VN Others Abandoned Gap Year [Ch. 1] [Captive Martian]

[User_23654]

Overview:
Maggie lost her home, money and scholarship.
Now she only has twelve months to pay for college!​

Updated: 14-01-2018
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Version: Chapter 1
OS: Windows
Language: English
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[User_23654]

Edit: Finished the Tags and Genre.

 

[Silveri]

Quite interesting art style. I kind of like it. Ch1 is short, more like just intro. Dialogues are too slow for my taste (you can't change textspeed). I will keep looking for this if he continue it soon...

 

[xןʞ]

Tyranno lolololololol.

 

[Dole]

Do you know something I havent read as I make the topic in req or why you have put the Game onhold?

 

[Alexander Krisnov]

Maggie lost her home, money and scholarship.
Now she only has twelve months to pay for college!​

Now maggie has to do sex stuff cause this is a renpny game and thats what basically happens.........this is some vague ass intro to a game

 

[xןʞ]

Maybe it is a VN about her adventures as a part time retail worker you ever thought of that huh?

 

[User_23654]

Do you know something I havent read as I make the topic in req or why you have put the Game onhold?

Look at his Patreon, the dev paused the campaign till april, but when he is releasing a update the onhold will be deleted from this thread.

 

[hopeless]

Why always refering to "Romanian"? Wtf is this for a crazy fetish? i don't like the redhead too..

 

[Kaidman]

I will keep an eye out for this one

 

[ShocLite12]

I just want to flick away the boyfriend just because I saw him.

 

[Bagger288]

Quite interesting art style. I kind of like it.

It's oversaturated. I'm not opposed to the art style concept or the models, but that particular filter drives me away.

 

[Dole]

Look at his Patreon, the dev paused the campaign till april, but when he is releasing a update the onhold will be deleted from this thread.

I looked the third time and I see nothing.

 

[Squark ⚧❤️]

Marcus looks like he's already planning to pimp Maggie out.

The model itself isn't bad, it's just her clothes look heavily cel-shaded. And her arms. And the little bit of waistline on display.

 

[Joe Steel]

Not enough here to be worth downloading, IMO. This is a long introduction with one choice, and the sex scene is just meh. It could be good at some point, but this isn't that point.

 

[eosar]

Lesee, the MC looks like she's fresh out of a Racoon Corp experiment, the friend looks like a blown-up barbie doll, the father looks like a pedophile priest and the boyfriend looks like the douchebag in a zombie flick whom everyone wants to bite the dust, yet keeps surviving for some inane reason.
Can't wait to hate it!

 

[bas]

Lesee, the MC looks like she's fresh out of a Racoon Corp experiment, the friend looks like a blown-up barbie doll, the father looks like a pedophile priest and the boyfriend looks like the douchebag in a zombie flick whom everyone wants to bite the dust, yet keeps surviving for some inane reason.
Can't wait to hate it!

Dude - you spelled "love" wrong.

 

[JadeKitten]

writing is not bad surprisingly but no content yet, just a forced lesbian scene (bleh)

 

[Zippity]

Look at his Patreon, the dev paused the campaign till april, but when he is releasing a update the onhold will be deleted from this thread.

Well, payments for the Patreon campaign are paused until 1 April 2018, but that doesn't necessarily mean the author has stopped development... Who really knows...

But in any case, I think this visual novel/game shows a lot of potential... It is visually creative and unique, with a mix of traditional visual novel and comic book style... I hope it eventually continues production and we get to see where it goes from there... I went ahead and reviewed it, even if it's on hold...

 

[barrybluejeans]

The dad kind of looks like Eric Bischoff.