VN - HTML - Graduation [v0.1.2] [Devorny]

I loved the game, it's incredible!!! As a game translator, I've translated over 900 games and played many too, but this one really caught my attention. It's the best HTML I've ever seen, with lots of interesting features and a beautiful design.

Great Start! Eagerly waiting for more.

The paths are nicely defined. The UI is easy to use. Overall progression and corruption are paced right. I think the characters need more depth and should be made more believable; but it's not very bad.

hahaha, this VN is really funny, the dev took all the content from his previous work and put it in this other ridiculous vision, I mean, there are thousands of names, but for the dev the BBC bull must be called Darrien, hahahah, perhaps his worst nightmare, anyway, the previous telephone game had something beautiful, this copy is highly poorly written, talking about graphics is useless, images taken from the web. The most annoying thing is, the dev told us in the notes that NTR was avoidable, all false, once again Darrien fucks every woman in MC, reminds you of something from the past.

Really fun game, looking forward to next updates. Love the UI and flow of the systems, it has some interesting ideas even thoug the overall story is nothing new. I'd love to have an animated wallpaper for the phone if possible

Reviewing at 0.1.1. Game has a lot of potential to be something special. Hope the dev can keep it up and finish this promising piece of art. If I can have one word of advice, allow us to choose to still kick out the bully or if we let him stay. Other than that, excited to see where this goes.

This game is great. Everything about it is just good. I'm so happy that most of the Netorare story arcs are avoidable. Please keep going like this I've already turned my friends onto it, and I'm gonna back you on Patreon with another account real soon
Excellent writing
Excellent MC
The MC is not foolish or weak.
Excellent relations
Excellent user interface
Excellent ideas
Etc

Very good start of the remake, nice and interensting new mechanics in the game with good videos.

These ntr phones became two-edged sword, it needs to be innovative in approach and interensting to single out, but this is promising start. keep it up.

I had a great time with it, the addiction system has a ton of potential and I love the variety of characters, frankly my only gripe is that there isn't way more content. I'll come back for future updates

the best phone simulator there is and hope the online chat doesn't get removed.
it's just missing some tags like sissification and anal
really hope this one get completed unlike most of the others who remain abandoned

Another garbage phone game with forced NTR. Really not much to say about the game, it uses the same porn sluts in other games, the phone UI is clunky, and the constant interruptions with "tips" and "info" is annoying as fuck. There's a saying: show don't tell, and its the key problem here. Stop telling me all this stuff and just show it to me. Also, there's forced choices here, and there's some stuff that if you want to see or not see, well tough shit you don't get a choice here. Heavily overrated game with mediocre content taking place in a tiny phone screen. Very pointless.

I tried the game and played it to a certain extent, loved it so far, BUT the choices and MC feels stupid, when there is a dangerous guy in home they go to home first to save them instead of being a idiot staying because someone said so.

I like Netorase, swinging, incest and femdom and wide variety of fetishes but seriously the games feeling more forced towards netorare so far, i hope the devs will also include different paths.
I understand some people (maybe more then some) like the bnwo, but it's starting to feel racist with how the bully is always black.

Pros:
Fantastic set of cast/characters
Fast interface
Great point system for MC path
Innovative online feature
Clearly the devs are invested in making this with passion rather than just money grab

Cons:
Forced Choices
Avarage Story(could use some twist and turns)
Some fetishes feel forced

Overall a great game in making but it entirely depends on whether the devs will develop it for only people who pay and lean towards making how those pay want, or they'll develop it with a clear idea in mind and catering for all to play and enjoy.

P.S. The online sharing with all features feels epic and different, but i hope there is a option to disable, while I am fine with using it online but I feel as if i don't want it on my pc, just with some privacy and security concerns.

Immersive story and brilliant writing set the stage for a game with immense potential. Though content is sparse, the narrative depth promises a rich, evolving experience. Highly recommend keeping an eye on it.

Good premise, that's done a lot in lit-erotica, but really fun through the lens of a phone-based game. Great models too. Look forward to future releases and more content.

It's great that it's not just the the stuff back home but the MC has things going on in their current circumstances to that are building to some interesting futures.

I love the UI, sound effects, videos. Well written like the characters are very believable. I actually got that sick feeling (which i love) when i rang the girlfriend and got the noise effect, not many games can make me feel something like that. Now we just need so much more! you have a hit on your hands my man please keep up the good work. *experienced P-game enjoyer*

My 2 star rating is relative to the ability of the dev. Devorny is certainly competent at writing good characters and dialogues. There is a good level of credibility and realism. That is why the ridiculous hook of the NTR plot does not work. Obviously it would be easy for the MC to expose the antagonist and get him out of his family and girlfriend's life. He just has to show the direct messages that the antagonist sent to him ! His family and girlfriend would be appalled and would want nothing to do with the antagonist.

You could counter that oh the MC doesn't want them to know about his past with the antagonist. To that I say he can select wich text he shows, but even then how can wanting to avoid some embarrasment from his past justify letting a convicted drug dealer seeking revenge, enter his family and girlfriend's life ?

The suspension of disbelief is too hard because Devorny doesn't write the MC as an idiot. It's too hard because the whole rest of the dialogues and behaviors are realistic and credible.

It's like you forgive a dumb and fun action movie for being dumb, but if you have a smart story an incredibly dumb and unbelievable plot twist can ruined it.

From a personal taste standpoint, I dislike NTR through the bull. I like the teasing coming from the girlfiend. The bull is just a stuntcock for the kink I enjoy with the girlfriend. I like domination and humiliation coming from the women, not the stuntcock.

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I have edited to 3 stars because I think my 2 stars was too harsh

very high potential.
pretty good UI so far.

videos plays really really well and the audio for the phone calls in the game is very good. very effective mechanic and really well done game and story wise.

great start.

I'm impressed,
This game has 0 bugs in it. The dev explains the game very well, girls are hot and the story is already well developed.

The NTR is already present and very promising in this game, the fact that the "bad guy" is an old friend of the main character.

Loved it!

Looks like an excellent start I do actually enjoy this style of game coming around at the moment so that's a plus from me. Has great potential as long as it gets consistent updates I think it'll make a great NTR game.

looks clean the UI is clean.
good potentiel and can turn into a good NTR game.
some new faces than the regular ones used in such NTR games.
some good promises are made for the future so lets see how it developes.