Finally got around to playing the new version.
The beach date was so sweet! The second side quest was good. The main quest... felt way too short. Just as it seemed like we would finally get to fight Tenebris we reach the end.
Also, I see new floors got added to that cave. Are there any secrets to actually find there, or is it just a chance to farm some experience?
A feww typos:
1)
"you're" should be "you". This is the case for both the initial scene and the repeat.
2)
"it's" should be "its".
3)
Emilia's "Yes please." should have a comma after 'Yes'.
4)
"Feelings" should be "Feeling's"
5)
There should be a comma after 'Darren'.
6)
Not an actual typo, but this crystal changes its apeparance depending on the direction from which you interact with it. I recommend switching Direction Fix to ON.
And that's it. Looking forward to more floors in that cave and to kicking Tenebris's ass for real.