This is top tier writing. The characters are well thought of and intricate. However i dont like it. Not because its bad. Infact, i dont like it because of how good the story is. I'm an avid reader so if i wanted good stories i would just read a normal novel. I read avn for the intricacies leading up to sex scenes, not for romance or an intricate plot. That's literally the only reason i did not give this a 5 stars. If you want a good plot, with good characters and great humanized back stories with great sex scenes, then yes, this avn is for you.
If you are like me, the other parts of the story would probably keep you reading. i normally stop reading content when it doesn't fit what i want, but the story did keep me engaged even though i did not like it. The one objective critique i have is that i feel like the mc's behavior does not seem to be consistent. Her introduction made her seem like a hardass but then she soft from then on. And then she randomly flares back up into a hardass attitude.
If you are like me, the other parts of the story would probably keep you reading. i normally stop reading content when it doesn't fit what i want, but the story did keep me engaged even though i did not like it. The one objective critique i have is that i feel like the mc's behavior does not seem to be consistent. Her introduction made her seem like a hardass but then she soft from then on. And then she randomly flares back up into a hardass attitude.