VN - Ren'Py - He Maid Her Fall [v0.7.0] [Hangover Cat]

Good Images, eye cathing both males and females but need more masculine shape for the men characters.

My advice as a reader, please using one image for 1-4 short conversation, if too many word and using the same image for long conversation it will bothering the reader.
Keep it contrast between dark erotic and bright normal life.

My advice for image : The clock, used condom and pills.
Clock, when the sex is start, after 30 minutes, 2hour and go on, used condom how many men can ejaculate and how much the sperm in the used condom for example the image with clean no used condom at first and then two used condom on the bed and then 5 with two on the bed and 3 on the floor and then 7 and go on. Pills from blue pills, sperm pills, aphrodisiac, and morning after pill.

MC are dumb as bricks and utterly spineless. The whole setup is suspicious from the start and she just goes along with it while he watches without lifting a finger. Typical Z-movie tier writing. The artwork is wasted on this garbage.

I'd be hard pressed to think of a main character that I detested more. He has the backbone of a jellyfish. The story will be interesting to some, and that's why I'm rating it decently, even though this game isn't for me.

The story was so good I normally just unlock the gallery and watch the scenes, but I went back to read and man it's worth it. Honestly make me sick to my stomach thinking what may happen to the MC if he gets fully NTR'd, I am really hoping he wins in the end because legit a knot is in my stomach with how pathetic he still is at times. Should make the payoff all that much better though when he turns his shit around... hopefully

Strengths

• Writing & Storytelling: Strong buildup with excellent writing, compelling characters, and a gripping sense of corruption and intrigue.
• Atmosphere & Tone: Expertly set tone that feels ambitious, on par with larger scale works like A Promise Best Left Unkept.
• Visual Quality: High-quality CGs and animations enhance immersion.

Critiques / Minor Drawbacks

• Perspective Limitation: The option to only read from a single perspective is seen as unnecessary.

Overall Impression

A promising, expertly crafted experience so far, leaving players eager for the full release

Love the game! I always loved Hangover’s games and its really interesting when he decided to start a Mother NTR game, so far I’m loving the story, although I’m doing cuck POV only (I still saw the CGs) and my favorite is Leslie.

Waste of a great idea

This is a spoiler, but if you like NTR, you should read it to save time

It seems like a game where your mom gets dommed by your bully, but its not. Instead, your bully has erectile dysfunction and your mom becomes his dom. It seems like your bully's girlfriend is in on it, and faking her interest in the MC, but really, she's leaving him because he has dick problems

So in a way, this game is very different from how its advertised. When you play the MCs perspective only, you get only a small bit of mom-NTR. Most of the game is actually you dating your bully's girlfriend, because she's trying to make him jealous

Its like the gamemaker wanted to "subvert expectactions," but its just left the game not being very hot, when it could have been

Everytime it seems like it could get hot, it fizzles out. The best parts were when your bully texts you, especially with pics and vids of your mom. But that happens maybe once...Twice...In 2 hours of gameplay. The rest is talking to mom and grandma, and going on dates with your bully's gf

What would be hot for a game like this was just to do it right:
Your mom is hired as a maid for the principal. Her job is the clean the house and take care of his son. He preys on her, turns her into his slut, and torments the MC subtly but brutally. For the bully's gf, she should be in on it, and faking interest. The bully and his gf plan to make the MC fall in love with her, only to crush him later, for purely evil reasons. I mean, the game says he's a psychopath, so....It would make perfect sense

But it isn't what we get here. Im giving it 2/5 stars for now, because the presentation is good. Music, characters, all great. The level of writing is average, nothing bad to really say. Still, its extremely mild NTR and the other aspects are just boring, and its different from advertised

In conclusion, if you're looking for a humiliating game where you get momNTRd, you will be wasting your time. You will spend most of the game going on dates with your bully's gf. By the time the game ends, you'll have gone on lots of dates, kissed, gotten a thighjob, she sends you nudes. Cool, but I thought this was a game about a mom being turned into slave for her son's bully...It's only that 10%

I'm going to wait for a full release to leave my full review, but what is here already is spectacular. Great writing, great characters, great corruption, great intrigue.

Feels like this is truly building to the same scale as A Promise Best Left Unkept, and while I love the sillier, lighter-weight Hangover Cat stories, this is what I really crave. Can't wait for what's next.

Good buildup, great quality CGs + animations, as of the latest update I emphatically trust the dev to deliver what I expect from the premise. The tone has been set expertly, chapeau! The option to only read one perspective seems pointless, though.

Mediocre Art, Soap Opera story. Rollback is discouraged which sucks. Split perspectives are always boring, because it really boils down to "read everything twice so you can see how slutty she was actually being the whole time."

Idk I tried this earlier and declined to review it because it was new, and I hoped that it would get better... but it didn't. The lewd stuff is particularly disappointing, I can deal with a contrived story if the payoff is good, but it's bland. the limitations of the art become more apparent the more of the anatomy is visible.

Until the moment [0.4.5]
The game is breaking away from the usual NTR mold and creating a great story of corruption with broken people, the production is impeccable and the art is in the prime of the dev.

However, I find the mother's character very stupid with a totally avoidable plot, not to mention the inverted nipples... ew.
Also, 0 choices or control at the moment.
The other characters, on the other hand, are well-written and mysterious, and players become more interested with each update.

The story has been a bit of a slow-burner atm. This last update finally delivered a bit of more progress in the sexual/corruption development. Will raise the score if the story's pace continues to tighten up moving forward

HIGH quality cg and animation - 5/5

hot and seductive character design (Kate is really insanely attractive) - 5/5

profound and immersive character relationships (MTR to the bully ) -5/5

slow burn ntr bulid-up and storytelling that can only be seduced -5/5

It's a very anticipated work because it's a developer who has built up his inner work with other NTR works. It's very attractive even though the full-fledged sex scene hasn't come out yet.

this piece will be the developer's greatest masterpiece so the developer must put his heart and soul into this work

It's probably too early to rate this game, but i think it has a great potential, so here i am.
The writing, for now, is really good, the pacing is what you would expect from a good ntr game (slow burn), and the Mom Is very likable, in both her aesthetics and personality; as a mom ntr enjoyer i can't wait to see her getting sexually corrupted and falling in the hands of the bull.
Anyway, the game so far contains little more than an introduction, as anticipated, there is still too little content to write a real review, but i followed this dev for a while, he's very consistent and always gets his job done, so i'll give this game (for now) 5 stars, hoping that the author will give to this project the care it deserves

An NTR Mom with a good set up?! I didn't believe it was even possible, it's almost touching.
Jokes aside, the project is in early development, but it is very promising: the characterization of the characters is good, the mom is not a stupid little slut, but a strong woman that loves her son and would do anything to protect him; she tends, however, to be a somewhat too cumbersome presence over the boy, who, although considering his mother the most important woman of his life, would like to emancipate himself and find a girlfriend on his own. To further complicate the situation there will be Dexter, the son's bully, who, due to a concomitant series of events, will manage eventually to get his claws on the loving MC's Mother.
There is no sex scene yet (ver. 0.2.5) but the set up is well done and the tension is building up really well.
5 stars as an incentive to the dev.