VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Harem Incarnate [v0.0.4] [LenB]

Ok, the art is pretty. (Characters just need some noses)
Other than that it is pretty bad. The Ui is... Not good. The textbox is too low, and too over-designed in my opinion. Face expressions are a little weird. Also OH MY GOD, the text is just sooo bad. Like some senteses don't have periods at the end of them. I'm not the one to obsess over grammar, but, like, at least make sure that the text is not embarrassing to show to other people! The story is awfully generic, and the isekai part is so unimportant that I wonder why was it added in the first place.
I hope the game will get better, and if the dev was to fix a single(1) thing then I would prefer if that was text.

Oviously not much content for now it's a 0.02, but for what we can already see art is good/cute, the plot doesn't seem very original with the sister and mother thing but it worked (at least for me). Keep up the good work and regular updates i really see some potential here.