Ren'Py - Harem Idol [v2.0] [Akihiru Harem]

Review for v2.0
TLDR: This was a quick disappointment locked behind Patreon. Characters & character interactions are just bland. Translation is poor at best.

• Visuals 2/5: Not much to say. Basic honey select 2 renders/poses. Half of scenes has black screen as part of scene.
• Story 1/5: I would define it with 2 words. Boring & bland. There is no character buildup/backstory or anything, you just know everybody.. somehow.
• Technicals 4/5: Not much there. Game is as simple as it gets so at least there inst much that can crash/softlock. Should run on anything without issue.

Additionally: Enough content locked behind Patreon for me to deduct another point.

• 3/4 jobs are Patreon locked, leaving you with only one that gives you joke of an income. Saving grace is you can speed forward in Renpy, but still... why? (next best job gives 4x and then they jump to 100k+ territory? WTF)
• Skip mini-game ticket locked behind Patreon. Why even have it then? Just tie it to Patreon unlock.

Pros:

- I really like the art and character design. Kind of wish some of their chests weren't so.. inflated but still pretty good.

Cons:

- The dialogue is bad. Very bad. I don't know if the script was written by someone using a translator, but the first time you meet a girl the narration describes her as "him".

- The character interaction dialogue seems awkward, like it was translated poorly, or just written by someone who doesn't know what normal human conversation looks like. Conversations drag on and on, with the MC basically saying the same thing several times. It's nearly impossible not to zone out when reading.

- The game could use something fun to do... Like events that trigger in certain locations, a story, or anything. Rather than just: grind money, grind love, talk to girl, repeat.

Overall, the character design is good, but it needs a lot of work. I hope the developer doesn't give up on this game and continues to work on it. Maybe hire a script writer or someone to re-write the dialogue. This game has promise!

That "game" really isn't worth anything. You grind for deacades for barely anything. the Models are nothing to write home about and the story is non existent. Add to it that the English is unedited MTL (The genders in the very first scene are wrong.) you get a low effort cash grab.

Good waifu, I really like the game, but need improvement

Pros:
Easy gameplay, Have France translation, Cute girl and waifu, and BIG BOOBS !
Have a lot of girls, like it

Cons:
Grinding at least in the v2.0, the grind more reward, but still it grinding. and need more sex scene

I hope the dev remove the grind part, overall it's 3 star, need a lot of improvements