HTML Abandoned Girl in the City [v0.1.5a] [BK Games]

[3xpurt]

I've only had a short time to look at this game, but right I came across an issue with the safe workout and swimwear blocking entry to the gym. Also, no ability to remove clothing items once equipped. Not being able to quit your job until you get the phone is a bit odd, but I guess that's because there are no actual work locations currently. It seems odd to me that different starting options have access to buy different clothing types (eg, students can only buy safe, but 'making money' has access to sexy and normal clothing), and why aren't there any actual default clothes. Same goes for the laptop, why doesn't every start have the option to use the web chat or watch porn on the TV; surely a student can go to the beach?

My suggestions would be to unify the starts, and keep it sandbox as possible. Change the start options to a difficulty setting, and make that change starting funds and other variables, but allow players full access to all paths with a single character.

 

[bsjfan69]

HTML corruption games are always good (as long as they're not from tfgamesite) so looking forward to this game's development!

 

[Breedy]

In my opiion pregnancy should not lead to game over. Pregnancy is a part of life, and it would be nice to have some nice Pictures of Girls with swollen bellys. Child - birth and rising would ne a nice Addition to the game.
Maybe you can add some more volouptuous Girls to the selection of really beautifull Girls.
All in all it is a really nice promising game, keep it up.

 

[kansasdude]

how do i get a job?

 

[BlackKnight6666]

@TyronTheButcher 10x for the feedback. I will work on balancing the game. I hope it will take much less than a year to fix the issues and add new videos and content that will make it different from other games

@picobyte hmmm I will look into it. 10x and sorry for the inconvenience;

@Dillp 10x for the feedback.
1. I don't want to drop thirst, but I will add more places to drink and probably some water bottle to carry with you; when I added thirst I put it there so It can become 0 in ~ 1 day and then you can set to drink water at the beginning of the day. But in some cases it probably drops quicker than I expected.
2. I will add more options to increase corruption in the future. I also wrote down all you said
3. It will be implemented in a future version, now it's not. I plan to make the boyfriend corrupt you, save you etc, but it will take a while
4. They don't have any effect now. I plan to add some soon.
5. hmmm actually I only put the laptop for webcam, but watching porn on it it's a good idea I will add it.
6. I will add more effect for rape in the future. I will think of a way. Decreasing morale and health more it's an idea, but I will have to think of something more. I mean I already had a lot of complains about health and morale dropping to fast it.

@3xpurt you have to buy the clothes and then equip them (swimsuit for pool/beach and fitness clothing and fitness shoes for fitness). If that doesn't work it might be a but. I have tested it and it works, but problems can still occur in some different conditions that I haven't thought of.
You can't remove clothing at the moment. It will be possible in the future.
You can quit your job if you have a phone.
You can access all the clothing by any start, but you start with different corruption levels. And What clothing you can buy is dependent on your corruption level. Also you have more options once you become more corrupt.
The default clothes will be visible in the next version (V0.1.5x).
With TV and Laptop it's the same thing. You need to be more corrupt.
I should made more clear how the game works. Sorry about that. I will have to think of a way to do that, just don't really know how.

@bsjfan69 10x. This game is not from tfgamesite, but what do you mean by that (you made me curious).

@Breedy yes it should not. And I will improve on that in the future. The problem is that I have to find videos and images so I can implement pregnancy and now I don't. Pregnancy and child birth will be added at the later date, but not soon.
I can add some more voluptuous Girls in the future. That's not actually hard. It's just the starting picture.
10x

@kansasdude Outside -> City -> Job Rectuitment Agency. And you can "Go to work" from home.

@All I made a discord channel, so if you want you can join there and move some of the discussions there.

 

[3xpurt]

@BlackKnight6666 Thanks for the reply. The issue is probably trying to work out how to build corruption on those zero corruption starts. Assuming that people stripping you in public increases corruption? Maybe hide things like the web cam before certain corruption levels, or add some other ways to help with the grind. Things like beach seem to be a bit odd to hide unless corrupt, as that's a great way to get started corrupting.

The athletic wear is a big buggy, sometimes it works for me, other times it doesnt. Running in the park works all the time, but gym keeps telling me I don't have suitable clothing.

 

[BlackKnight6666]

@3xpurt Yes stripping in public increases corruption. Yeah, making beach available from the beginning it's probably a good thing and I will do it in the next version. I will add more ways to corrupt. I will look into the gym thing.

