is rough. It's entirely functional, but he doesn't understand past or present tenses (sometimes mixing them up in the middle of a sentence), he uses purple prose in situations that don't call for it, he mixes up words (he said "ravished", but I guarantee he meant "famished"), and he doesn't understand double negatives ("If I left, our money problems would never cease to disappear", meaning that the problems would never stop going away). There's a speedbump in almost every line that keeps me from enjoying the story. Write how people talk, dammit. Sure, people don't use 100% correct grammar when they speak, but they hardly ever make these kinds of mistakes, and they never sound this robotic.

EDIT: I want to add something- the more I think about it, the more I want to emphasize how bad the purple prose is. For those who don't know, "purple prose" is when the writer uses excessively flowery language, thinking it makes their writing look more impressive, intellectual or poetic, or simply in an effort to cover up the prose's faults. The dev is doing all those things here. The writing isn't nearly as smart as it thinks it is; lines like "Perhaps my naivety spoke a few decibels too loud" or "in this distance, every twitch of the muscle, every flutter of her eyelids played on the canvas of my corneas" aren't clever. They're pretentious and irritating. You're not painting a picture with your words- your scrawling with crayon. Pull back. Drop the excessive metaphors. Use more conversational prose; believable dialogue has more impact that overwrought glurge.

The dev desperately needs a competent English proofreader and editor to go over the game. Fix the dialogue, and you've got a real treat.

I have a scar on my face and a veiny penis, but the ladies still love me. If I would have known that, I would have run with scissor more often and deprived my weiner of oxygen. Everything about this game is ok. I can tell the author cares about the novel and I bet this gets better with time. As it stands (Chapter 4), I almost had a fappable moment with the wife, but the weird angles (never see this lady's boobs, vjay, and face in the same shot) left me hanging. COME ON!

Review:

Game: Game of Hearts
Version: ch 4
Type: VN (X)
MC: I like him, horny mf

Graphics: 5/5
Animation: 4/5
Story: 5/5
Models: 5/5
Content: 5/5

Suggestions: more models maybe?
Thoughts: I like the story overall, even paid attention to the dialogue


Overall F95: 5/5

The game is visually stunning, and the dialogue between characters is touching. There are some typos here and there, but it didn't bother me as much because English is not my native language. I would say that this game is perhaps in the top 5 of the best I have played recently.

In a world were devs piddle away their patrons money and time doing next to nothing for years, this dev has done an excellent job with the amount of content and quality of such content for less than one year of development time. The renders are quite good, the people feel pretty realistic (although some of their 'O' faces are a stretch haha). The whole gamified caution/arousal system can get a bit tedious, but thankfully its pretty obvious which ones lead to less caution if you are in the danger zone. One downside is the animations are just 3 second loops, but there is enough of them and they are smooth enough to kinda use your imagination a bit.
Overall, stellar game and writing, highly recommend.

Summary: Excellent renders, unique characters, and nuanced internal dialogue make this one of the best games introduced in 2023.


Writing of plot: Nice twist on the corruption trope. There is a frame of the MC discovering that he is actually a demon who needs to rapidly develop his skills. While enough to keep you going, this isn't really a plot-driven game. The strength is in the psychological dialog around and during the hot sex scenes.


Writing of dialog: Powerful and descriptive. A lot of of internal dialog particularly good around the deeply conflicted main LI.


Writing of characters: Only three love interests so far (Chapter 4), plus a couple male characters. All the LIs have depth and distinctive personalities.


Grammar/Typos: A few typos and weird word choices.


Still images: Render quality is very high. Faces and bodies have good variety, with the main LI being wonderfully zaftig. Great use of lighting, framing and focus. Lots of nuance in facial expressions. This is really top notch.


Animation: Also excellent. I kept wanting more.

Story:
The narrative of Game of Hearts is a captivating journey that immerses players into a rich and engaging world. The story line is expertly crafted, offering a perfect blend of depth, emotion, and unpredictability. From the beginning, players are drawn into a well-thought-out plot that keeps them invested in the characters and their development. The game successfully combines a compelling main narrative with intriguing side quests, ensuring that players are constantly discovering new facets of the game world. The character arcs are well-defined, and the storytelling is enhanced by well-written dialogue and meaningful choices that impact the overall narrative. Game of Hearts proves that a captivating story is a cornerstone of a truly outstanding gaming experience.

Graphics:
Visually, Game of Hearts is a masterpiece. The graphics are stunning, with meticulous attention to detail evident in every frame. The game's art style is not only aesthetically pleasing but also serves to enhance the overall atmosphere and mood. Whether exploring vast landscapes, intricate cityscapes, or dark, atmospheric dungeons, players will find themselves consistently impressed by the level of detail and the realism of the visuals. The use of lighting, particle effects, and environmental design contributes to a visually immersive experience. The graphics of Game of Hearts are not just about technical prowess; they play a crucial role in conveying the game's tone and complementing its narrative, making it a visual treat for players.

Animation:
The animation in Game of Hearts is fluid and lifelike, contributing significantly to the overall sense of realism within the game. Character movements are smooth and natural, and combat animations are not only visually appealing but also responsive, adding a layer of satisfaction to gameplay. The attention to detail in character expressions and interactions brings the virtual world to life, creating a more immersive experience for players. Whether it's the subtle facial expressions during dialogue sequences or the dynamic movements in action sequences, the animation in Game of Hearts sets a new standard for excellence in gaming. It seamlessly integrates with the gameplay, enhancing the overall enjoyment of the gaming experience.

In summary, Game of Hearts excels in delivering an exceptional gaming experience through its compelling story, stunning graphics, and impressive animations. The combination of these elements creates a cohesive and immersive world that captivates players from start to finish.

Really interesting premise upheld by some strong writing and gorgeous visuals. Enough of a meta story going on to keep me interested outside of the minute to minute narritive. My one issue lies with the protagonist being outside of our control, as in we don't choose whether he embraces his nature or fights it but that might be something introduced more gradually. Overall very impressed.

I thoroughly enjoyed playing this game and am genuinely glad that I did. The game boasts a compelling storyline and beautifully crafted characters. The renders and animations are absolutely outstanding, contributing to an immersive gaming experience. The narrative is well-paced, with each chapter offering at least 20 minutes of engaging gameplay.

One aspect I particularly appreciate is the element of choice in shaping the story. Our decisions influence the direction in which the narrative unfolds, adding a layer of depth to the overall experience. Incorrect answers result in skipped scenes, altering the course of the story. For instance, in the first scene involving an intimate relationship with Julia in her apartment, the outcome depends on selecting the correct sentence. Similar pivotal moments exist with other characters like Meredith.

I sincerely hope the developers continue to support and expand this game. It would be disheartening to see such a beautiful and well-crafted game abandoned. The creators clearly possess exceptional skills, evident to anyone who has played the game. Here's to hoping for the continued success and development of this exceptional gaming experience.

Stay well and at peace!