VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Ghost Revenge [Ep. 1-4] [Adults city]

The models are attractive, but the plot is barely coherent -- a bit like trying to understand a book by reading every fourth page. In places, the Engrish manages to plumb new depths of ineptitude from which the use of a basic spellchecker could save it.

Two stars for the models.

I should give you a 2 star for putting a total failure state in at the point where you either "do nothing or slap her", and putting choices where you only have one choice. But the female models are very nice looking and the animation in the sex scenes is good, so I will ignore it. Story wise this game has a weird plot and the sex scenes are shoehorned in without any buildup.

Player investment: 2/5
Fappability: 4/5

Keep working on it, would like to see more.

It a nice start i'd say. Love the models and renders of all women so far
The texts are bad, but dev already knows it and is trying to fix the issues.
Story seems ok so far, but yet too small to say anything more...
Lesbian incest is best!

Owerall i liked what i've seen so far a lot!
Wish dev good luck with his project and can't wait to see more!