V1.0
a rather sub par game. tagging it as a VN is sticking two fingers up at the N
the art is above average for this site but not great. it does the job.
the writing is, without holding back, crap. MC rides a motormotorbike.
i agree it is such an obvious mistake that is repeated but if the dev could not give enough of a shit to even check what they released, why give benefit of the doubt?
there are other moments that showcase a lack of communication between artist and writer (which is funny if it is the same person) especially in one scene where writer has dialogue telling a woman to look into his eyes, which the artist matched by having zero eye contact throughout.
the quality of the story is poor, as are the characters and the dialogue missed the plot altogether. it turned up at a different audition.
i hit no errors in coding and not once did i see the wrong name with dialogue.
at least it got that right. short and with a bit of an effort it could have been average, instead it's about as memorable as watching someone fish an empty lake
a rather sub par game. tagging it as a VN is sticking two fingers up at the N
the art is above average for this site but not great. it does the job.
the writing is, without holding back, crap. MC rides a motormotorbike.
i agree it is such an obvious mistake that is repeated but if the dev could not give enough of a shit to even check what they released, why give benefit of the doubt?
there are other moments that showcase a lack of communication between artist and writer (which is funny if it is the same person) especially in one scene where writer has dialogue telling a woman to look into his eyes, which the artist matched by having zero eye contact throughout.
the quality of the story is poor, as are the characters and the dialogue missed the plot altogether. it turned up at a different audition.
i hit no errors in coding and not once did i see the wrong name with dialogue.
at least it got that right. short and with a bit of an effort it could have been average, instead it's about as memorable as watching someone fish an empty lake