Version 0.2.1 ~ (Feb 5th, 2021) Review and SUGGESTIONS...
It's a beginning, of sorts. A premise exploring the redundancy of time loops, MINUS all the fun, excitement, entertainment, and thrill of having unlimited resets in time.
The game is in early stages at this moment, and I can see the
potential in the premise, but currently, the only purpose is to grind,
grind,
grind,
reset, and
grind again.
The use of the most frequently chosen Adult Porn Stars for the women in the game is kinda sad, to be honest. About 3/4 all text-based "real porn" games have these same women, so offering it as "something new and fresh" is not gonna work. I HIGHLY ADVISE finding some obscure Turkish, Russian, South Pacific Asian porn models to replace them with.
THE GOOD: (projected into future possibilities)
- Solid foundation that could be expanded upon literally exponentially with stats, moment, etc.
- If the family scenes get developed, there's a better chance it will receive a much higher star rating from many players.
- If the modified/new/existing "H"scene interactions develop into PREGNANCY content, you will capitalize on that kink which so many of us on f95 go crazy over.
- The writing is not bad.
THE BAD: (taken with a grain of hope these will be fixed soon)
- Opening intro text has typos in the links and body of the writing, a few scattered throughout the game as well.
- Opening intro to the game has NO IMAGES and most pages as of this 0.2.1 version have "PLACEHOLDER" before and after text and images.
- Like I mentioned before, the women and videos/gifs are tried and true, but exhaustively things we have seen in countless other HTML games.
- The grinding aspect: Each time loop gives you stats points to distribute. This makes the first 10 time loops (each taking between 5-30 min) boring and repetitive... which goes with the premise and trains the player, but it seems to not alter in the least, other than a slight uptick in the quantity of stat points to distribute.
- A few things (Strength and Modifications in the lab) are not yet developed or implemented.
- Family scenes are placeholder images without context or... text...
- The cost of alarm clocks growing makes no sense in the long run. And having only 2-3 purchasable items in the mall is pointless other than to give the player 2-3 extra actions/moves per day.
I can see this growing. I do not mean to be negative or critical, but as the first review, I want to make it clear that this is meant to HELP the dev @Kaprikorn make the game better.
What I'd like to see: (my personal interests mainly)
- Family developed with interactions and choices for each person in the household.
- Workers/women swapped out and then the ability to make choices in the interaction scenes with them, including sex positions, internal, external choices... and female emotional and physical repercussions of those sex acts (happiness, pregnancy risk, anger, lust increasing, jealousy)...
- Expanded science lab to include various chemical formulas and experiments. I'm not talking LAB RATS 2 level obscurity and complexity, rather something more than just a 5% reduction of cost and 5% increase in profits.
- More rooms to visit in the house (with ZERO/MINIMAL time consumption outside of interactive events).
- Impregnation discussions beyond the one instance of "I'm gonna breed you!" that exists in the single interaction currently in game. This includes pill, condom, pregnancy discussion between the MC and girl. Have some reluctant, others eager...
I hope this HELPS.