Version 0.02 reviewed.
A short prologue about a college nerd who concocts an experimental energy drink and gives it to his friend and another schoolmate "for science". Unfortunately the tonic does not boost the girls energy, but it does boost their bottoms, giving the two of them very voluptuous asses.
Pros:
Not much, I'm afraid.
1- Both females are very cute.
Cons:
1- The story is not very well written and the authors attempt at artistic writing falls short. This style is hard to pull off and not recommended in an AVN. Just write a story and leave the artsy stuff for the pros.
2- The renders were very plain. The use of soft focus also didn't work for me and the lighting was off.
3- The audio effects were too loud and seemed out of place.
*There were no sex scenes to review.
Final thoughts.
Not much happens in this demo. The story shows some promise but the writing needs to improve quite a bit if it's going to engage the reader. The girls were by far the highlight so far and will be the games saving grace if the writing improves. I gave it two stars only because I liked the female character models.
Good luck.
A short prologue about a college nerd who concocts an experimental energy drink and gives it to his friend and another schoolmate "for science". Unfortunately the tonic does not boost the girls energy, but it does boost their bottoms, giving the two of them very voluptuous asses.
Pros:
Not much, I'm afraid.
1- Both females are very cute.
Cons:
1- The story is not very well written and the authors attempt at artistic writing falls short. This style is hard to pull off and not recommended in an AVN. Just write a story and leave the artsy stuff for the pros.
2- The renders were very plain. The use of soft focus also didn't work for me and the lighting was off.
3- The audio effects were too loud and seemed out of place.
*There were no sex scenes to review.
Final thoughts.
Not much happens in this demo. The story shows some promise but the writing needs to improve quite a bit if it's going to engage the reader. The girls were by far the highlight so far and will be the games saving grace if the writing improves. I gave it two stars only because I liked the female character models.
Good luck.
