Pros:
- I really like the art and character design. Kind of wish some of their chests weren't so.. inflated but still pretty good.
Cons:
- The dialogue is bad. Very bad. I don't know if the script was written by someone using a translator, but the first time you meet a girl the narration describes her as "him".
- The character interaction dialogue seems awkward, like it was translated poorly, or just written by someone who doesn't know what normal human conversation looks like. Conversations drag on and on, with the MC basically saying the same thing several times. It's nearly impossible not to zone out when reading.
- The game could use something fun to do... Like events that trigger in certain locations, a story, or anything. Rather than just: grind money, grind love, talk to girl, repeat.
Overall, the character design is good, but it needs a lot of work. I hope the developer doesn't give up on this game and continues to work on it. Maybe hire a script writer or someone to re-write the dialogue. This game has promise!