VN - Ren'Py - Heart Of Passion [v0.1.0 bugfixed] [Caylake]

Its a total playtime of about 30 seconds.
It is based off one the worst written korean pornhwas out there.
Dialogue is clearly a telling sign that english isn't the devs first language.

At least the older women in this game have a good model and renders. Most devs fail at this

Even for NTRs this is one of the worst ones out there.

Improved Version Landlord's Little Daughter (Manhwa)
I give this game a score of 5 out of 5 for the following reasons:
1: The story of this manhwa is very exciting and high tense
2: We have very good character development in this manhwa
3: The problem of this manhwa is that it is too dark, the developer of this game has solved this problem by adding a non-ntr path, don't get me wrong, I am an NTR fan, but the existence of a non-ntr path for It was necessary to prevent the feeling of depression and despair in this story
4: This is a game, but the manhwa is a vn
5: The writing is excellent and it will be excellent in the future because the writing inside this manhwa was excellent
6: Randers are great
7: The appearance of LIs is a combination of beautiful and hot
and etc
Thank God I didn't read much of the manhwa, so the story is not spoiled for me
And copying doesn't matter to me if I haven't read the full manhwa, the goal is to enjoy
In my opinion, the developer has chosen the best possible manhwa to turn it into a game
Another good choice would be Illicit Love

Pretty poor start.

Renders are pretty but the story is rediculously dumb and Engrish is off the charts as well as spelling errors almost seems like it was written by AI it's that bad.

Renders are nice and the main female LI is pretty so it gerts 2 stars but that's it.

the game is promising for now, I have many doubts about the future, none of the girls are particularly interesting, but to have a better opinion, we have to wait for the next update I think, I hope it will be more substantial, but I repeat, it has potential, my only doubt, I would prefer to have a more active MC, and cold.

So first a basic description of who this game is probably aimed at since it wasn't clear from the original overview:
Those who like playing as a beta mc, femdom, voyeurism, panty sniffing and maybe ntr.

Pros:
Renders aren’t bad. The lead female looks pretty good. Seems like she’ll be able to play a dom role well with the MC. The MC’s model doesn’t look like a total wimp or anything.

Cons:
No originality. Mainly this is a copy of a Korean manwha as a VN. (pointed out by several in the main thread and confirmed after finding it and reading the first few chapters myself. Maybe eventually they’ll make this story their own….
Language/story is awkward. Seems almost a translation of a translation.
The MC feels just too dumb, too immature and too weak. Is it really femdom or ntr if you’re working with someone who’s severely mentally impaired? That’s what this mc feels like to me. It’s easier than stealing from a baby kind of stuff. Since his model is decent, maybe in 30 or so updates of the story he’ll start to grow some balls but I wouldn’t hold my breath.

Oookay... So you play the role of a 18 years old wimp who apparently can't grow a spine and give a girl a piece of his mind when they ask for it, so the femdom tag is spot on I suppose. For those with this kink this may be enticing, especially later on when there's more content and the developer fixes blatant bugs like the CTD you get if you try to open the preferences page (hence the low rating). For the time being this is only a 15 mins intro with a couple of sex scenes, one of them involving your "best friend" giving you a handjob at home to make it up for how bad she mistreats you at school in front of her boyfriend, who enjoys bullying you.

The visual department is strong and this looks like it could turn into a nice story, too bad I'm not into this genre.

This game manages to build tension in every scene and leave the player guessing what will happen next. There is a lot of teasing and also an interesting cliffhanger at the end. It seems to be choice-based, so we determine the fate of the MC ourselves. The renders are and the general quality of the game is very high. Although there are some NTR stories with a (at the start) "loser" MC, the game always manages to incorporate original elements, to keep the player

I can definitely recommend the game and look forward to the next release, the game has a lot of potential.