Nice start for a possible great femdom vn, I really iked the story so far, though it is on the edge of "over the Top" at some points here and there. (It is not only the whip that makes the horse run faster for its owner, it is also the occasionally reward with sugar cubes and carrots here and there.. and every good leader who read her Machiavelli maybe should know that.)
But I totally like that basic idea of the mc being trapped in that gynocracy society in this story. There is lots of potential.
Renders/models maybe could have a little touch up here and there, but that is just a minor thing (like for example having a kind of lock/electronic device on collars, lighting here and there), graphics are really good.
Not too much content for now, but this is just a first initial version.
But I totally like that basic idea of the mc being trapped in that gynocracy society in this story. There is lots of potential.
Renders/models maybe could have a little touch up here and there, but that is just a minor thing (like for example having a kind of lock/electronic device on collars, lighting here and there), graphics are really good.
Not too much content for now, but this is just a first initial version.