I really like how the story processing and our mc not straight up overpowered he needs to work hard for it and overall story is good renders would use some more work ,Li are hot and mc not behave like stupid sex retard brat ,keep up the good work my friend hope it becomes a success and I think you should upload more photos in the op ,the story is very good if people notice it you should work on a little marketing or something that people atleast give it a try they will like it