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  1. 4.00 star(s)

    BulHul

    Pyksies releases another excellent text-based game stuffed with well-written prose as well as titillating and various erotic game overs centered around our protagonists being overcome by evil forces, putting marvelous emphasis on the corruption.

    It's a short but sweet horror-themed experience, well worth your time.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    hrt1

    Can now say definitively that Pyksies is my favorite porn game writer/dev. More good queer games! I would really enjoy a trans/adjacent focused game for obvious reasons, but cant wait for more from her regardless, especially in this new universe.
  3. 3.00 star(s)

    FlorpFlorble

    The game design and characters are on-point and I'm a big fan of the world being built here, the concepts are good. But it's a text based game and the writing just isn't there yet.

    - Paragraphs longer than five lines are harder to read. More line breaks of simpler ideas would flow a lot better. 10 line paragraphs are gnarly.

    - The text constantly double-talks and doubles back over itself. "Her hand - or rather, her lips." It's emulating coy speech patterns , I get that, but it's called 'correcting yourself' because you got it wrong the first time, and I'd rather a lot more descriptive lines correctly described things the first time. Too much garnish, not enough steak.

    - Extremely guilty of trying to write 'how writers sound', when the truth is writers who can sound like this can talk like this naturally. If you can't nail talking like this in a casual manner, then it's like hearing an American attempt an Australian accent. Author, if you're reading this; your words and your ideas are good. If you put less effort into writing this at a line-by-line level, it'd take a lot less effort to read it and be way hotter and more enjoyable.

    I'm putting this as a 3, but I'm also going to be following this series. This feels like an inexperience problem, which means I'm excited to be giving a future installment a 5 one day.
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    sickhuskie

    I played their previous game MERCANOID, and while it takes place in a completely different setting with equally different characters, the quality hasn't dropped at all! In fact it seems to have improved!

    My only complaint (if it could be called that) is in the fact that it's much shorter than their previous title, though it makes sense seeing as how this is a Halloween special. about 1-3 hours of content, depending on if you read everything that is presented to you.

    5/5!