 

[JamesWhisky]

I'm probably just stupid and missing something but I seem to have to wait a life time just for the game not to load. I really want to try the game but I cant wait 20 mins for a game to start maybe...

Dude what web browser are ya usin? I have similar problem on opera and on the chrome it was a bit inconsistent but on mozzilla it runs like hell. Try change browsers and if you re playin on IE then god bless your heart cos you can wait for 2days with no hope. IE just keep openin the popups and freezes.

 

[Jorenthar]

So do I raise corruption just by walking? Cuz im really lost

 

[BlackKnight6666]

So do I raise corruption just by walking? Cuz im really lost

Walk if you get undressed on the street), watching porn on tv, the obvious sex related stuff, getting raped. Also if you start with the first option will already have 50 corruption and it will be easier.
If you start with "lost everything" you are not corrupted , but you will have a lot of actions available because you are desperate. But it's way harder that the other options.

 

[Moz69]

with the university start so its doable. but the morale bug when watching normal tv and the loop in shower masturbate i still found. rising corruption and especially the sex xp is a tough one atm (since there are alway max caps for an action and you need another one but i think thats good).

another thing i dont like when your Corruption goes below 99 you cant work as prostitute ... youll have to use gh before. you should lower that to idk maybe 91 or lower when you still worked it (probably 80 when it was still worked) would make things smooter.

just a lil feedback

 

[BlackKnight6666]

@Moz69 10x. I will work on tweaking corruption (and other variables).

 

[Tarkin Tarhely]

To the developer, just out of sheer curiosity:

Why did you develop a html game, that runs windows only?

As I looked the code, there is no hope to deploy this game ever on the internet, not to mention use it on mac or linux, without at least a week of tedious human work. The first broken image I looked up (chracters/Blonde.jpg) was generated from game text and built by js program, so automatically changing links to real (case sensitive) file names does not seem to be possible.

 

[picobyte]

patch to allow changing clothes in the mall (when you don't have a home)

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[BlackKnight6666]

@Tarkin Tarhely I can't test on a linux/mac machine and I don't know the requirements to make them work on other OS. If someone will point them to me, I will try to make the game compatible with mac/linux and deploy over the internet.

@picobyte 10x

 

[Tarkin Tarhely]

@Tarkin Tarhely I can't test on a linux/mac machine and I don't know the requirements to make them work on other OS. If someone will point them to me, I will try to make the game compatible with mac/linux and deploy over the internet.

I would advise you to use python (python3) for testing. It comes with lots of other goodies, it is a complete but easy to install programming language. Among others it has a built-in webserver.

A tutorial:

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Twine, which you are using, does not have server side scripting, so this approach will suffice.

There are lots of free windows web servers out there. But they tend to try to trick you into buying something, spy on you, or just simply not work. Python is a safe established choice. A little bit of overkill for this task, but couple of megabytes do not hurt.

You might have easily python already installed on your desktop without your knowledge btw.

btw2: If you always use lowercase url-s and lowercase filenames, then everything on unix/linux/mac will be working just fine.

 

[BlackKnight6666]

@Tarkin Tarhely 10x. I have python installed, I learned some python some time ago. I'll try that, making this work on multiple platforms will be nice .

 

[JamesWhisky]

Dude this game is awesome so much hot chicks so little time.

 

[picobyte]

At least these have incorrect filenames:

images/clothes/cheeky should be images/clothes/Cheeky - in the Shoes store passage
Others can be best fixed in filenames it seems:

for f in {blonde,brown,brunette,redhead}{1..5}.jpg; do
  [ -e "images/character/$f" ] && mv images/character/{${f},${f^}}
done

mv images/homes/apartment images/homes/Apartment
mv images/homes/rent images/homes/Rent
mv images/homes/university images/homes/University
mv images/homes/villa images/homes/Villa
mv images/homes/none/ images/homes/None/

Edit: the images/homes/Rent requires additional changes, you can change these using the find and replace function in twine, search for '/rent' replace with '/Rent' (similar to other 'homes' Rent with a capital R is assigned to the $home variable somewhere).

 

[BlackKnight6666]

10x a lot. I'll try to solve this to a lowercase , but if not I'll change the filename. Anyway 10x a lot.