2D gemmaline - a cute new character!

[999cyn]

hello everyone! :3

i am new here, and wanted to show off a character i made.
i was wondering if anyone had any feedback on my artstyle or suggestions about character traits or possibly story development?
the style is somewhere in between pixel art and oekaki-- somewhat unfinished looking, good enough for a visual novel maybe.

name: gemmaline
pronouns: she/her
age: 22



and here is the background alone

 

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I didn't know that elves have short hair. I think if you give her long hair and make it silver it will be much better. Also, why doesn't she have eyebrows? The background is good.