VN Ren'Py Abandoned Game Of Trust [v0.2] [Sugarrushgames]

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TheKingCobra

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"In this game; you play as a young man, from a wealthy family. Coming back to his home after 3 years. You decide to start a new life."

OMFG, not again... I wish all the best to dev but, seriously, I feel like jumping from the plane without a parachute when I read that line - and I read that every damn day at least five times in five different games!
This kind sir is a blatant lie!

Some days there aren't five game releases :sneaky:
This is the HUGE 1% that is coming to TAKE their REVENGE on us all!
Man, they're coming for my porn now? Batten the hatches lads! We're going to war!

On a more serious note, is the developer a member of the F95 exclusive Gentleman Club?
 

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is the developer a member of the F95 exclusive Gentleman Club?

I dunno if he/she is a member but i hope so.... that way we can know what some tags means (if they are avoidable) and what new "tags" will have in the future. I like to support early games and help them a bit but only if it cater to my taste, im not helping games with ntr or that type of content.
 
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Dripping

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The lighting in the previews look rather bland. Probably due to the bland primary color used for the interior (grey, grey, more grey), but adding some additional lightsources might help.
But that's not the worst thing that irks me. Worst thing is VERSIONING! Version 1.0 implies a fully completed product. This isn't a 1.0. This is an 0.1 at best. And no, that doesn't mean you'll automatically get a target to complete the product at the tenth beta release. In software versioning, you get to count as high as you need, going from 0.9 to 0.10 to 0.11 if you like. If necessary, go as high as 0.42359 if you want. The dot doesn't denote decimals in software versioning. Instead, it's a seperator between releasetypes.
 
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9inchz

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this games that want to make incest but worried of the patreon roles .. just add in the system a "there name" & "what u call them" & "whats your relationship to them" OPTIONS
you know .. to trick the system & gain more fans
 

SugarRushGames

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Hi I am MisaMisa, developer of the Game Of Trust. I am actually a new member of this site, I was planing to add the game here but DarkWolf2055 already did (thank you so much btw, I appreciate it). I read all the comments and sorry about the versioning. I honestly didn't know and will fix that... so it's a demo actually.

English is not my native language, I really tried doing my best to not make mistakes and will try to do in the future as well for sure :) Thank you all for playing my game, if you have any more suggestions please let me know...
 

meiiku

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So far I quite like it, but I recommend having someone do proofing on the text as there are quite a lot of typos/grammar errors. (Especially 'text speak' like 'btw', 'ikr', 'imo', 'etc')

No biggie but cleaning that sort of stuff up definitely adds to suspension of disbelief :)

Also, as far as the incest stuff goes, I think having a patch is probably the easiest way as it means you can have more plausible text phrases that don't look weird without the patch (as would happen with a simple drop-in string system)

Great job so far!
 

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Hi I am MisaMisa, developer of the Game Of Trust. I am actually a new member of this site, I was planing to add the game here but DarkWolf2055 already did (thank you so much btw, I appreciate it). I read all the comments and sorry about the versioning. I honestly didn't know and will fix that... so it's a demo actually.

English is not my native language, I really tried doing my best to not make mistakes and will try to do in the future as well for sure :) Thank you all for playing my game, if you have any more suggestions please let me know...
can you tell us what fetishes will you add, also the cheating is only for the mc or the girls? (if is the girls, can it be avoidable? here we usually use "ntr tag" to call any love interest or girl having sex with someone else besides the mc)
 

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can you tell us what fetishes will you add, also the cheating is only for the mc or the girls? (if is the girls, can it be avoidable? here we usually use "ntr tag" to call any love interest or girl having sex with someone else besides the mc)
Hello, thanks for the feedback. I am still working on the script actually. The outlines of the story and fundamentals is set but developments will be exchangeable according to requests and feedbacks. This means I might add some fetishes in the future. But there is no 'ntr' planned in my storyline.
 

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can you tell us what fetishes will you add, also the cheating is only for the mc or the girls? (if is the girls, can it be avoidable? here we usually use "ntr tag" to call any love interest or girl having sex with someone else besides the mc)
while that is NTR there is also netori which is you having sex with another mans woman in front of them and while the first is more commonly talked about the tag could mean either
 
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while that is NTR there is also netori which is you having sex with another mans woman in front of them and while the first is more commonly talked about the tag could mean either
here is mainly used as netorare and you are wrong about netori.... netori is the act of "stealing someone" love or very close related person since it also works for moms,sisters etc

having sex with another mans woman in front of them is called cuckold, i think you are mixing fetishes bro.


(no one gives.......a.... about netori, what they dont usually like (me included) is getting netorare or seeing a romanceable girl fucking someone else)
 
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I thought I'd give this initial release a go, but there isn't much content yet... It seems to be following a highly used initial pattern of a very quick introduction, followed by a quick "accidental" perv scene, followed by a fast paced sex scene... Add in some very fast character introductions here and there, and that is all there is... The text has some big issues to work out as well... Thus far, I'm not all that impressed, as nothing really sticks out yet as unique... With the cliché story setup and a few over the top characters, I'm not really sure about this one... It almost feels like it plans to focus on being a porn fest, rather then having good story telling... But it's also very early into development... I went ahead and posted my review...

Zip
 

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Hello, thanks for the feedback. I am still working on the script actually. The outlines of the story and fundamentals is set but developments will be exchangeable according to requests and feedbacks. This means I might add some fetishes in the future. But there is no 'ntr' planned in my storyline.
cool, no NTR, excellent, i like you.

I suggest btw if you are wanting to make this an incest game, or to add fringe stuff like beast or whatever, because of patreon and their rules, to make a seperate patch that enables it and post it here and not on patreon. The patch that is. if you are wanting to do that, and you do not know how to do it, i am sure someone around here can tell you how to.
 

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I thought I'd give this initial release a go, but there isn't much content yet... It seems to be following a highly used initial pattern of a very quick introduction, followed by a quick "accidental" perv scene, followed by a fast paced sex scene... Add in some very fast character introductions here and there, and that is all there is... The text has some big issues to work out as well... Thus far, I'm not all that impressed, as nothing really sticks out yet as unique... With the cliché story setup and a few over the top characters, I'm not really sure about this one... It almost feels like it plans to focus on being a porn fest, rather then having good story telling... But it's also very early into development... I went ahead and posted my review...

Zip
Hello, thank you for the review.
There was a few comments from others too, so I want to explain that this is not an incest story actually. As the story tells, they are not related, but I think I will do a patch for that too, so if someone wants to think it as an incest story they can with the patch.

As for the story development, (please ignore mistake I'll fix it) you are right I understand it seems rushed, I just wanted to release a demo as soon as possible and wanted to show everything in it. Now I think that was a mistake but I really don't plan to make it a porn fest. This game will be highly story based with secrets and schemes you'll have to deal with, and suprising endings all different from each other. I hope you revisit in the next versions and find a chance to review it again.
 

Zippity

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Hello, thank you for the review.
There was a few comments from others too, so I want to explain that this is not an incest story actually. As the story tells, they are not related, but I think I will do a patch for that too, so if someone wants to think it as an incest story they can with the patch.

As for the story development, (please ignore mistake I'll fix it) you are right I understand it seems rushed, I just wanted to release a demo as soon as possible and wanted to show everything in it. Now I think that was a mistake but I really don't plan to make it a porn fest. This game will be highly story based with secrets and schemes you'll have to deal with, and suprising endings all different from each other. I hope you revisit in the next versions and find a chance to review it again.
When you feel your VN/Game has been fixed up and is more prepared, send me a PM about re-visiting it, and I'll give it another go... Best of luck...

Zip
 
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