I will give this a quick review for its first version:
The Art is passable but inconsitent, especially the mother between scenes and sprites. Also some sprites look weird too.
The Dialog feels clunky, the grammatic is bad but not extremely so.
The fading away of the characters one after another during a scene change is annoying,
There is no music which feels a bit akward.
The Basic Premise has potential but is nothing outstanding.
Now the most important topic: Femdom.
As far as this version goes you only get blackmailed to corrupt someone else so there really isn't anything there at the moment but we will see if that changes in the future.
All in all I would say this VN is not too bad but we will see if the Developer can improve their craft.
The Art is passable but inconsitent, especially the mother between scenes and sprites. Also some sprites look weird too.
The Dialog feels clunky, the grammatic is bad but not extremely so.
The fading away of the characters one after another during a scene change is annoying,
There is no music which feels a bit akward.
The Basic Premise has potential but is nothing outstanding.
Now the most important topic: Femdom.
As far as this version goes you only get blackmailed to corrupt someone else so there really isn't anything there at the moment but we will see if that changes in the future.
All in all I would say this VN is not too bad but we will see if the Developer can improve their craft.