- Apr 18, 2018
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While I definitely like the premise of this game, it feels a lot more like a 0.01 than a 0.1.x. You might want to get someone that can proof-read your text, as the poor grasp is probably systemic since the variables have the same typos and such. I realize you might not be a native English speaker, but neither am I, and I do think that if given a bit of time and some motivation, I'd be able to get something at least typo-free (not really gonna claim perfect grammar, I'm not that delusional 
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All in all, reasonable start, slightly sloppy execution text-wise. The pics/gifs/vids ... A bit sad you went the borrowing route, as most of the stuff now feels "old", since most of it I'd seen before....
)All in all, reasonable start, slightly sloppy execution text-wise. The pics/gifs/vids ... A bit sad you went the borrowing route, as most of the stuff now feels "old", since most of it I'd seen before....
Broken :
money - i see "$money" - and i cant earn or buy
clothes - they just disappeared in home...
morale - some activity should rise it but they reduce - like swim
... i cant play longer to buged
money - i see "$money" - and i cant earn or buy
clothes - they just disappeared in home...
morale - some activity should rise it but they reduce - like swim
... i cant play longer to buged
@Whyllow I don't have someone to proof read my text, but I will try to fix the spelling errors. Yes I did get the problems with the images. It's pretty high on my priorities
@cd-rw sorry about that. I am working on fixing the bugs
As for the clothing disappearance it might be the fact that the corruption decreases with one every night and at some point the character will not want to dress them. It was a poor design choice and I will think of a way to fix this.
@cd-rw sorry about that. I am working on fixing the bugs
As for the clothing disappearance it might be the fact that the corruption decreases with one every night and at some point the character will not want to dress them. It was a poor design choice and I will think of a way to fix this.
I never claimed to own anything. Nor am I hating on the developer.
I just claimed to rightfully have spent a shit ton of time (and I'm not talking about a few hours) cutting and pasting away watermarks and cutting and pasting downloaded video's I searched for on the web into small snippets to fit my game. I spent all those hours & days cutting them at the exact right second or centi-second. When you see all that time suddenly copied and pasted into a new game without a simple email asking if it is okay even if I don't own the stuff isn't very nice. I never grabbed any content from anybody, I think it is common courtesy. Guess I'm old fashioned.
Edit: All I ever did was to copy some initial code from a game that was no longer supported when I started out to create my game.
Anyway I felt like I had to speak up as it hurt a little seeing all that work copied. This will be the last I'll say about this. BlackKnight6666 has pm'd me and I've responded and helped him/her with some question(s). So we are all good.
Have fun all playing this game. The more games like this the better.
BurningSun
@BurningSun To me, the main thing is that when videos are copied from other games all of them begin to just blend together. I've tried many of these Twine games and often run into "Oh, it's this scene again...". It's a pain in the butt to get all the images (I started up one of these awhile ago), but it's pretty important.
So many girl life games....
...and yet how many are fully complete :/
I love this kind of game but you should add son(birth) or let us to be mom at the beginning and remove the 'morale'
- Apr 4, 2018
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Game is pretty alpha stage.
This just needs more time to develop. This shouldn't have been released yet IMO. Why would people play this and not Girls life when set to school girl mode? I don't see one.
- Economy is broken.
- Sandbox... so there basically is no story.
- No character growth...
- Bugs, like loading saves and resetting holds over variables when you do not reset the browser.
- Rape, that is a throwaway. It's not pleasuable for her, which I respect. Saying that, The rape doesn't feel like it has lasting importance. It's like a drunken fuck that you regret in the morning, but you get over it almost instantly. Better than potraying women enjoying rape at least.
- Not enough actions in game yet to do pretty much anything. Can't go to bar and hit on dudes, cant get laid at all in this version without it being rape.
This just needs more time to develop. This shouldn't have been released yet IMO. Why would people play this and not Girls life when set to school girl mode? I don't see one.
The majority of free porn out there that you can find on pornhub or whatever are free because those websites purchase the rights to them and make money off of ads. Others are the companies themselves putting out edited versions of videos in an attempt to attract people that want to see the whole thing. And with using them in short clips with writing that usually has nothing to do with the original scene and is transformative in nature, we may even consider these falling under fair use. Either way, @BurningSun clearly has the right to complain about this situation if he was the one that cut all of the clips for his game. Just like how game developers shouldn't steal each others' codes, they also shouldn't steal any other work they've put into their games. 99% of the ren'py games on here uses the same Daz 3D models for their games, it doesn't mean they're lifting the exact image from each other.
With that said, I'm glad the authors talked and the situation is resolved. I really like these twine games that use porn clips to augment good writing. We need more of these seeing as how most get abandoned shortly after conception.
With that said, I'm glad the authors talked and the situation is resolved. I really like these twine games that use porn clips to augment good writing. We need more of these seeing as how most get abandoned shortly after conception.
I've developed a big interest in these kinds of games recently- I'm excited to see another one in the works, but I hope this one can actually see completion. I love the ENF genre, so the game's preview image already looks promising to me!
[Q
how do you change the variables? i can only get it to display the variable but i cant edit it
how do you change the variables? i can only get it to display the variable but i cant edit it
@Axina: it will be added some time in the future
@loser69: sorry about that. I already fixed some issues and an update will be online in a few days
@chrisdraconis: the character picture is the one you selected, the "corrupted" picture it's only one girl and yes, she is blonde
@XJ347: resetting holds over variables is fixed and will be available soon. I don't understand what do you mean by the other issue. I didn't encounter any problem when loading the game. Can you please describe it?
@loser69: sorry about that. I already fixed some issues and an update will be online in a few days
@chrisdraconis: the character picture is the one you selected, the "corrupted" picture it's only one girl and yes, she is blonde
@XJ347: resetting holds over variables is fixed and will be available soon. I don't understand what do you mean by the other issue. I didn't encounter any problem when loading the game. Can you please describe it?
- Sep 28, 2017
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May I ask what's your plan for public version releases? Do you plan to release it a fixed time after patreon, a certain number of release behind, only keep it as a demo and not touch it once it's bug free?